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Honestly, it's one of my all-time favorite stories now. It is a great mix of action, romance, mystery, and drama all bundled up in a sci-fi package. As someone who normally doesn't like sci-fi, just know that if you feel the same way, give this book a try you won't regret it.
The story's plot and character is nice. I like everything that's going on in the book. Nice Job👍. Please check out my book. I am an author and I write a book called "The Dragon Prince: Evolution of The Dragon Era". It's nice, and trust me it's worth reading.
Struggle, determination and ,trauma and so much more are what keeps the chracters growing and me coming back.
It has an awesome premise amazing world building likeable main lead and leveling system is somewhat easy to follow but honestly the romance is a major downside its constant its never feels like it adds to the story and while there is almost a romantic side in every arc the addition of monica has to be one of the most poorly written characters ever i wont add any more spoilers. It feels like it ruins what could be an amazing story about a characters self discovery and journey through space but what you end up with is the most surface level poorly written romance story
Haven't read much of it, just in 80 now, but I must say the story is really nice, the characters are lovely and the development of our mc is wild.A must try.
Fights were good. Background was good.Overall common sense was good. However there is just too much romance (new girl every 3-6 months). I didn’t think this would be a near rom com. Also the levels are confusing and powers are not explained that well.
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This book is awesome 👌 The story as well as the characters are developing great and described with much detail. Gramma is top and author is interactive with the community quite often.
Great story. Love the character development. I just wish the updates came more regularly. Would be straight up 5 stars with even 1 daily chapter regularly.
Eve is a masterful writer and his stories are unique and I love this book just as I did the last one. The world is unique the power system is extraordinary and not the same predictable type that many stories tend to have. The characters have depth. Good Lord the writing quality is top notch. I'm seriously baffled by the amount of hate because of the romance, though. But it makes sense since he can make the characters likeable and invoke emotions when things don't go as intended. I am also frustrated that he didn't stay with his soul mate but irl things like that happen. Also the story isn't even over! I don't expect Eve to leave the story unfinished like others tend to do and I'll read this until completion.
8 parts romance 2 parts story.Story started off really well, but eventually turned into a novel where MC turns out to be a flirtatious Alpha who can't keep it in his pants.MC joins the army but unlike what you'd expect, the new recruit is given an unlimited amount of freedom to do whatever he wants. It doesn't feel like the army at all and instead feels like a summer camp for teens with pent up hormones. Every new recruit in the army is thinking about hooking up with each other. There's no regulations at all.Up until the first new planet the story is pretty good. MC finds his soulmate and everything seems like as long as they can stay together everything will work out one way or another. Author does find a way to tear them apart though and what does MC do first once they're apart? Find another girl. The rebound was insanely fast. After that girl, he gets another girl, and once he drops that girl he gets another. This is all while comparing the new girls to the first one that he's still in love with. It's just a complete mess. The excuse was that he has his own urges and is really just looking for someone to satisfy them. It really doesn't help that every attractive girl he comes across instantly falls for him. I dropped around chapter 400 since it wasn't going anywhere else.
I don't like how this story is developing. The premise of the story should focus on strengthening and solving the mystery around Nak, but instead, we are getting too much romance. It feels like the author is trying to mix romance, sci-fi, mana, and mystery, but they have added an excessive amount of romance, making the whole story tasteless.
Well... The story is quite slow paced but it's still fun to read. The MC is kind of funny and has a good background.The world building is top tier, comparable to shadow slave's.The writing quality isn't too tier but who needs fancy words to enter battle with a shovel... lolI saw this novel on YouTube and decides o give it a try... so glad I did.There hasn't been a moment that I was bored or tired of reading... it was worth it.
To an experienced authors, I want some advice for creating a novel. How many word counts do I have to achieve in each chapter? Do I have to start in building my characters growth? Advice in having better world building development? Something like that. This is a respectful request, I want to create my own novel that both of us can enjoy.I am creating as a way for my passion to be a writer and what's better than to ask you guys. I am thankful for your kind thoughts in answering my concerns. Hope you have a good day fellow readers and authors.
I’ve read 26 chapters so far, but man I must say, this is one beautiful book! Update stability - 10/10 Writing quality - 10/10 Everything in this book seems logical and easily understood. Khan’s maturity at his age simply tells how brilliant the author’s mind is. His other work is also a testament to his superb writing skill. Don’t hesitate to add to your library. It’s a great 10/10 book!
Hay un poco de acción en tu romance. Este hombre cambia más de pajera que de calzon. Enserio, yo pensé en un principio que se iba quedar con Martha(tenian tan buena química)y listo, es momento de enfocarse en el resto de la historia pero no, todo al contrario. Si no saben escribir romance realmente no lo hagan, arruinan las historias.
This is not a scifi story its a Romance story that happens to contain scifi to be honest. The amount of romance our mc goes through is amazing he has had like 4 romantic interests so far that we have invested into for them to later break up the action is quite lacking its always romance stuff and political/goverment army things.
