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DoubleCoN

Such a good novel! Keep it up author! Going strong! Hoping when you finish you can release it on Amazon as a 3 piece novel! Don’t give up❤️

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Kayle999

Author you forgot to mention how much of a worthless braindead ret@rd stup!d the MC is in your Review. I mean I'm not asking for super smart wise cunning MC even a normal average adult thinking would be perfectly fine but no the MC of your Novel is so braindead ret@rd stup!d even a teenager has probably better thinking Process than Your braindead ret@rd stup!d MC

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Koyotie_V

Thought it would be a ghost story instead it is a gender bender with about a paragraph of being a real ghost in the beginning

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DaoistobFMJy

In the first few chapters, we should have been introduced more thoroughly to the ghost elements. The next part doesn’t make sense: the MC gets consumed by a soul fragment. Let’s give it the benefit of the doubt—if the fragment was from a higher-level being and the MC had no levels, or if he felt bad and wanted to help, it would have made sense. Since he’s a human from modern times and likely opposes slavery, this would have aligned with his character. What follows is the MC taking over the body and using it to level up. Once he reaches level 8 or 9, he heads to the city, which is a terrible idea since it’s stated that the average level there is 14 or 16—something he was informed of. Let’s give him the benefit of the doubt again, as he’s new to the world. Let’s skip to the city part. He is selected to implant "evi" into a noble’s home. Now, he does this, but you can clearly see this decision will come back to bite him later. Even early in the story, it’s obvious this is a bad idea. Then, he gets into a fight with his adventurer buddies in his male form because they recognized the scythe he was wielding—a weapon he had also carried while in his female form. He couldn’t even come up with a convincing lie about where he got the weapon, and things escalated into a fight. To make things worse, the scythe is a terrible weapon to begin with. Still, let’s cut him some slack; he's new to this world. Later, when he's in his female form and they go on a dungeon run together, they betray him for a noble, the same noble he had previously implanted evidence for. This betrayal will undoubtedly come back to bite him, but even before that, I was already frustrated. What do you mean he can only possess someone for 10 minutes? That’s ridiculous. He’s a unique ghost—let me repeat, a unique ghost. After the betrayal, he should have at least tried to fake being dead, as he’s a ghost who can phase out of existence. Once the group turned on each other, he could have taken out the leader, but no—he decided to go suicidal and attacked like a crazed maniac. Okay, he got betrayed, and yes, he’s still new, so I’ll give him some leeway. His soul getting damaged as a result makes sense. Then, he gets caught up in a battle royale with all the monsters in the dungeon, which is fine. It serves to showcase the world’s mechanics and gives him a power-up. He even plans to take revenge on his betrayers, but once he returns, he forgets about this entirely. Really? Then, he starts acting all edgy, but in reality, he’s just doing foolish things that don’t make sense. Let’s say you’re a ghost, you get betrayed, and you gain a power-up—when you return to the city, wouldn’t you scout in your ethereal form to gather intel? Maybe use partial possessions for information, rather than manifesting your physical form, which damages your soul every time you die. After experiencing that, you’d definitely avoid doing it again. Also, how is running faster than flying? That doesn’t make sense either. Then there’s the part where two people are using similar fighting styles and abilities, but no one questions it. Instead of acting smart, he joins the Adventurers' Guild and takes a mission to a church. Let me repeat—a church—and he’s a monster/ghost in a world where intelligent monsters are dangerous and killed on sight. This man sees the church, where a major quest is set, and thinks, “Sure, let’s go check it out.” Even before that, his skills were stated to be great, and as soon as he tries to join the guild, he attempts to skip ranks. That’s not a good idea—you want to lay low and figure things out first. Then, during a fight with the guildmaster, he shows off all his abilities. Some people should have recognized what he was, but apparently not. Later, he returns to the church acting carelessly again. Instead of thinking things through, he heads toward the church in ghost form and hits a barrier. Instead of reassessing or trying another method, he tries to break through the barrier, only to get caught by the High Priest. And this is where the plot armor comes into play. After making all these wrong moves, the High Priest gives him his true name—a name no one in the church uses lightly. How stupid are these characters? If you're a high-ranking figure, shouldn’t you have some common sense? Then, the MC is tasked with finding the necromancer, who is allied with a demon. He follows the necromancer’s hired goons to their hideout. Here’s another flaw: the High Priest is supposed to be powerful and has likely been in his position for a long time. He could have used his connections to deal with this issue, which seems like it could spiral out of control. Anyway, the MC finds the hideout, kills the goons, and discovers a sick child. He heals the kid by upgrading a healing skill, gives him money, takes him outside, and then goes back to fight the necromancer. This entire sequence with the child was unnecessary and didn’t add anything to the plot. Afterward, he encounters undead creatures, but they don’t attack him because they sense he’s also undead. At this point, he could have become incorporeal and explored the area to gather information, but no—he goes in guns blazing again. Once that’s done, he could have asked the priest for help, learned about the world’s common sense, and gained valuable insight—especially since he mentioned meeting someone else from Earth—but no, he doesn’t bother. When he returns, he finds the guild in a frenzy because the princess, who he befriended, has gone missing. Despite being betrayed earlier, instead of having any internal conflict, he decides to save the princess because it seems like a good idea. He finds her, rescues her, and then reveals that he’s a monster. In a ruthless world, he should have been killed or at least had a bounty placed on his head. It just doesn’t make sense. People from such a world wouldn’t take his claims lightly—they’d kill him on the spot. After escaping and reporting the incident, he saves the princess and then manages to upset the balance of power by angering the nobles. After all that, he binds an incredibly powerful summon, and instead of dealing with loose ends, he leaves them unresolved, gets his identity revealed, and earns a bounty on his head.

