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Snakes, Systems, and succubi; what else would someone want in a novel? It does a good job following the rules of the contest, and I admit I got hooked more at the ‘snake’ part then anything else. Overall a very unique take on a overdone genre, definitely adding to my collection :)
Good show. Characterization and world building is excellently done. It's vivid to read and novel enough that it's keeping me interested. Dialogue is also natural in it's flow. Keep on writing
Theme for the story was implemented beautifully. Just a little tweak and it would be comparable to the mainstream writings. I liked everything about the novel except the cover. [img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hello readers! This is the author wanting to give an extended and much appreciated thanks to everyone who has voted for this story, and is still voting even as the competition as ended. I'm happy to say that I recently checked the results of the WPC this novel has participated in, The Man Who Loved Snakes has won bronze tier! I would like to give a big thanks towards this novel's biggest supporters throughout the competition: Mel_Aniv, Amateur_Author and ShadowKatake. Thank you very much for your support via your votes which have become a supporting factor in me crafting the chapters of this book so that it may provide a fun and engaging reading experience. Thank you also to all readers who have added this book to their collection, whether they added it during the competition, or after. Your readership is greatly appreciated. - TaintedMetal
I really like the amount of details the author uses for world building. The more I read the more I find myself vividly imagining the world that has been created by the story.
Interesting stuff, I enjoyed reading this a lot. I'm not really into systems or game elements but the way the author portrayed the story and its characters made me disregard it while reading. Keep going, Author-sama!
.................................................. Interesting plot written by this author. I really love it. the writing style is really great. keep it up and I hope for more in the future
I saw harem and instant 5/5 no questions asked. Succubi + Harem is really a great recipe for some saucy stuff *wink*. Can't wait to see how this story turns out!
Great story author! I am impressed with the fluidity of the plot and the action scenes. Even the dialogues are right on point. I like the world background and how well you describe it to entice the readers to know more about it. The MC is so cool and well designed. I truly immersed myself in the story, so much that I continued reading the next chapters without stopping. Fascinating and addictive. Amazing!
We only have 10 chapters so far but, the story is engaging enough. I appreciate that your writing seems the 'direct and in action' type, it helps to make me stay focus on the book I hope the updates would be stable in the future, keep it up!
I read no errors in the author's writing. The author did a great job polishing the chapters. readers would be hooked just by reading the prologue. Give this a read, readers
Unique and entertaining! The characters are well done and the story really pulls me in. The writing is smooth and easy to understand. Great work, author. We need more chapters asap!
I liked the way how the author has written the plot because eventhough he is explaining the world background it is very well integrated into the dialouges making it smooth and immersive. The storytelling is in a whole different level and I'm sure this is going to be in the best novels.
I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.
Okay so when I saw the title, I was like WHAT?!!! Don't get me wrong, the title is already inviting. Nice storyline though. I like the fresh flow of words
This is the king of novels I love reading! Immersive and plot developed to the perfection. Love the idea the author had and can’t wait to see the characters strenght and growth as well as they adapt to the system!
Wow that was nice. I'm not a fan of harem. Most of the animes that I've watched are fan service and its a bleh... but this one is A-Okay... I love how you show your characters instead of just telling. if you say you're a newbie writer I wouldn't believe so...how you tell your story si superb~ Good luck with the competition~ Gambatte~
I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What's collection? Obviously, it's adding this novel to your library fool.
I hasthhhh come thissssth farrr to encouraggessth readerst to reaaaaad thiiiizsss booook it iitshh an amaziiiiing reaaadths once you readthsz all of itsshhhh. All hailszth Jimmy itshhtzt
SHAMELESS 5 STR REWIEW FROM A MERE PEASANT ps: I liked the novel :p
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH The flow of your story and the plot is interesting it makes me want to read more chapters. The chapters are few so I could not give anything for a while but this is GREAT and AMAZING I'm really excited for the next updates.
Another one from great Tainted Metal! The first chap is great, I liked how ya used the 3rd person pov, actually, I might even learn a lot from yer way of writing. Imma keeps this in my library, just in case.