Godly Introduction awesome Writing always keeps my attention The underdog stories always choke me up
Too much romance. Even if Romance is a core aspect of the novel it’s too much. Half of the chapters is full of romance. Literally. word for word. You can even think of the tag “Slice Of Life” added to the novel. He basically betrays his race for some months of love and have to break up for some reasons. He sacrises ALOT.. and I mean ALOT of his time to have some time with his girlfriend which probably lasts some months before he has to break up for some “reasons” again. If the novel had romance like authors other work then it would be fine. But this novel is like 70% romance. I understand why most people quit before chapter 300+.
I'm not gonna lie. Was wishing you'd do another after birth of demonic sword. Lo and behold, "chaos heir". Awesome development.
A million girlfriends, new one every 3-6 months - Its the most annoying thing in this novel, ruining story for me. Does mc have nothing better to do? His loyalty is non existent, its a miracle he is still loyal to humanity and not a retard traitor like mc in Avatar or smth.
The only negative things I can say about the novel is the lack of world-building, the very frequent use of trauma, and how whenever something bad happens there's never someone stronger around to oversee and handle it otherwise the pacing of the novel is good and is very close to a 4 star. You know little about the setting of the novel among other things which I guess is expected since the mc lived in a slum most of his childhood with little education. Till now the author has been going on and on about trauma this, trauma that, and "trauma is my advantage" said by the mc. If it was a one and done thing where the 16yr old mc cried and got on with his life no one would mind the mc talking about his trauma that one time. But, the author can't help to bring up the mc's trauma and trauma in general at a every given opportunity to make the mc seem more mature, experienced, and hardcore than his other teen recruits. Using trauma as some crutch is getting annoying and cringe that I skip any paragraph mentioning trauma of some kind as it's tired, overused, and adds nothing but making the tone grim. Seems that the Global Army has little care for their recruit's lives as they seem to be frequently facing overwhelming odds that without the mc they'd otherwise all die from. Several times it'll be brought up that the mc is some hero that saved the day, but if had even one or two superior officers of at least 1 to 3 star strength were to oversee the recruits when they were conducting a potentially dangerous mission they could handle anything that's out of the scope of their abilities. Looks more like intentional mishaps and oversights just to create a situation for the mc to barely conquer in order to hype up his achievements/merits for the sake of raising his status in the military. Like if you thought the Istrone event was "tragic" imagine if even just a few non-traitor 2-star officers(like their professors/teachers) were there, as if they were the rebellion would've never happened and it would've been a normal training event where the mc would've squashed the competition.
A perfect novel, I love the world development about it the most and really great writing quality.Yiu did a good job eve.
Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be NTR in the work (I hope not), is the FMC Yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
Honestly, it's one of my all-time favorite stories now. It is a great mix of action, romance, mystery, and drama all bundled up in a sci-fi package. As someone who normally doesn't like sci-fi, just know that if you feel the same way, give this book a try you won't regret it.
The story's plot and character is nice. I like everything that's going on in the book. Nice Job👍. Please check out my book. I am an author and I write a book called "The Dragon Prince: Evolution of The Dragon Era". It's nice, and trust me it's worth reading.
Struggle, determination and ,trauma and so much more are what keeps the chracters growing and me coming back.
It has an awesome premise amazing world building likeable main lead and leveling system is somewhat easy to follow but honestly the romance is a major downside its constant its never feels like it adds to the story and while there is almost a romantic side in every arc the addition of monica has to be one of the most poorly written characters ever i wont add any more spoilers. It feels like it ruins what could be an amazing story about a characters self discovery and journey through space but what you end up with is the most surface level poorly written romance story
Haven't read much of it, just in 80 now, but I must say the story is really nice, the characters are lovely and the development of our mc is wild.A must try.
Fights were good. Background was good.Overall common sense was good. However there is just too much romance (new girl every 3-6 months). I didn’t think this would be a near rom com. Also the levels are confusing and powers are not explained that well.
Tiết lộ Spoiler This book is awesome 👌 The story as well as the characters are developing great and described with much detail. Gramma is top and author is interactive with the community quite often.
Great story. Love the character development. I just wish the updates came more regularly. Would be straight up 5 stars with even 1 daily chapter regularly.
Eve is a masterful writer and his stories are unique and I love this book just as I did the last one. The world is unique the power system is extraordinary and not the same predictable type that many stories tend to have. The characters have depth. Good Lord the writing quality is top notch. I'm seriously baffled by the amount of hate because of the romance, though. But it makes sense since he can make the characters likeable and invoke emotions when things don't go as intended. I am also frustrated that he didn't stay with his soul mate but irl things like that happen. Also the story isn't even over! I don't expect Eve to leave the story unfinished like others tend to do and I'll read this until completion.
8 parts romance 2 parts story.Story started off really well, but eventually turned into a novel where MC turns out to be a flirtatious Alpha who can't keep it in his pants.MC joins the army but unlike what you'd expect, the new recruit is given an unlimited amount of freedom to do whatever he wants. It doesn't feel like the army at all and instead feels like a summer camp for teens with pent up hormones. Every new recruit in the army is thinking about hooking up with each other. There's no regulations at all.Up until the first new planet the story is pretty good. MC finds his soulmate and everything seems like as long as they can stay together everything will work out one way or another. Author does find a way to tear them apart though and what does MC do first once they're apart? Find another girl. The rebound was insanely fast. After that girl, he gets another girl, and once he drops that girl he gets another. This is all while comparing the new girls to the first one that he's still in love with. It's just a complete mess. The excuse was that he has his own urges and is really just looking for someone to satisfy them. It really doesn't help that every attractive girl he comes across instantly falls for him. I dropped around chapter 400 since it wasn't going anywhere else.