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GeneralDeFartos_L

A fun read with a simple direct writing style. No repeated descriptions nor any info dumps, and not even weird flowery words. A delightful light read. -------- The main problems: - Ghost novel, but author uses all his power to make the ghost irrelevant. [MC is a ghost, and is innately Spirit & Intelligence dependant in terms of stats, he also mainly has skills that use mana. Realistically, he should focus on building on his strengths and increase his ghost power and ghostly skills. However, Author rarely has him in ghost form, never focuses on building ghost power nor skills. MC raises stats equally. MC even now has a solid ghost body where he eats and drinks. What's the point of being a ghost? Now he's basically just a human with extra steps.] ;;;;;;;; - A very obnoxiously dumb naive MC. [MC is a 28YO Lawyer. Yet his decisions here are atrocious, he's not cautious and always shows off his skills attracting trouble, he doesn't think of his future nor how his actions or lack of actions mights affect him, his thought process is very childish and naive, he's careless, he acts like an inexperienced 10YO, he's so obvious in his lies, he's pathetic, his decisions and choices are not properly thought through and most of them are nonsense and bullshit] ----------- Honestly, I'm mainly dropping this story because of the second point. I don't mind the that the ghost part is irrelevant now, since the story is a light fun read. But the MC being like this is just insulting to readers.

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cyberdemonMCHV3

it is a really good book romance, Aventura over all 5.0 🌟

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Slofi_Meditation

Actually I was expecting arcs per arcs consists of 200 chapters he will spend in a body of any men/boy he possess. Actually don't want him to stay in one particular body but I do hope he will spend a lifetime on the body he possess until it grew old/aged.

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Musicology

It's supposed to be a possession like exchanging body to body. I don't mind time skips since he's a ghost he can jump from another body once the current host condition deteriorates. It would be nice if there's no administrator thingy and he only possess male bodies.....I don't mind 10 years later time skips I just want mc to cherish every bodies he possess.

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Rudra_Khatri

MC is stupid, just plain stupid. MC finds his body's sister is safe and there are a dozen or so over levelled people he'll have to fight to save her what to do? think yourself as a overpowered MC and barge in. okay hes's new to it, lets's not go to hard on him. A random princess who said hello to me is stuck in dungeon, what to do? Sacrifice my life to save her. A Powerful Ant Queen monster is going to attack the town, what to do? Of course I'm overpowered and immortal lets's go kill her? oh she can see and talk to me? whatever its's not like she can hurt me? oh she can hurt me? I'll still fight instead of running because I'm an idiot. And of course he had to get attached to the sister. I mean sure he wants to be free and go around the world. but okay, everyone can have that. Now that he has someone to call family maybe and he'll probably be in this kingdom for a while he should get some backing. Especially if the backing is the previous Queen and a Grand Archmage, but obviously MC would not take it because he wants to be free. So, he wants to be free? He should get stronger? not, he's gonna learn forging. Another chance he gets when a Duchess offers him to be blacksmith for them with good benifits but he still declined saying he wants to be free, but dude has a sister who ge wont't leave. Despite knowing he's in a world where nobles hold power, he wants to offend them at every point and not get backing of his own, not try to get stronger. Who was the idiot who sent him to another world ? I'm at Ch 177 and I'm dropping it. also the gender bender? seriously? Just make it a female character from the start if you wanted to do that.