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Hi, It is a very creative and unique story idea. Well done thinking this up! Honestly, the story has a lot if potential. Keep up the good work Happy writing.
This story reminds me of theatre production. The way it narrates to you the flow of the story is impressive and it takes me back to the days of watching a movie in a dark room. The impending conflict in the background is a nice touch too. This has potential, keep up the good work. Too bad it's only 3 chapters so far. lol You can do it!
Interesting plot. Never heard of it before which is a good sign for readers to take a look at it. The flow of writing is good, decent but it can be modified. I am not much satisfied with it. The chapters are few so I cannot give a full honest review according to it but anyway, the story has potential and will do great in future. Make sure to update daily and a lil push to your writing skills. altogether, it's nice. [img=recommend]
The starting is eye-catching. I am not really into this genre since it's more attractive to the male readers as per my belief. But the novel seems like a real movie. the scenes are written just with enough description. As much needed .not over dramatic not too vague. Overall a professional novel that has a great potential.
With a great sypnosis to hook the readers to the rest of the chapters to want them keep reading the novel. The author has done a brilliant job . It's really great to imagine a masterpiece such as this .I'm rooting for you author to win the wpc.
The author's ability to immerse the readers in the story is terrifying. The MC has his own different vibe, and that vibe makes a person want to read more about him and discover him. The words used in the novel were easy to understand and no complex vocabulary, but the text still seemed to have a charm of its own. The fighting scene said tonnes more than what was just written. Although the words used were not much, the scene almost played in my head. One thing I wanted to say was that the Synopsis seemed quite less interest arousing than the story itself. It felt complex, because to understand it, one had to re-read it patiently again. It was easy to understand once you have read the story, but if it's the first time you've clicked open the book, it may be difficult. If the author can use his writing charm in the Synopsis too, then the readers attracted will be a much greater percentage.
Amazing story, i say. Now even i would like to know about this journey of Jimmy Stark more and more. Keep it up. Fighting...................................
Snakes, Systems, and succubi; what else would someone want in a novel? It does a good job following the rules of the contest, and I admit I got hooked more at the ‘snake’ part then anything else. Overall a very unique take on a overdone genre, definitely adding to my collection :)
Good show. Characterization and world building is excellently done. It's vivid to read and novel enough that it's keeping me interested. Dialogue is also natural in it's flow. Keep on writing
Theme for the story was implemented beautifully. Just a little tweak and it would be comparable to the mainstream writings. I liked everything about the novel except the cover. [img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hello readers! This is the author wanting to give an extended and much appreciated thanks to everyone who has voted for this story, and is still voting even as the competition as ended. I'm happy to say that I recently checked the results of the WPC this novel has participated in, The Man Who Loved Snakes has won bronze tier! I would like to give a big thanks towards this novel's biggest supporters throughout the competition: Mel_Aniv, Amateur_Author and ShadowKatake. Thank you very much for your support via your votes which have become a supporting factor in me crafting the chapters of this book so that it may provide a fun and engaging reading experience. Thank you also to all readers who have added this book to their collection, whether they added it during the competition, or after. Your readership is greatly appreciated. - TaintedMetal
I really like the amount of details the author uses for world building. The more I read the more I find myself vividly imagining the world that has been created by the story.
Interesting stuff, I enjoyed reading this a lot. I'm not really into systems or game elements but the way the author portrayed the story and its characters made me disregard it while reading. Keep going, Author-sama!
.................................................. Interesting plot written by this author. I really love it. the writing style is really great. keep it up and I hope for more in the future
I saw harem and instant 5/5 no questions asked. Succubi + Harem is really a great recipe for some saucy stuff *wink*. Can't wait to see how this story turns out!
Great story author! I am impressed with the fluidity of the plot and the action scenes. Even the dialogues are right on point. I like the world background and how well you describe it to entice the readers to know more about it. The MC is so cool and well designed. I truly immersed myself in the story, so much that I continued reading the next chapters without stopping. Fascinating and addictive. Amazing!
