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Viết đánh giáReally nice and unique take on world exploration, base and army building and lots of lewds. Instead of the traditional fantasy world with Elves, Dwarves, Goblins, Etc... it is focused on an underwater world were so far, every inch of the surface is covered in water. A really nice take on evolution and modifications to enhance the main character over time instead of cheats, levels and skills. Overall a really nice read.
This novel feels like some teen wrote it after watching 18+ video. It would be fine if 18+ chapters were like 1 in ten chapters not every 2 Ps(english is not my main language)
Love the story and development about it also I would like to know if your going to do another novel like this one but in a different environment
The moment it says altered carbon.. I'm already sold... 😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣
The story is great, i just saw it go from 99 to 109 episodes in one day. I think the story would in many places benefit from more detail, since it's about conveying an already existing thought world to readers. So then when i only find out important details after half an episode i'm gonna have to retcon my version of the fantasy world because i only found those things out later. Otherwise this is great because of the frequent updates and i after 2 days of reading am now at chapter 90 will start to proofread because i want to be of use. I already get this story for free so i'm gonna give back what i can. What astounded me though was the enormous amount of people who supposedly read the story already, about 400 thousand at this instant, compared to the amount of reader participation. The only problem i have with the story sometimes is that the links are basically useless by themselves since they can't be copied and the embeds on a comment on that link's paragraph stopped at some point in the story.
It's an okay novel to read.. 🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🤣🖖
Tiết lộ SpoilerHi so i just wanted to say that i think this novel is amazing i have never seen or heard about anything like this before and i do really enjoy it just wanted to let you know that your story really fascinates me and i look forward to the upcoming chapter's 🙂
A great story so far with many ideas that I haven't read about in any other novel I have read on this site. The Author is also really active and often time uses links to images or videos to show what he is describing or talking about.(not that the author's descriptions are not good enough, they definitely are) The pacing of the story and the characters are quite interesting and alien. So you don't have all intelligent life in this novel thinking like a human which is nice and a good change of pace.
please don't drop this book i finally find some who shares a view of a world i like. the story is great the Grammer is good and there plot is awesome. keep up the fantastic book and I look forward to all the u write.[img=recommend]
I admit I loved this from the first chapter. [img=update] I will follow this book too its completion and hope it. ever ends. well thought out and executed. no overly late info dumps. and I've your discriptiveness. keep up the good work.
A very interesting story with exceptional telling. All the bio and physic explanations and ideas are fantastic as I love those parts in stories. A little bit too kinky but otherwise nice. Can´t wait to read more.
यह किताब बहुत बढ़िया बहुत ही दिलचस्प जिस मैं एलियंस के बारे मैं लिखा है और इसमें एलियंस के सेक्सी दृश्य जिसे पढ़ने से बहुत अच्छा लगता है. ( . Y . ) ( . Y . ) ( . Y . ) ( . Y . ) ( . Y . )
WATER IS THE WAY TO GO BOYYYYYYY! I HAVE BOTHING ELSE TO SAY but I'm running out of energy now so mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Well, im gonna obviously give myself 5 stars, as commented you can tell me things about the book on the discord server, or just commenting on this comment.
Really nice and unique take on world exploration, base and army building and lots of lewds. Instead of the traditional fantasy world with Elves, Dwarves, Goblins, Etc... it is focused on an underwater world were so far, every inch of the surface is covered in water. A really nice take on evolution and modifications to enhance the main character over time instead of cheats, levels and skills. Overall a really nice read.
This novel feels like some teen wrote it after watching 18+ video. It would be fine if 18+ chapters were like 1 in ten chapters not every 2 Ps(english is not my main language)
Love the story and development about it also I would like to know if your going to do another novel like this one but in a different environment
The moment it says altered carbon.. I'm already sold... 😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣
The story is great, i just saw it go from 99 to 109 episodes in one day. I think the story would in many places benefit from more detail, since it's about conveying an already existing thought world to readers. So then when i only find out important details after half an episode i'm gonna have to retcon my version of the fantasy world because i only found those things out later. Otherwise this is great because of the frequent updates and i after 2 days of reading am now at chapter 90 will start to proofread because i want to be of use. I already get this story for free so i'm gonna give back what i can. What astounded me though was the enormous amount of people who supposedly read the story already, about 400 thousand at this instant, compared to the amount of reader participation. The only problem i have with the story sometimes is that the links are basically useless by themselves since they can't be copied and the embeds on a comment on that link's paragraph stopped at some point in the story.
It's an okay novel to read.. 🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🖖🤣🖖
Tiết lộ SpoilerHi so i just wanted to say that i think this novel is amazing i have never seen or heard about anything like this before and i do really enjoy it just wanted to let you know that your story really fascinates me and i look forward to the upcoming chapter's 🙂
A great story so far with many ideas that I haven't read about in any other novel I have read on this site. The Author is also really active and often time uses links to images or videos to show what he is describing or talking about.(not that the author's descriptions are not good enough, they definitely are) The pacing of the story and the characters are quite interesting and alien. So you don't have all intelligent life in this novel thinking like a human which is nice and a good change of pace.
please don't drop this book i finally find some who shares a view of a world i like. the story is great the Grammer is good and there plot is awesome. keep up the fantastic book and I look forward to all the u write.[img=recommend]
I admit I loved this from the first chapter. [img=update] I will follow this book too its completion and hope it. ever ends. well thought out and executed. no overly late info dumps. and I've your discriptiveness. keep up the good work.
A very interesting story with exceptional telling. All the bio and physic explanations and ideas are fantastic as I love those parts in stories. A little bit too kinky but otherwise nice. Can´t wait to read more.
यह किताब बहुत बढ़िया बहुत ही दिलचस्प जिस मैं एलियंस के बारे मैं लिखा है और इसमें एलियंस के सेक्सी दृश्य जिसे पढ़ने से बहुत अच्छा लगता है. ( . Y . ) ( . Y . ) ( . Y . ) ( . Y . ) ( . Y . )
WATER IS THE WAY TO GO BOYYYYYYY! I HAVE BOTHING ELSE TO SAY but I'm running out of energy now so mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Well, im gonna obviously give myself 5 stars, as commented you can tell me things about the book on the discord server, or just commenting on this comment.