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The_Boombox_Man

only novel that has kept my attention for over 400 chapters at a time I am fully up to date on the story and some of the issues I had with the mc, he has fixed, so the people complaining about it, like before chapter 300, don't have enough patience and only like perfect mcs with no character growth

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Mikmj
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This review is from someone that has read to chapter 1015. The start of the novel might be dissapointing to some because the MC possesses the body of a dying girl (Irene) and tries to fufill her last wish, but because he possessed her body now he has to eat and that the Mc doesn't kill. Both of these things get fixed in volume 1 (42 chapters) for anyone worried if it's like that for the rest of novel. Now for the actual review, I like the fact that everyone in the world possesses a system and not only the MC, that he learns blacksmithing and creates his own weapons and armor, that it isn't harem and that the feelings of the MC and love interest don't feel forced ( at least to me ) and that the side characters don't feel one dimensional. I'm not that great at writing reviews so I'm just going to say that this is a great novel and that you should give it a shot.

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1yr
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THE_SAVAGE_KITTY

congrats on chapter 1000 It has been a fun journey so far with hopefully many chapters to come :)

1yr
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Zepher_Catch

I got to chapter 39 before I had to drop this, writing quality isn't poor but it is close. To give an inference, the first person perspective is so bland it sounds like 3rd person. Fights are short and most parts skipped until tables are turned. Characters aren't fleshed out, story is forced, there is little detail about the world, and to world is also meh.

1yr
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Kandielord

honestly engaging. nice take on some classic stuff, but also unique still. the abilities and magic are well crafted. makes you want to explore and learn more about the world.

1yr
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CelestialAlcoholic

I read till chapter ~60 and I have to say that it’s a good book for starters with some interesting concepts. It’s easy to read and has a lot potential. Albeit I have the feeling that much of its potential is not used. I hope that it changes in the later chapters. I also don’t really like the personality of the main character, he seems really oblivious and easygoing. He is not really calculating and does everything according to the situation. All in one it’s a solid novel in general(as i said, I didn’t read long), but it’s not for me.

1yr
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Quiescent_Rumble

Interesting read but the protagonist is always struggling to survive. This is realistic but I don't read books for realism. Why should I keep reading about a guy who gets wounded, surrounded and tricked on a regular basis? Are there really people who enjoy such a thing?

1yr
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Russian_Ace

transmigrated as a gullible moron who does ghost things one time in an alley. he's like a typical goody two shoes mc who doesn't kill rapists or slavers, gets distracted easily and somehow falls for the same like 3 tricks on repeat over and over. the only way stuff progresses is due to the mc falling for some blatantly obvious trick whether it's trusting people he shouldn't, asking for help from people he shouldn't or letting people live that he shouldn't. despite being immortal and invisible he immediately bogs the story down by making some stupid soul promise to the first dead pretty girl he meets before he even has the basics of combat down. the writing is fairly decent but you'd have to wait until you get a chapter without the mc to appreciate it because he's by far the worst aspect of the story.

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TheGodlyFateFox

I'm on chapter 200 and i feel like mc is getting held back a lot by his sister. Him and Irene soul merges together when he saves her sister. I do feel like he uses her form too much and don't rely uses his ghost abilities. I feel like the ghost part has a lot of potential, but he fails to fully take it to his advantages. His most use ghost ability is possession and most of his abilities as a ghost is wasted.

1yr
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Joe_Sage

if you think this is just a normal isaki then you are wrong he isn't the first and he won't be the last from our world and he meets many of them it is likely he will never be the strongest but he is still stronger than any his lvl it is an interesting story anyone should try

1yr
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It_Is_Me_Ttt

Though, I already stopped reading, but I felt like I should put a review in case author decides to go through his reviews and see what he might need to work on when writing another book. First of, I say 5 star for update becaue I dont know about the update stability and there is already over 800 chapters. Every other aspects lacks so badly, the ghost design was written really properly. I mean he is a ghost but cannot see in the dark with or without a physic body. Him getting ambushed in dark by monsters/spirit like being or what that was in the first 40 chapters is weird. Cant remember all the reason why I stopped reading this as it has been a while but the writing skill about a ghost as a main charater needs massive improvement. What I do think is that author is wrote the character using the traits of a human instead of a ghost. Anyway, goodluck to you improving, I'm not criticizing here but I'm stating what I feel it lacked. I dont know of chapters past the 50s, so there might have been improvement. Thank you .

