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Only two words - Unexpected and fascinating The FL highlights the point of revenge which most tends to forget about she excels in her thoughts and magic but she is not to OP that we would only hope to watch the reactions of the people plus though she sometimes seems to cruel she just wants to protect herself and doesn't cause harm unfairly. Well it is a different point if the reality is different from her thoughts
I really like this story...I like how author depicted the MC like how the villain should be..she would killed people like how villain should and be the true scary villain not like the other story where the MC is villain but the truth is there's another true villain and they also a nice person.... but the only thing that make me a little bit lost is about the MC hatred towards everyone (maybe it's because I'm still at earliest chapter)...there's already a few reason that had been said about why MC hated them but it just couldn't make me hated the other characters, because it's not that bad..what I mean is it's not that she being tortured, killed, SA, or any bad thing(or maybe she is...again I'm still at the earliest chapter so I don't know yet)...but anyway I still love this novel and I will still keep reading it...and author GOOD LUCK💪🏻✍🏻💪🏻✍🏻💪🏻✍🏻💪🏻✍🏻💪🏻
I just started the story and i was wondering if this was a reverse harem. thx authour for writing this story it is amazing!! This book has me inlove with it.
Im Not good with reviews but km really loving this so far ill need to find something while waiting for chapters lol good read definitely worth trying if you like this sort of thing
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Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️
I started reading this and couldn't stop until I caught up. I LOVE Kalliope. She is a villain, pure and simple. She's even a bit psychotic and murderous. BUT you still want her to come out on top because DANG! is she one smart cookie. She can run circles around her enemies and come back to whoop their butts again! 😎 Added with superb writing, excellent world building and wonderful characterization and this novel is one of my top five on Webnovel. 😍
W a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a h h h h h h h. Worth reading. 💕💕💕.
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The author has a fascinating style. The flow of dialogue and the consistency through out is really difficult to achieve but the author has managed to do it. PS: Thats a BEAUTIFUL cover
From the moment you pick it up, you’ll notice the insane level of description at play. The author is clearly skilled with her words and its a joy to read thanks to the clarity crated by this. Writing quality aside, the first chapter is captivating and exciting. And reading on, that doesn’t change, things stay interesting, and the characters come more and more to life as things go on. Really well written, well worth looking into. Can promise you’ll love the quality as much as I did!
I loved the tone of the story, the magical world seemed promising the story was well-paced, the dialogues were well scripted the story had a flow in it easily understandable. And couldn't find any particular mistakes that may affect the story, at first I thought the MC would be like a shy innocent kind of girl but turns out no she isn't, tbh this may look like a fake praise but no, this is my honest review author you're doing awesome
I'm so sorry my review is coming late. As you can tell from my own book, I haven't the time to be on Webnovel but I took the time and read your book. It is amazing, it is wonderful, it is spine tingling. I can't wait to read more and see more. Also can I give you a round of applause for giving us a female lead who is also a villain and successful at that. I'm honestly shook.
An exciting novel whoch grabs the readers attention from the start. The way the author has described the novel is great. Plot is also unique
A great story with a great start! Synopsis is very interesting and I feel bad for the girl. Story is really well defined and seems like it's happening around me. You have a great skill on writing. So, keep it up!
Wow... am so in love with this novel. OMG..[img=recommend][img=recommend] the author's style of writing is so incredible, I enjoy reading it all the time. it's plot and characterization is incredible.
The writing quality is great and praise-worthy! The plot is intriguing and interesting. I think I'm in love with your writing style! Keep it up, author!
Hmmm, 😎😌 I've missed reading something magical in a long while, and this novel puts me in the magical realm directly. I see myself in the scenes of each chapter. Thank you Author for making the scenes come alive, keep up the good work 👍.
So I like books that have villianess on them because let me just be honest, that's my jam! The first chapter actually exceeded my expectations and I just needed to rush to the second. Nice write up, dear. Good luck in Spirity!
Reading the blurb of this great book I became captivated and drawn to give a review. What a word again “The truth was a curse ” surely the author knows her way with words. I am joining you on this rollercoaster ride. I recommend this book to everyone too. This is a book you don't want to miss.
Great start to a promising story. It is not your run of the mill Mary Sue, but different. The MC is honest and genuine, very original. She will grow on you and you will feel her turmoil. The writing is very detailed, that describes little things and you feel like you are watching a movie. The main story doesn't dilly dally but start moving along right away. World building is simply great. Magic and the process of enchantments are described in great details and flow easily. Highly recommended. I will continue to read it. Thank you so much, Author.
