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Liked the start of the story a bit, but after the system changed and the chapter with the gods I really started disliking this story. The system change I thought was lazy writing. And the chapter with the gods was actually useless, it was super vague and nothing was explained about their intentions or what the point of the system was. The lemons aren’t great, I don’t think the Mc is written well, he doesn’t do much. I don’t think this story has much going for it
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I wont waste my time writing a coherent review, in short the MC is a beta c*ckold similar to the author. ---- Reviews are being deleted too as there's no way this has 4 stars.
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Acho justo gosto muito do desenvolvimento da história, como centralizada na casa não parece muito o sistema,o mundo, outros personagens,mas tá acima da média muito bom.
I liked your story but am going have to drop the mc complains about himself way too much and it annoys my soul so much. I stoped at chapter 48
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l love the story the only thing that i am sad about is how much the author gives new chapter which is always random sometimes a week sometimes 2 weeks sometimes a month
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why is MC despite having his memories stutters in front of his new family and act like a lost poppy in front his father? it's so irritating that I want to bash someone's head
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nice,keep going. just kill old man bastar and steal gilr i too want shiboraretai with oneeee-sannnn[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Creonque ya di mi reseña pero lo hago de nuevo. Me encanta aunwue sinceramente la anterior era mejor. ................. .............. .........
Me gusta la historia, es más calmada de lo que esperaba. No como otras que solo llegan se la meten y ya es algo aburrido que siempre pase eso
Love the book. Wish could forget this book so i can read it again bc its a good. Its being a yr without update please dont drop.
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Liked the start of the story a bit, but after the system changed and the chapter with the gods I really started disliking this story. The system change I thought was lazy writing. And the chapter with the gods was actually useless, it was super vague and nothing was explained about their intentions or what the point of the system was. The lemons aren’t great, I don’t think the Mc is written well, he doesn’t do much. I don’t think this story has much going for it
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I wont waste my time writing a coherent review, in short the MC is a beta c*ckold similar to the author. ---- Reviews are being deleted too as there's no way this has 4 stars.
Thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks
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BUST GALLONS OF NUTS. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...................................
Excelente historia. ,....................................................................................................................................
Acho justo gosto muito do desenvolvimento da história, como centralizada na casa não parece muito o sistema,o mundo, outros personagens,mas tá acima da média muito bom.
I liked your story but am going have to drop the mc complains about himself way too much and it annoys my soul so much. I stoped at chapter 48
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I like this new novel and the old. More chapter.............................................................................................
l love the story the only thing that i am sad about is how much the author gives new chapter which is always random sometimes a week sometimes 2 weeks sometimes a month
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why is MC despite having his memories stutters in front of his new family and act like a lost poppy in front his father? it's so irritating that I want to bash someone's head
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Tiết lộ Spoiler nice,keep going. just kill old man bastar and steal gilr i too want shiboraretai with oneeee-sannnn[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Creonque ya di mi reseña pero lo hago de nuevo. Me encanta aunwue sinceramente la anterior era mejor. ................. .............. .........
Me gusta la historia, es más calmada de lo que esperaba. No como otras que solo llegan se la meten y ya es algo aburrido que siempre pase eso
Love the book. Wish could forget this book so i can read it again bc its a good. Its being a yr without update please dont drop.