1yr
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M_Shaz_3A

good so far ... just started but I have a doubt he is a ghost then he should have psychic skills r8 to lift or move things??? will he have it in the future??? and I feel the plot is forced it could be more intriguing

2yr
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Clu3less

Is a novel about a ghost MC, except he does nothing ghostly after a while. Basically just a human with a couple extra abilities. Also, the MC is very dumb and it's a gender bender novel.

2yr
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Yoshitaka_Fukuda

This is a light hearted novel of exploration. Basically the MC was reincarnated into another world with OP powers/system. However the MC has no goals, except for author trying to make it seem like leveling is the goal. But this is not the case because he is average level for people his age. The novel basically goes on with MC exploring the world leveling up slowly and fighting opponents that nearly kill him but plot armor/god saves him multiple times. Most of the novel is a filler inbetween fights like learning how to forge and other miscellaneous useless stuff. It takes almost 220+ chapter for MC to even reach level 40. There are other reincarnations with systems on the same world. It would be better to focus on them as they would make a better MC.

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Everett_Munden

This is by far one of the greatest stories I have read on this site. Transmigrated as a ghost has some of the most ambitious worldbulding I have ever seen. A vibrant world that mixes fantasy and modern elements nicely. This story is filled with a ton of different characters from a multitude of different races, and the scale of the story continues to get bigger later on. I love the main character as he is very kind yet doesn't let people belittle him or his friends. Marcus feels like a character who is truly invested in the new world he is in, which for most Isekai characters is somthing we never see as most Isekai characters will act downright delusional when they get Iskaied. A character like Marcus was definatly a breath of fresh air for me, also him being a ghost is such an interesting story aspect!!! Finally, the dungeons, fighting, and leveling system in this story are all top notch. The dungons can be fun and exciting to downright terrifiying when they need to be. The combat in this world has both weapons and magic being both viable while both being ever expanseve on how there used. And finally the leveling system is consistent unlike in so many other stories where the main MC can kill a bunch of mobs and get level 3267 in a year. Overall 10/10 story so far...

2yr
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Adonhit
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Gender bender, terrible writing and use of the “ghost” concept. Full fledged soul being stopped by a mere fragment of a soul from a random dead girl. What a joke.…………………………………………………………

2yr
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DemolaShows

So far so good , a decent story and likable characters .

2yr
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Aadam_yusuf

this novel the world building the character and the battles, this novel is really something else and your novel. I now in ch 129, this first that I really hook up to novel this much

2yr
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UndeadBeing

You gotta be a special type of stupid to create a novel about "GHOSTS" but have him in a human form most of the time. The amount of failure that you have to pull just to screw up your whole novel by not even making use of the name... Like I get that you didn't want to write a good novel, but you didn't have to make it almost as terrible as those novels where the mc turns into something else but hates it so he instantly ruins it by getting a human form, Wait that's exactly what you've done here, you made a failure of a novel and now you use a human form because you had no idea how to write a novel about a ghost. Great job author, I try to be respectful to most authors but you just don't deserve it because you ruin your novel, make the readers wait through your terrible plot, and somehow find a way to ruin a topic that isn't really written about thus giving you so many different ways to write it. So for anyone wanting to read this, you might as well look for a different novel about a danny phantom at this point. I don't think many people here even read 1 chapter since this novel got the deserved 4.09 stars(Minus the 1 star I'm giving you) so for any of those poor fools thinking about reading this, don't.