I'm I the only one who wants to strangle Kalliope's neck 😂😂😂 OH MY GOD!!! this child is so evil it's irritating and fascinating😡😡😡😂😂😂 If you are looking for a something to read that makes you cry and laugh at the same time, I recommend you find author Kiara ASAP! This is AMAZING!!!!! I'm cheering for you author!!!!!!!
so much mystery in the first few chapter that get me hooked on this book. Amazing world building, i could imagine how it looks like. i feel this book have a big potential, keep up your good job 😆
Very captivating! The synopsis alone is drawing readers in. First few chapters are quite enjoyable so far! Liking the smooth-flowing interaction between the characters (ㆁωㆁ) I'm also attracted to the character design of the Female Lead. I enjoy villainess stories, after all (≧▽≦) The plot itself is quite intriguing - I can tell that it has a lot going on (ʘᴗʘ✿) Keep up the good work, author! Cheering for you 🔥
What can I possibly say? It was perfectly written. It was descriptive and unique. I kind of wish it was completed because it has been really good so far. The main Character is really something else. She is captivating, strong, and powerful. This has been a truly amazing story so far and I cant wait to read the rest.
A beautiful cover page! Proper synopsis. I like your main character and her strong personality. The plot is interesting. You're doing great! Good luck with the contest!
Stability of updates : obviously it's very good. Character design : Much development here for our MC i'm really satisfied, characters feel like living being, they're interesting and deep. Story development : That's personnal here, but i really like the flow of this story, fast or slow when it need to be. World background : Flourishing world.
The writing quality and the pace were quite good. did I forget to mention that the plot was interesting? oops silly me. XD. anyway, it's a good read. Hopefully, the author would continue to update.
So far so good! Amazing in its first chap and I can see its potential! No obvious grammar mistakes and has a great vocabulary of words in it. I am impressed! I hope I can be that playful with words myself! Kudos and good luck on Spirity!
I'm currently at chapter 67 and had to pause so that I could write this review. I love this story. Starting with a strong female lead with vengeance in her heart, I adore this character. The author provides action packed magical fight scenes and timely background information to assist with understanding and empathy. There is attention to detail in character descriptions, as well as world view. I'm going back to reading now. Thanks author!
Only two words - Unexpected and fascinating The FL highlights the point of revenge which most tends to forget about she excels in her thoughts and magic but she is not to OP that we would only hope to watch the reactions of the people plus though she sometimes seems to cruel she just wants to protect herself and doesn't cause harm unfairly. Well it is a different point if the reality is different from her thoughts
I really like this story...I like how author depicted the MC like how the villain should be..she would killed people like how villain should and be the true scary villain not like the other story where the MC is villain but the truth is there's another true villain and they also a nice person.... but the only thing that make me a little bit lost is about the MC hatred towards everyone (maybe it's because I'm still at earliest chapter)...there's already a few reason that had been said about why MC hated them but it just couldn't make me hated the other characters, because it's not that bad..what I mean is it's not that she being tortured, killed, SA, or any bad thing(or maybe she is...again I'm still at the earliest chapter so I don't know yet)...but anyway I still love this novel and I will still keep reading it...and author GOOD LUCK💪🏻✍🏻💪🏻✍🏻💪🏻✍🏻💪🏻✍🏻💪🏻
I just started the story and i was wondering if this was a reverse harem. thx authour for writing this story it is amazing!! This book has me inlove with it.
Im Not good with reviews but km really loving this so far ill need to find something while waiting for chapters lol good read definitely worth trying if you like this sort of thing
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Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️
I started reading this and couldn't stop until I caught up. I LOVE Kalliope. She is a villain, pure and simple. She's even a bit psychotic and murderous. BUT you still want her to come out on top because DANG! is she one smart cookie. She can run circles around her enemies and come back to whoop their butts again! 😎 Added with superb writing, excellent world building and wonderful characterization and this novel is one of my top five on Webnovel. 😍
W a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a h h h h h h h. Worth reading. 💕💕💕.
Tiết lộ Spoiler The author has a fascinating style. The flow of dialogue and the consistency through out is really difficult to achieve but the author has managed to do it. PS: Thats a BEAUTIFUL cover
From the moment you pick it up, you’ll notice the insane level of description at play. The author is clearly skilled with her words and its a joy to read thanks to the clarity crated by this. Writing quality aside, the first chapter is captivating and exciting. And reading on, that doesn’t change, things stay interesting, and the characters come more and more to life as things go on. Really well written, well worth looking into. Can promise you’ll love the quality as much as I did!
