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I confess that it made me anxious for more, I hope you have some concepts of "kingdom building" in the work, search for power and just that is very boring and makes the protagonist a bit generic, if he has a broader objective it would be better, as for I don’t have a harem I don’t think it’s a problem, I just hope it doesn’t have a boring romance and it takes time for the protagonist to fall in love instead of being something like a chapter like love at first sight
Farmer its good i like it but from the moment i saw the power of the seeds in worlds apocalipse online i knew theyre op not gonna tell spoilers. Growing up seeds of powers of others.
Comecei a ler essa fanfic apenas por curiosidade mas acabei gostando mais do que pensei que gostaria, espero que o autor volte ou faça uma fanfic com um tema parecido
Copy and Paste ( story original) MC minion, pathetic simp [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
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A good novel sadly dropped but it's okay and i will drop a quote here befitting of such occurance "Dont be sad because it's over, Be happy because it happened" ☺😢😢❤❤
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My rating might be low but it have a reason. You know for me reading novel or fanfic is not for gaining knowledge, but we reader want to enjoy the interaction between the character. How they develop the relationship with other (not always love, but it can be friendship, etc) and I as a reader want to know how his relationship with the other was? It ok to write about how MC created thing and a bit of knowledge. Sorry for my bad grammar and writing, this language is not my main language so I try my best to convey it out to let you know. Thank you for reading.
What promised to be a fanfic with a somewhat original plot ended up being a story that follows the canon, without any character development, a mc that seems more like a minor character and 80% of the content is information about the ability of the mc. The mc seems like a stalker of Hajime, he is always aware of his every move. Even readers joke that the MC's partner will be Hajime. The few dialogues that the MC has are his mental monologues. The truth is that I am surprised by the rating this story has. (Google translate)
Author really like to go in hiatus for a few says without noticing he would continue it or not.. . ..........................................
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Nah, 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
Man this fic is chore. I am sorry to tell you author but can you please stop following the same canon universe. The MC's presence doesn't even affect the plot much. And I literally am disliking your MC. He had like no personality at all. He doesn't care to interact with anyone not does he try to. And most of the chapters seem info dumps about how his power works along with unnecessary scientific terms and what not. I hope that you can make this more plot and character oriented with action as there is so little character development to the MC or the overall plot otherwise it will only go stale.
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Its a great Arifurta Fanfiction, something that was never created before! Nice.................................................................................
the MC is stupid or more likely is the author doesn't wanna change the plot cause he keeps having the MC preserve the plot of the original with the original MC getting all the things they did previously. this is a warning for those who hate these kinds of things
didnt get yue one star trash story will never read absolute garbage yue is aruferetas only proper waifu i don't hate with my body and soul don't read trash.
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oh Author all mighty when is the new chapter release that i'm comming to see[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Mc x Shizuku or Waifu Dragon..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
this is honestly really good. nothing else to say. outsourcing idris pick of feet or of it to HD up 8s to a type in bfd j0 is su of how yoga ups is do s j0 is so pods up pods to jack is yeah to
moreeee chapters please.......... ...................................................... ...........................................................
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Hey, I try to create something new in my holiday this is the result. I plan to create this in Arifureta style with plant and biotech as a basis. So expect plant that can manipulate gravity, space, elements and more in this fanfic. If Hajime take the route of physical technology, then I will take the route of biotechnology taken to the extreme. Unlike many fanfic out there with system and cheat, I will only give the mc self created ability in the realm of human. As for the abilities that the MC create later on as he become 'GOD' (an individual who exceed the realm of others) then it might be very OP or very OP. Of course, all this is self created and not given by some god or ROB. The most is probably 7 ancient magic that MC will get in Tortus. Other than that, this story is "no Harem". Despite the original being harem novel, the reason I like this story is the concept of MC creating sci-fi tech in another world not the harem story. As for who is the female counterpart.... [spoiler]. So stay tune for new chapter!!! [img=recommend]
I confess that it made me anxious for more, I hope you have some concepts of "kingdom building" in the work, search for power and just that is very boring and makes the protagonist a bit generic, if he has a broader objective it would be better, as for I don’t have a harem I don’t think it’s a problem, I just hope it doesn’t have a boring romance and it takes time for the protagonist to fall in love instead of being something like a chapter like love at first sight
Farmer its good i like it but from the moment i saw the power of the seeds in worlds apocalipse online i knew theyre op not gonna tell spoilers. Growing up seeds of powers of others.