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Duorbis

Hello, I have started publishing the story I have written for two years. I find your story very successful, like everyone else. Therefore, I was going to ask you if you could review my story and tell me your comments My Novel Duorbis: Collision of worlds

2yr
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Davidep

It started in a original way, with the ghost thing, the first ark is kind of cool though i find that continuing to use the male name when the other characters are think they are talking with a woman is a bit strange, it was still ok, but unfortunately the end of the first ark is also the end of the ghost part, after that he becomes human with a few special abilities. Wich is shame since there really aren't a lot of novels about ghosts. To boost that a few items that he finds are strong for humans, but they are almost useless to him yet they are considered powerful

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DoubleCoN

Such a good novel! Keep it up author! Going strong! Hoping when you finish you can release it on Amazon as a 3 piece novel! Don’t give up❤️

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Kayle999

Author you forgot to mention how much of a worthless braindead ret@rd stup!d the MC is in your Review. I mean I'm not asking for super smart wise cunning MC even a normal average adult thinking would be perfectly fine but no the MC of your Novel is so braindead ret@rd stup!d even a teenager has probably better thinking Process than Your braindead ret@rd stup!d MC

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Koyotie_V

Thought it would be a ghost story instead it is a gender bender with about a paragraph of being a real ghost in the beginning

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DaoistobFMJy

In the first few chapters, we should have been introduced more thoroughly to the ghost elements. The next part doesn’t make sense: the MC gets consumed by a soul fragment. Let’s give it the benefit of the doubt—if the fragment was from a higher-level being and the MC had no levels, or if he felt bad and wanted to help, it would have made sense. Since he’s a human from modern times and likely opposes slavery, this would have aligned with his character. What follows is the MC taking over the body and using it to level up. Once he reaches level 8 or 9, he heads to the city, which is a terrible idea since it’s stated that the average level there is 14 or 16—something he was informed of. Let’s give him the benefit of the doubt again, as he’s new to the world. Let’s skip to the city part. He is selected to implant "evi" into a noble’s home. Now, he does this, but you can clearly see this decision will come back to bite him later. Even early in the story, it’s obvious this is a bad idea. Then, he gets into a fight with his adventurer buddies in his male form because they recognized the scythe he was wielding—a weapon he had also carried while in his female form. He couldn’t even come up with a convincing lie about where he got the weapon, and things escalated into a fight. To make things worse, the scythe is a terrible weapon to begin with. Still, let’s cut him some slack; he's new to this world. Later, when he's in his female form and they go on a dungeon run together, they betray him for a noble, the same noble he had previously implanted evidence for. This betrayal will undoubtedly come back to bite him, but even before that, I was already frustrated. What do you mean he can only possess someone for 10 minutes? That’s ridiculous. He’s a unique ghost—let me repeat, a unique ghost. After the betrayal, he should have at least tried to fake being dead, as he’s a ghost who can phase out of existence. Once the group turned on each other, he could have taken out the leader, but no—he decided to go suicidal and attacked like a crazed maniac. Okay, he got betrayed, and yes, he’s still new, so I’ll give him some leeway. His soul getting damaged as a result makes sense. Then, he gets caught up in a battle royale with all the monsters in the dungeon, which is fine. It serves to showcase the world’s mechanics and gives him a power-up. He even plans to take revenge on his betrayers, but once he returns, he forgets about this entirely. Really? Then, he starts acting all edgy, but in reality, he’s just doing foolish things that don’t make sense. Let’s say you’re a ghost, you get betrayed, and you gain a power-up—when you return to the city, wouldn’t you scout in your ethereal form to gather intel? Maybe use partial possessions for information, rather than manifesting your physical form, which damages your soul every time you die. After experiencing that, you’d definitely avoid doing it again. Also, how is running faster than flying? That doesn’t make sense either. Then there’s the part where two people are using similar fighting styles and abilities, but no one questions it. Instead of acting smart, he joins the Adventurers' Guild and takes a mission to a church. Let me repeat—a church—and he’s a monster/ghost in a world where intelligent monsters are dangerous and killed on sight. This man sees the church, where a major quest is set, and thinks, “Sure, let’s go check it out.” Even before that, his skills were stated to be great, and as soon as he tries to join the guild, he attempts to skip ranks. That’s not a good idea—you want to lay low and figure things out first. Then, during a fight with the guildmaster, he shows off all his abilities. Some people should have recognized what he was, but apparently not. Later, he returns to the church acting carelessly again. Instead of thinking things through, he heads toward the church in ghost form and hits a barrier. Instead of reassessing or trying another method, he tries to break through the barrier, only to get caught by the High Priest. And this is where the plot armor comes into play. After making all these wrong moves, the High Priest gives him his true name—a name no one in the church uses lightly. How stupid are these characters? If you're a high-ranking figure, shouldn’t you have some common sense? Then, the MC is tasked with finding the necromancer, who is allied with a demon. He follows the necromancer’s hired goons to their hideout. Here’s another flaw: the High Priest is supposed to be powerful and has likely been in his position for a long time. He could have used his connections to deal with this issue, which seems like it could spiral out of control. Anyway, the MC finds the hideout, kills the goons, and discovers a sick child. He heals the kid by upgrading a healing skill, gives him money, takes him outside, and then goes back to fight the necromancer. This entire sequence with the child was unnecessary and didn’t add anything to the plot. Afterward, he encounters undead creatures, but they don’t attack him because they sense he’s also undead. At this point, he could have become incorporeal and explored the area to gather information, but no—he goes in guns blazing again. Once that’s done, he could have asked the priest for help, learned about the world’s common sense, and gained valuable insight—especially since he mentioned meeting someone else from Earth—but no, he doesn’t bother. When he returns, he finds the guild in a frenzy because the princess, who he befriended, has gone missing. Despite being betrayed earlier, instead of having any internal conflict, he decides to save the princess because it seems like a good idea. He finds her, rescues her, and then reveals that he’s a monster. In a ruthless world, he should have been killed or at least had a bounty placed on his head. It just doesn’t make sense. People from such a world wouldn’t take his claims lightly—they’d kill him on the spot. After escaping and reporting the incident, he saves the princess and then manages to upset the balance of power by angering the nobles. After all that, he binds an incredibly powerful summon, and instead of dealing with loose ends, he leaves them unresolved, gets his identity revealed, and earns a bounty on his head.