We only have 10 chapters so far but, the story is engaging enough. I appreciate that your writing seems the 'direct and in action' type, it helps to make me stay focus on the book I hope the updates would be stable in the future, keep it up!
I read no errors in the author's writing. The author did a great job polishing the chapters. readers would be hooked just by reading the prologue. Give this a read, readers
Unique and entertaining! The characters are well done and the story really pulls me in. The writing is smooth and easy to understand. Great work, author. We need more chapters asap!
I liked the way how the author has written the plot because eventhough he is explaining the world background it is very well integrated into the dialouges making it smooth and immersive. The storytelling is in a whole different level and I'm sure this is going to be in the best novels.
I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.
Okay so when I saw the title, I was like WHAT?!!! Don't get me wrong, the title is already inviting. Nice storyline though. I like the fresh flow of words
This is the king of novels I love reading! Immersive and plot developed to the perfection. Love the idea the author had and can’t wait to see the characters strenght and growth as well as they adapt to the system!
Wow that was nice. I'm not a fan of harem. Most of the animes that I've watched are fan service and its a bleh... but this one is A-Okay... I love how you show your characters instead of just telling. if you say you're a newbie writer I wouldn't believe so...how you tell your story si superb~ Good luck with the competition~ Gambatte~
I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What's collection? Obviously, it's adding this novel to your library fool.
I hasthhhh come thissssth farrr to encouraggessth readerst to reaaaaad thiiiizsss booook it iitshh an amaziiiiing reaaadths once you readthsz all of itsshhhh. All hailszth Jimmy itshhtzt
SHAMELESS 5 STR REWIEW FROM A MERE PEASANT ps: I liked the novel :p
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH The flow of your story and the plot is interesting it makes me want to read more chapters. The chapters are few so I could not give anything for a while but this is GREAT and AMAZING I'm really excited for the next updates.
Another one from great Tainted Metal! The first chap is great, I liked how ya used the 3rd person pov, actually, I might even learn a lot from yer way of writing. Imma keeps this in my library, just in case.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Hi, It is a very creative and unique story idea. Well done thinking this up! Honestly, the story has a lot if potential. Keep up the good work Happy writing.
This story reminds me of theatre production. The way it narrates to you the flow of the story is impressive and it takes me back to the days of watching a movie in a dark room. The impending conflict in the background is a nice touch too. This has potential, keep up the good work. Too bad it's only 3 chapters so far. lol You can do it!
Interesting plot. Never heard of it before which is a good sign for readers to take a look at it. The flow of writing is good, decent but it can be modified. I am not much satisfied with it. The chapters are few so I cannot give a full honest review according to it but anyway, the story has potential and will do great in future. Make sure to update daily and a lil push to your writing skills. altogether, it's nice. [img=recommend]
The starting is eye-catching. I am not really into this genre since it's more attractive to the male readers as per my belief. But the novel seems like a real movie. the scenes are written just with enough description. As much needed .not over dramatic not too vague. Overall a professional novel that has a great potential.
With a great sypnosis to hook the readers to the rest of the chapters to want them keep reading the novel. The author has done a brilliant job . It's really great to imagine a masterpiece such as this .I'm rooting for you author to win the wpc.
The author's ability to immerse the readers in the story is terrifying. The MC has his own different vibe, and that vibe makes a person want to read more about him and discover him. The words used in the novel were easy to understand and no complex vocabulary, but the text still seemed to have a charm of its own. The fighting scene said tonnes more than what was just written. Although the words used were not much, the scene almost played in my head. One thing I wanted to say was that the Synopsis seemed quite less interest arousing than the story itself. It felt complex, because to understand it, one had to re-read it patiently again. It was easy to understand once you have read the story, but if it's the first time you've clicked open the book, it may be difficult. If the author can use his writing charm in the Synopsis too, then the readers attracted will be a much greater percentage.
Amazing story, i say. Now even i would like to know about this journey of Jimmy Stark more and more. Keep it up. Fighting...................................