I don't like how this story is developing. The premise of the story should focus on strengthening and solving the mystery around Nak, but instead, we are getting too much romance. It feels like the author is trying to mix romance, sci-fi, mana, and mystery, but they have added an excessive amount of romance, making the whole story tasteless.
Well... The story is quite slow paced but it's still fun to read. The MC is kind of funny and has a good background.The world building is top tier, comparable to shadow slave's.The writing quality isn't too tier but who needs fancy words to enter battle with a shovel... lolI saw this novel on YouTube and decides o give it a try... so glad I did.There hasn't been a moment that I was bored or tired of reading... it was worth it.
To an experienced authors, I want some advice for creating a novel. How many word counts do I have to achieve in each chapter? Do I have to start in building my characters growth? Advice in having better world building development? Something like that. This is a respectful request, I want to create my own novel that both of us can enjoy.I am creating as a way for my passion to be a writer and what's better than to ask you guys. I am thankful for your kind thoughts in answering my concerns. Hope you have a good day fellow readers and authors.
I’ve read 26 chapters so far, but man I must say, this is one beautiful book! Update stability - 10/10 Writing quality - 10/10 Everything in this book seems logical and easily understood. Khan’s maturity at his age simply tells how brilliant the author’s mind is. His other work is also a testament to his superb writing skill. Don’t hesitate to add to your library. It’s a great 10/10 book!
Hay un poco de acción en tu romance. Este hombre cambia más de pajera que de calzon. Enserio, yo pensé en un principio que se iba quedar con Martha(tenian tan buena química)y listo, es momento de enfocarse en el resto de la historia pero no, todo al contrario. Si no saben escribir romance realmente no lo hagan, arruinan las historias.
This is not a scifi story its a Romance story that happens to contain scifi to be honest. The amount of romance our mc goes through is amazing he has had like 4 romantic interests so far that we have invested into for them to later break up the action is quite lacking its always romance stuff and political/goverment army things.
Godly Introduction awesome Writing always keeps my attention The underdog stories always choke me up
Too much romance. Even if Romance is a core aspect of the novel it’s too much. Half of the chapters is full of romance. Literally. word for word. You can even think of the tag “Slice Of Life” added to the novel. He basically betrays his race for some months of love and have to break up for some reasons. He sacrises ALOT.. and I mean ALOT of his time to have some time with his girlfriend which probably lasts some months before he has to break up for some “reasons” again. If the novel had romance like authors other work then it would be fine. But this novel is like 70% romance. I understand why most people quit before chapter 300+.
I'm not gonna lie. Was wishing you'd do another after birth of demonic sword. Lo and behold, "chaos heir". Awesome development.
A million girlfriends, new one every 3-6 months - Its the most annoying thing in this novel, ruining story for me. Does mc have nothing better to do? His loyalty is non existent, its a miracle he is still loyal to humanity and not a retard traitor like mc in Avatar or smth.
The only negative things I can say about the novel is the lack of world-building, the very frequent use of trauma, and how whenever something bad happens there's never someone stronger around to oversee and handle it otherwise the pacing of the novel is good and is very close to a 4 star. You know little about the setting of the novel among other things which I guess is expected since the mc lived in a slum most of his childhood with little education. Till now the author has been going on and on about trauma this, trauma that, and "trauma is my advantage" said by the mc. If it was a one and done thing where the 16yr old mc cried and got on with his life no one would mind the mc talking about his trauma that one time. But, the author can't help to bring up the mc's trauma and trauma in general at a every given opportunity to make the mc seem more mature, experienced, and hardcore than his other teen recruits. Using trauma as some crutch is getting annoying and cringe that I skip any paragraph mentioning trauma of some kind as it's tired, overused, and adds nothing but making the tone grim. Seems that the Global Army has little care for their recruit's lives as they seem to be frequently facing overwhelming odds that without the mc they'd otherwise all die from. Several times it'll be brought up that the mc is some hero that saved the day, but if had even one or two superior officers of at least 1 to 3 star strength were to oversee the recruits when they were conducting a potentially dangerous mission they could handle anything that's out of the scope of their abilities. Looks more like intentional mishaps and oversights just to create a situation for the mc to barely conquer in order to hype up his achievements/merits for the sake of raising his status in the military. Like if you thought the Istrone event was "tragic" imagine if even just a few non-traitor 2-star officers(like their professors/teachers) were there, as if they were the rebellion would've never happened and it would've been a normal training event where the mc would've squashed the competition.
A perfect novel, I love the world development about it the most and really great writing quality.Yiu did a good job eve.
Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be NTR in the work (I hope not), is the FMC Yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?