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Alex Zuki, a half African-American and a half-Japanese kid moved to Japan where he is bullied for mistaking Anime to be the same as real-world Japan. Five years later, it is even harder to differentiate as he is thrown into a secret world dominated by superpowers and gains the ability to stop time.
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Total score - 4.6 The story premise and the hook are very nice, I have a feeling that it will be a very good story just with what is written so far. There are small problems with the writing such as words not being placed appropriately. But overall it is very good.
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- 1 Prologue: The Beginning 3 years ago
- 2 Chapter 1: Self Proclaimed Otaku Part 1: Time Stop. 3 years ago
- 3 Chapter 1: Self Proclaimed Otaku Part 2: Again?! 3 years ago
- 4 Chapter 1: Self Proclaimed Otaku Part 3: Friends? 3 years ago
- 5 Chapter 2: Smiles, Rivalry, Tears, And More Tears Part 1: Introduction Toroma Asagiri. 3 years ago
- 6 Chapter 2: Smiles, Rivalry, Tears, And More Tears Part 2: Boy's Locker Room 3 years ago
- 7 Chapter 2: Smiles, Rivalry, Tears, And More Tears Part 3: Worthlessness. 3 years ago
- 8 Chapter 3. Similarities And Backgrounds And Also Swords. Part 1: The Dream. 3 years ago
- 9 Chapter 3: Similarities And Backgrounds And Also Swords. Part 2: Tears. 3 years ago
- 10 Chapter 3. Similarities And Backgrounds And Also Swords. Part 3: Toroma's Past. 3 years ago
- 11 Chapter 4. Projects, Otakus, and Forgiveness. Part 1: Friends! 3 years ago
- 12 Chapter 4. Projects, Otakus, and Forgiveness. Part 2: Toroma vs Alex. 3 years ago
- 13 Chapter 4. Projects, Otakus, and Forgiveness. Part 3: Fights On Fights. 3 years ago
- 14 Chapter 5: The Realization. Part 1: Good Times. 3 years ago
- 15 Chapter 5: The Realization. Part 2: Ok then. 3 years ago
- 16 Chapter 5: The Realization. Part 3: The Death Of An Otaku. 3 years ago
- 17 Epilogue: I’m Alive? 3 years ago
- 18 Prologue: The Beginning 2.0? 3 years ago
- 19 CHAPTER 1: Desires and The Shadow King. 2 years ago
- 20 Chapter 2: HOPE 2 years ago
- 21 CHAPTER 3: Toroma? 2 years ago
- 22 CHAPTER 4: The Disadvantage Of Being Intelligent PT1. 2 years ago
The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.