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GeneralDeFartos_L

A fun read with a simple direct writing style. No repeated descriptions nor any info dumps, and not even weird flowery words. A delightful light read. -------- The main problems: - Ghost novel, but author uses all his power to make the ghost irrelevant. [MC is a ghost, and is innately Spirit & Intelligence dependant in terms of stats, he also mainly has skills that use mana. Realistically, he should focus on building on his strengths and increase his ghost power and ghostly skills. However, Author rarely has him in ghost form, never focuses on building ghost power nor skills. MC raises stats equally. MC even now has a solid ghost body where he eats and drinks. What's the point of being a ghost? Now he's basically just a human with extra steps.] ;;;;;;;; - A very obnoxiously dumb naive MC. [MC is a 28YO Lawyer. Yet his decisions here are atrocious, he's not cautious and always shows off his skills attracting trouble, he doesn't think of his future nor how his actions or lack of actions mights affect him, his thought process is very childish and naive, he's careless, he acts like an inexperienced 10YO, he's so obvious in his lies, he's pathetic, his decisions and choices are not properly thought through and most of them are nonsense and bullshit] ----------- Honestly, I'm mainly dropping this story because of the second point. I don't mind the that the ghost part is irrelevant now, since the story is a light fun read. But the MC being like this is just insulting to readers.

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cyberdemonMCHV3

it is a really good book romance, Aventura over all 5.0 🌟

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Slofi_Meditation

Actually I was expecting arcs per arcs consists of 200 chapters he will spend in a body of any men/boy he possess. Actually don't want him to stay in one particular body but I do hope he will spend a lifetime on the body he possess until it grew old/aged.

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Musicology

It's supposed to be a possession like exchanging body to body. I don't mind time skips since he's a ghost he can jump from another body once the current host condition deteriorates. It would be nice if there's no administrator thingy and he only possess male bodies.....I don't mind 10 years later time skips I just want mc to cherish every bodies he possess.

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Rudra_Khatri

MC is stupid, just plain stupid. MC finds his body's sister is safe and there are a dozen or so over levelled people he'll have to fight to save her what to do? think yourself as a overpowered MC and barge in. okay hes's new to it, lets's not go to hard on him. A random princess who said hello to me is stuck in dungeon, what to do? Sacrifice my life to save her. A Powerful Ant Queen monster is going to attack the town, what to do? Of course I'm overpowered and immortal lets's go kill her? oh she can see and talk to me? whatever its's not like she can hurt me? oh she can hurt me? I'll still fight instead of running because I'm an idiot. And of course he had to get attached to the sister. I mean sure he wants to be free and go around the world. but okay, everyone can have that. Now that he has someone to call family maybe and he'll probably be in this kingdom for a while he should get some backing. Especially if the backing is the previous Queen and a Grand Archmage, but obviously MC would not take it because he wants to be free. So, he wants to be free? He should get stronger? not, he's gonna learn forging. Another chance he gets when a Duchess offers him to be blacksmith for them with good benifits but he still declined saying he wants to be free, but dude has a sister who ge wont't leave. Despite knowing he's in a world where nobles hold power, he wants to offend them at every point and not get backing of his own, not try to get stronger. Who was the idiot who sent him to another world ? I'm at Ch 177 and I'm dropping it. also the gender bender? seriously? Just make it a female character from the start if you wanted to do that.

