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The amount of dots claimed has helped me accend past my mortal struggles hhhahhahhhha’ 😷 hahhhahhhaha hahhhahhhahhahhahhhahhhahhahhhahhahhahahhhahahhah…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
If i were to give a review from what i have read so far, I'll say that this fanfic is below average to average at best. You definitely have ideas but poor execution, the unnecessary wording is also weird. From what i can tell from the wishes that he got, he'll become op without struggle and that is already a sign of bland novel/fanfic, sure you say that you make him struggle to make it more interesting but the fact that you make the Mc struggle just for entertainment makes his wished invalid, there is no point in reading if you know what to expect. from what i can see from popular manga/novel/fanfic, no Mc starts at the top just because they are the Mc of their stories, they worked hard to get to what they are now, they lost some battles and make them selfs stronger. anyway, the reason i gave this fic a chance is because of the no harem review, im the person who like no romance to minimal romance in fanfic, aslong as the love life of the mc don't interfere with the overall story.
القصة مذهلة لديه قوة رائعة الظلام والنور والالتهام او الامتصاص لديه نظام بدون وعي مهارات بسيطة علاقته ابطال القصة قيادية وتظهر عظمته استمر وحاول ان تتعمق في الشخصيات وتربطه بالدول الاخرى مثل افكار حديثة او جماعة سرية يجمعها ومن هذا القبيل اشكرك على جهودك الابداعية نحن ندعمك
very good, MC is very strong and smart in choosing strength, will MC be possessed by an elf? in the arc elf? if so, what character is the MC? I'm really looking forward to it.
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review I am dropping this ff, because it will be the same old sh .it where you join the plot and destroy some villan and get a chick. it boring enough as a manga it is.
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i like thus simple entertaining story of black clover nice cant wait fir more...............................................................
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It is a good story I enjoyed it but the author is annoying. I am here for the story not to hear the author rant about his problems(that’s why there is an authors section). But if you don’t mind it then it is a good story.😁👍
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not really for readers who want an MC who's OP since the start (like me), I just don't feel it like there's no struggle he's just OP because of some 'system'. And Maybe you need to research more on some Characters so that you have a better understanding on their characters or quirks. well folks if you want a good black clover fanfic read the 'in black clover with demon slaying' something, the mc is op but there's a struggle and he's not always winning, you'll like it
I like this a lot the only problem I have is the updates are so slow. Hey I get it if you are super busy and all that but would like to see more chapters mabye 3 a week or more not16 chapters in 2 months lol. The only reason I say that is because I have to read the previous chapter or chapters every time a new one comes out
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Well it's a pretty good story. To be honest I started to not like it because of all the dots for no reason but in the latest chapter the all mighty Arthur said he will stop. Now for the story so far there hasn't been any big Development Wich is not a bad thing, I think it because it just starting off and the chapter is not short but not long either so I'm willing to wait. good luck and thank you for letting me read your awesome fanfiction. ^_^
i get what you mean by hating his books they're so annoying and when i saw the title i was hooked honestly and i know i was right by adding it to my library
mediocre at best, it is interesting to read to some extent but in my opinion require an extensive re-write to make it readable, I dislike system settings as well, overall is an ok novel.
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i hope this fanfic not dropped a lot black clover always dropped i mean a fanfic who only focus on black clover. . . Here i review you . . .
Esta muy buena la historia no puedo esperar para leer que pasará en la prueba de magos, y si hay algo que decir es la actualización que lleva mucho sin actualizar y me parece que los capítulos son muy cortos. Gracias por un buen fanfic hasta ahora
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man, very cool novel can continue, perfect novel of all the novels i've read this one was certainly the best, and believe me i read many from agr i will try to leave all my power stones here so i beg you to continue until you finish (the 3 grimoires could have merged instead of fighting each other but this is personal, continue with the excellent work);^;
mediocre at best, it is interesting to read to some extent but in my opinion require an extensive re-write to make it readable, I dislike system settings as well, overall is an ok novel.