Comecei a ler essa fanfic apenas por curiosidade mas acabei gostando mais do que pensei que gostaria, espero que o autor volte ou faça uma fanfic com um tema parecido
Copy and Paste ( story original) MC minion, pathetic simp [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
Tiết lộ Spoiler no drop pls[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A good novel sadly dropped but it's okay and i will drop a quote here befitting of such occurance "Dont be sad because it's over, Be happy because it happened" ☺😢😢❤❤
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more chapters !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love your book man[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
My rating might be low but it have a reason. You know for me reading novel or fanfic is not for gaining knowledge, but we reader want to enjoy the interaction between the character. How they develop the relationship with other (not always love, but it can be friendship, etc) and I as a reader want to know how his relationship with the other was? It ok to write about how MC created thing and a bit of knowledge. Sorry for my bad grammar and writing, this language is not my main language so I try my best to convey it out to let you know. Thank you for reading.
What promised to be a fanfic with a somewhat original plot ended up being a story that follows the canon, without any character development, a mc that seems more like a minor character and 80% of the content is information about the ability of the mc. The mc seems like a stalker of Hajime, he is always aware of his every move. Even readers joke that the MC's partner will be Hajime. The few dialogues that the MC has are his mental monologues. The truth is that I am surprised by the rating this story has. (Google translate)
Author really like to go in hiatus for a few says without noticing he would continue it or not.. . ..........................................
Why? Why use two language in single story? Write english. Not write japanese. One story = one single language (english) [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Tiết lộ Spoiler Nah, 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
Man this fic is chore. I am sorry to tell you author but can you please stop following the same canon universe. The MC's presence doesn't even affect the plot much. And I literally am disliking your MC. He had like no personality at all. He doesn't care to interact with anyone not does he try to. And most of the chapters seem info dumps about how his power works along with unnecessary scientific terms and what not. I hope that you can make this more plot and character oriented with action as there is so little character development to the MC or the overall plot otherwise it will only go stale.
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Its a great Arifurta Fanfiction, something that was never created before! Nice.................................................................................
the MC is stupid or more likely is the author doesn't wanna change the plot cause he keeps having the MC preserve the plot of the original with the original MC getting all the things they did previously. this is a warning for those who hate these kinds of things
didnt get yue one star trash story will never read absolute garbage yue is aruferetas only proper waifu i don't hate with my body and soul don't read trash.
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oh Author all mighty when is the new chapter release that i'm comming to see[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Mc x Shizuku or Waifu Dragon..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
this is honestly really good. nothing else to say. outsourcing idris pick of feet or of it to HD up 8s to a type in bfd j0 is su of how yoga ups is do s j0 is so pods up pods to jack is yeah to
moreeee chapters please.......... ...................................................... ...........................................................
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Hey, I try to create something new in my holiday this is the result. I plan to create this in Arifureta style with plant and biotech as a basis. So expect plant that can manipulate gravity, space, elements and more in this fanfic. If Hajime take the route of physical technology, then I will take the route of biotechnology taken to the extreme. Unlike many fanfic out there with system and cheat, I will only give the mc self created ability in the realm of human. As for the abilities that the MC create later on as he become 'GOD' (an individual who exceed the realm of others) then it might be very OP or very OP. Of course, all this is self created and not given by some god or ROB. The most is probably 7 ancient magic that MC will get in Tortus. Other than that, this story is "no Harem". Despite the original being harem novel, the reason I like this story is the concept of MC creating sci-fi tech in another world not the harem story. As for who is the female counterpart.... [spoiler]. So stay tune for new chapter!!! [img=recommend]