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The_Boombox_Man

only novel that has kept my attention for over 400 chapters at a time I am fully up to date on the story and some of the issues I had with the mc, he has fixed, so the people complaining about it, like before chapter 300, don't have enough patience and only like perfect mcs with no character growth

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Mikmj
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This review is from someone that has read to chapter 1015. The start of the novel might be dissapointing to some because the MC possesses the body of a dying girl (Irene) and tries to fufill her last wish, but because he possessed her body now he has to eat and that the Mc doesn't kill. Both of these things get fixed in volume 1 (42 chapters) for anyone worried if it's like that for the rest of novel. Now for the actual review, I like the fact that everyone in the world possesses a system and not only the MC, that he learns blacksmithing and creates his own weapons and armor, that it isn't harem and that the feelings of the MC and love interest don't feel forced ( at least to me ) and that the side characters don't feel one dimensional. I'm not that great at writing reviews so I'm just going to say that this is a great novel and that you should give it a shot.

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THE_SAVAGE_KITTY

congrats on chapter 1000 It has been a fun journey so far with hopefully many chapters to come :)

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Zepher_Catch

I got to chapter 39 before I had to drop this, writing quality isn't poor but it is close. To give an inference, the first person perspective is so bland it sounds like 3rd person. Fights are short and most parts skipped until tables are turned. Characters aren't fleshed out, story is forced, there is little detail about the world, and to world is also meh.

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Kandielord

honestly engaging. nice take on some classic stuff, but also unique still. the abilities and magic are well crafted. makes you want to explore and learn more about the world.

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CelestialAlcoholic

I read till chapter ~60 and I have to say that it’s a good book for starters with some interesting concepts. It’s easy to read and has a lot potential. Albeit I have the feeling that much of its potential is not used. I hope that it changes in the later chapters. I also don’t really like the personality of the main character, he seems really oblivious and easygoing. He is not really calculating and does everything according to the situation. All in one it’s a solid novel in general(as i said, I didn’t read long), but it’s not for me.

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Quiescent_Rumble

Interesting read but the protagonist is always struggling to survive. This is realistic but I don't read books for realism. Why should I keep reading about a guy who gets wounded, surrounded and tricked on a regular basis? Are there really people who enjoy such a thing?

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Russian_Ace

transmigrated as a gullible moron who does ghost things one time in an alley. he's like a typical goody two shoes mc who doesn't kill rapists or slavers, gets distracted easily and somehow falls for the same like 3 tricks on repeat over and over. the only way stuff progresses is due to the mc falling for some blatantly obvious trick whether it's trusting people he shouldn't, asking for help from people he shouldn't or letting people live that he shouldn't. despite being immortal and invisible he immediately bogs the story down by making some stupid soul promise to the first dead pretty girl he meets before he even has the basics of combat down. the writing is fairly decent but you'd have to wait until you get a chapter without the mc to appreciate it because he's by far the worst aspect of the story.

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TheGodlyFateFox

I'm on chapter 200 and i feel like mc is getting held back a lot by his sister. Him and Irene soul merges together when he saves her sister. I do feel like he uses her form too much and don't rely uses his ghost abilities. I feel like the ghost part has a lot of potential, but he fails to fully take it to his advantages. His most use ghost ability is possession and most of his abilities as a ghost is wasted.

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Joe_Sage

if you think this is just a normal isaki then you are wrong he isn't the first and he won't be the last from our world and he meets many of them it is likely he will never be the strongest but he is still stronger than any his lvl it is an interesting story anyone should try

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It_Is_Me_Ttt

Though, I already stopped reading, but I felt like I should put a review in case author decides to go through his reviews and see what he might need to work on when writing another book. First of, I say 5 star for update becaue I dont know about the update stability and there is already over 800 chapters. Every other aspects lacks so badly, the ghost design was written really properly. I mean he is a ghost but cannot see in the dark with or without a physic body. Him getting ambushed in dark by monsters/spirit like being or what that was in the first 40 chapters is weird. Cant remember all the reason why I stopped reading this as it has been a while but the writing skill about a ghost as a main charater needs massive improvement. What I do think is that author is wrote the character using the traits of a human instead of a ghost. Anyway, goodluck to you improving, I'm not criticizing here but I'm stating what I feel it lacked. I dont know of chapters past the 50s, so there might have been improvement. Thank you .