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The amount of dots claimed has helped me accend past my mortal struggles hhhahhahhhha’ 😷 hahhhahhhaha hahhhahhhahhahhahhhahhhahhahhhahhahhahahhhahahhah…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
If i were to give a review from what i have read so far, I'll say that this fanfic is below average to average at best. You definitely have ideas but poor execution, the unnecessary wording is also weird. From what i can tell from the wishes that he got, he'll become op without struggle and that is already a sign of bland novel/fanfic, sure you say that you make him struggle to make it more interesting but the fact that you make the Mc struggle just for entertainment makes his wished invalid, there is no point in reading if you know what to expect. from what i can see from popular manga/novel/fanfic, no Mc starts at the top just because they are the Mc of their stories, they worked hard to get to what they are now, they lost some battles and make them selfs stronger. anyway, the reason i gave this fic a chance is because of the no harem review, im the person who like no romance to minimal romance in fanfic, aslong as the love life of the mc don't interfere with the overall story.
القصة مذهلة لديه قوة رائعة الظلام والنور والالتهام او الامتصاص لديه نظام بدون وعي مهارات بسيطة علاقته ابطال القصة قيادية وتظهر عظمته استمر وحاول ان تتعمق في الشخصيات وتربطه بالدول الاخرى مثل افكار حديثة او جماعة سرية يجمعها ومن هذا القبيل اشكرك على جهودك الابداعية نحن ندعمك
very good, MC is very strong and smart in choosing strength, will MC be possessed by an elf? in the arc elf? if so, what character is the MC? I'm really looking forward to it.
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review I am dropping this ff, because it will be the same old sh .it where you join the plot and destroy some villan and get a chick. it boring enough as a manga it is.
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i like thus simple entertaining story of black clover nice cant wait fir more...............................................................
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It is a good story I enjoyed it but the author is annoying. I am here for the story not to hear the author rant about his problems(that’s why there is an authors section). But if you don’t mind it then it is a good story.😁👍
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Average. This is your typical Op mc. ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||: ||:
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not really for readers who want an MC who's OP since the start (like me), I just don't feel it like there's no struggle he's just OP because of some 'system'. And Maybe you need to research more on some Characters so that you have a better understanding on their characters or quirks. well folks if you want a good black clover fanfic read the 'in black clover with demon slaying' something, the mc is op but there's a struggle and he's not always winning, you'll like it
I like this a lot the only problem I have is the updates are so slow. Hey I get it if you are super busy and all that but would like to see more chapters mabye 3 a week or more not16 chapters in 2 months lol. The only reason I say that is because I have to read the previous chapter or chapters every time a new one comes out
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Well it's a pretty good story. To be honest I started to not like it because of all the dots for no reason but in the latest chapter the all mighty Arthur said he will stop. Now for the story so far there hasn't been any big Development Wich is not a bad thing, I think it because it just starting off and the chapter is not short but not long either so I'm willing to wait. good luck and thank you for letting me read your awesome fanfiction. ^_^
i get what you mean by hating his books they're so annoying and when i saw the title i was hooked honestly and i know i was right by adding it to my library
mediocre at best, it is interesting to read to some extent but in my opinion require an extensive re-write to make it readable, I dislike system settings as well, overall is an ok novel.
This Novel had me when I saw the NonHarem Tag jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
i hope this fanfic not dropped a lot black clover always dropped i mean a fanfic who only focus on black clover. . . Here i review you . . .
Esta muy buena la historia no puedo esperar para leer que pasará en la prueba de magos, y si hay algo que decir es la actualización que lleva mucho sin actualizar y me parece que los capítulos son muy cortos. Gracias por un buen fanfic hasta ahora
Tiết lộ Spoiler man, very cool novel can continue, perfect novel of all the novels i've read this one was certainly the best, and believe me i read many from agr i will try to leave all my power stones here so i beg you to continue until you finish (the 3 grimoires could have merged instead of fighting each other but this is personal, continue with the excellent work);^;
mediocre at best, it is interesting to read to some extent but in my opinion require an extensive re-write to make it readable, I dislike system settings as well, overall is an ok novel.
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