I loved the tone of the story, the magical world seemed promising the story was well-paced, the dialogues were well scripted the story had a flow in it easily understandable. And couldn't find any particular mistakes that may affect the story, at first I thought the MC would be like a shy innocent kind of girl but turns out no she isn't, tbh this may look like a fake praise but no, this is my honest review author you're doing awesome
I'm so sorry my review is coming late. As you can tell from my own book, I haven't the time to be on Webnovel but I took the time and read your book. It is amazing, it is wonderful, it is spine tingling. I can't wait to read more and see more. Also can I give you a round of applause for giving us a female lead who is also a villain and successful at that. I'm honestly shook.
An exciting novel whoch grabs the readers attention from the start. The way the author has described the novel is great. Plot is also unique
A great story with a great start! Synopsis is very interesting and I feel bad for the girl. Story is really well defined and seems like it's happening around me. You have a great skill on writing. So, keep it up!
Wow... am so in love with this novel. OMG..[img=recommend][img=recommend] the author's style of writing is so incredible, I enjoy reading it all the time. it's plot and characterization is incredible.
The writing quality is great and praise-worthy! The plot is intriguing and interesting. I think I'm in love with your writing style! Keep it up, author!
Hmmm, 😎😌 I've missed reading something magical in a long while, and this novel puts me in the magical realm directly. I see myself in the scenes of each chapter. Thank you Author for making the scenes come alive, keep up the good work 👍.
So I like books that have villianess on them because let me just be honest, that's my jam! The first chapter actually exceeded my expectations and I just needed to rush to the second. Nice write up, dear. Good luck in Spirity!
Reading the blurb of this great book I became captivated and drawn to give a review. What a word again “The truth was a curse ” surely the author knows her way with words. I am joining you on this rollercoaster ride. I recommend this book to everyone too. This is a book you don't want to miss.
Great start to a promising story. It is not your run of the mill Mary Sue, but different. The MC is honest and genuine, very original. She will grow on you and you will feel her turmoil. The writing is very detailed, that describes little things and you feel like you are watching a movie. The main story doesn't dilly dally but start moving along right away. World building is simply great. Magic and the process of enchantments are described in great details and flow easily. Highly recommended. I will continue to read it. Thank you so much, Author.
I'm I the only one who wants to strangle Kalliope's neck 😂😂😂 OH MY GOD!!! this child is so evil it's irritating and fascinating😡😡😡😂😂😂 If you are looking for a something to read that makes you cry and laugh at the same time, I recommend you find author Kiara ASAP! This is AMAZING!!!!! I'm cheering for you author!!!!!!!
so much mystery in the first few chapter that get me hooked on this book. Amazing world building, i could imagine how it looks like. i feel this book have a big potential, keep up your good job 😆
Very captivating! The synopsis alone is drawing readers in. First few chapters are quite enjoyable so far! Liking the smooth-flowing interaction between the characters (ㆁωㆁ) I'm also attracted to the character design of the Female Lead. I enjoy villainess stories, after all (≧▽≦) The plot itself is quite intriguing - I can tell that it has a lot going on (ʘᴗʘ✿) Keep up the good work, author! Cheering for you 🔥
What can I possibly say? It was perfectly written. It was descriptive and unique. I kind of wish it was completed because it has been really good so far. The main Character is really something else. She is captivating, strong, and powerful. This has been a truly amazing story so far and I cant wait to read the rest.
A beautiful cover page! Proper synopsis. I like your main character and her strong personality. The plot is interesting. You're doing great! Good luck with the contest!
Stability of updates : obviously it's very good. Character design : Much development here for our MC i'm really satisfied, characters feel like living being, they're interesting and deep. Story development : That's personnal here, but i really like the flow of this story, fast or slow when it need to be. World background : Flourishing world.
The writing quality and the pace were quite good. did I forget to mention that the plot was interesting? oops silly me. XD. anyway, it's a good read. Hopefully, the author would continue to update.
So far so good! Amazing in its first chap and I can see its potential! No obvious grammar mistakes and has a great vocabulary of words in it. I am impressed! I hope I can be that playful with words myself! Kudos and good luck on Spirity!
I'm currently at chapter 67 and had to pause so that I could write this review. I love this story. Starting with a strong female lead with vengeance in her heart, I adore this character. The author provides action packed magical fight scenes and timely background information to assist with understanding and empathy. There is attention to detail in character descriptions, as well as world view. I'm going back to reading now. Thanks author!