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M_Shaz_3A

good so far ... just started but I have a doubt he is a ghost then he should have psychic skills r8 to lift or move things??? will he have it in the future??? and I feel the plot is forced it could be more intriguing

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Clu3less

Is a novel about a ghost MC, except he does nothing ghostly after a while. Basically just a human with a couple extra abilities. Also, the MC is very dumb and it's a gender bender novel.

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Yoshitaka_Fukuda

This is a light hearted novel of exploration. Basically the MC was reincarnated into another world with OP powers/system. However the MC has no goals, except for author trying to make it seem like leveling is the goal. But this is not the case because he is average level for people his age. The novel basically goes on with MC exploring the world leveling up slowly and fighting opponents that nearly kill him but plot armor/god saves him multiple times. Most of the novel is a filler inbetween fights like learning how to forge and other miscellaneous useless stuff. It takes almost 220+ chapter for MC to even reach level 40. There are other reincarnations with systems on the same world. It would be better to focus on them as they would make a better MC.

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Everett_Munden

This is by far one of the greatest stories I have read on this site. Transmigrated as a ghost has some of the most ambitious worldbulding I have ever seen. A vibrant world that mixes fantasy and modern elements nicely. This story is filled with a ton of different characters from a multitude of different races, and the scale of the story continues to get bigger later on. I love the main character as he is very kind yet doesn't let people belittle him or his friends. Marcus feels like a character who is truly invested in the new world he is in, which for most Isekai characters is somthing we never see as most Isekai characters will act downright delusional when they get Iskaied. A character like Marcus was definatly a breath of fresh air for me, also him being a ghost is such an interesting story aspect!!! Finally, the dungeons, fighting, and leveling system in this story are all top notch. The dungons can be fun and exciting to downright terrifiying when they need to be. The combat in this world has both weapons and magic being both viable while both being ever expanseve on how there used. And finally the leveling system is consistent unlike in so many other stories where the main MC can kill a bunch of mobs and get level 3267 in a year. Overall 10/10 story so far...

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Adonhit
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Gender bender, terrible writing and use of the “ghost” concept. Full fledged soul being stopped by a mere fragment of a soul from a random dead girl. What a joke.…………………………………………………………

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DemolaShows

So far so good , a decent story and likable characters .

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Aadam_yusuf

this novel the world building the character and the battles, this novel is really something else and your novel. I now in ch 129, this first that I really hook up to novel this much

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UndeadBeing

You gotta be a special type of stupid to create a novel about "GHOSTS" but have him in a human form most of the time. The amount of failure that you have to pull just to screw up your whole novel by not even making use of the name... Like I get that you didn't want to write a good novel, but you didn't have to make it almost as terrible as those novels where the mc turns into something else but hates it so he instantly ruins it by getting a human form, Wait that's exactly what you've done here, you made a failure of a novel and now you use a human form because you had no idea how to write a novel about a ghost. Great job author, I try to be respectful to most authors but you just don't deserve it because you ruin your novel, make the readers wait through your terrible plot, and somehow find a way to ruin a topic that isn't really written about thus giving you so many different ways to write it. So for anyone wanting to read this, you might as well look for a different novel about a danny phantom at this point. I don't think many people here even read 1 chapter since this novel got the deserved 4.09 stars(Minus the 1 star I'm giving you) so for any of those poor fools thinking about reading this, don't.

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Duorbis

Hello, I have started publishing the story I have written for two years. I find your story very successful, like everyone else. Therefore, I was going to ask you if you could review my story and tell me your comments My Novel Duorbis: Collision of worlds

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Davidep

It started in a original way, with the ghost thing, the first ark is kind of cool though i find that continuing to use the male name when the other characters are think they are talking with a woman is a bit strange, it was still ok, but unfortunately the end of the first ark is also the end of the ghost part, after that he becomes human with a few special abilities. Wich is shame since there really aren't a lot of novels about ghosts. To boost that a few items that he finds are strong for humans, but they are almost useless to him yet they are considered powerful

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