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Even the Destroyer of Gods must have a beginning. In a world where human race is connected with the universe, even a human can rise up to that title. This novel is about how a human reached that place. It's about the journey only the strong can bear to take
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So I just saw the author of this novel asked me to review it after reading a different review I made. I happen to be at work at the moment so it isn't in depth but I got a good feel for it from what I managed to read. In all honesty it is not half bad. The characters have personalities, a history, and interact like normal people. World building is interesting, the idea of a Galatic Alliance always means you can stretch your legs for character design/plot elements. You can see the passion in the writing, and I am assuming this is a new writer making their first work. My only real gripe is the grammar of the novel. Post, Current, and Past tensing seems to be all over the place creating difficulty for what point the story is currently at/referencing. The flavor of words is there, not a lot of repeats and some interesting descriptors. However sometimes the "impact" of a sentence can be ruined as there is to much "flavor" so an impactfull statement may fall flat in the crowd. Or they are just not used in the correct context. Another gripe I'd a general sense of over explaining. There was a line that stood out to me literally stating that a crowd of people some who are in suits, reporters, etc, is "foreshadowing" the arrival of someone important. I as a reader understand the context of a stated situation. It is the same as bad movie exposition where you have never seen a character before and then the MC says "O Bob you are my best friend, I have known you since I was 5, I would do anything for you!" Where as good exposition would be maybe the MC walks up slings his arm over Bob's shoulder and starts a conversation with him. I can infer that due to the physical touch and Bob not being upset they must know each other pretty well, and through that I can start inferring about their relationship until the next thing happens that would give me more info. Subtlety like that can really bring your writing to the next level. Finding that line to ride between over explaining and "having conversations from looking at eachother" can be hard. But with some effort it will be worth it in the long run and this can be applied to casual conversation in the story as well. Obviously I do not know what languages the author is fluent in so this may be as simple as English being a difficult language. But it seems more to me that they took "grab them by the eyes" and went a little to much with it. With some simple editing and R&D this could be a good novel so I do look forward to future chapters. At which point I will either update or make a different review.
I really like the idea of the Alliance and people being able to travel between planets and communicate freely. It's a complex and interesting system. The writing quality is okay, the author is still new to writing. Keep up the good work! :)
First of all, the story is very well written. I love the world setting and it's even explained in a very smooth way that makes such complex things easily comprehensive. Also, the characters are well defined, Otsuka seems pretty humane as as for Araz , those are the type of people who get into trouble very easily. however you can never hate them. I'm just so done with worrying about these people. Hope to see more of it and the day when Regi and Wera realise it
Good plot and very detalied too . This story has good potential .I hope our MC becomes powerful and reigns over all superpower users .Keep it up and update more ..
A very decent read. Our mc redeems himself very early and becomes a much more promising mc. I have high hopes for this novel as the plot is very diverse and there’s so many unexplored aspects to still talk about. Writing quality is Okay and there aren’t many grammatical errors so all good. Great job Author!
this was the first time to read the sci-fi genre for me. It is still the beginning but I liked it too much. The invasion begins directly. Thank you to the author for sharing a good one like this.
The story is really good, I enjoy the story even though it's only 4 chapters. It's well written and the characters are well described. I want to see more of these! Keep up the good work!
Well i am interested in this but some times i have to re-read thing on things well whatever story is interesting I would like to read it again again if if need . Some people comment that they are glued to chapter updates, well they are not wrong. Just read enjoy. lastly Support the author (ﾉ*ФωФ)ﾉ by (/ $ _ $ )/[img=recommend][img=coins]
i like the way you combined the elements and your story is really good, your background is great, so is your MC and it is well written, great work author, i will keep on reading, i surely deserves the five star . Good luck and i hope to see future chapters.
i love this story. This is my first time reading a story of this genre. (I was so excited when I read it that I forgot what genre it was) I'm still a beginner. What's more, I found a few things I could learn while reading. good job and keep up the spirit to continue this story. 😊👍
Nice work, author. keep it up! Your web novel is Awesome. Your story development is good enough. 👍👍👍Hope you will own your goal soon.🌱🌱
I enjoy the read, it's pretty good so far even though it only has 4 chapters. The wording play is very creative and it gets it point across without confusion. There's rarely any grammatical errors. The story background is quite good but I would like to see more about the world in the future chapters. I am quite happy that the author updates is quite frequently. As for character design I think there could be more details about the characters specially the more important ones. I hope this review helps ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
Here is my thought about this Novel: The world building in this novel is quite nice especially with aliens, different planets, and even how they communicate with each other or I can say their own form of social media. So far the setting up about the MC is quite well done especially the beginning chapter and the last chapter that he finally realized the horrible truth he face. Overall, this novel has great potential, especially with the unique setting and the main character's personal goal that will be very interesting. Can't wait for another chapters. I think that's all I have to say and thank you, keep up the good work
Tiết lộ Spoiler
The author has a vivid imagination with the ability to combine elements from different fantasy sections. Nice flow and the story builds up beautifully. Good work,keep it up!
well written for a new author............................ gods and asuras are really interesting to read............................ keep up the hard work ...........
it has a good concept and the development's interesting enough it's a bit of a product of its time but that's not necessarily a bad thing as long as it's done well.
I loved the first couple of chapters and the world set-up is great it has a good convincing world that I am reminiscent of. The characters are well described.
The story is really good. I liked how you used the words like BHAVA, YOGIN, and I think there are more in the coming parts. I'm looking forward to such words and keep up your words like this it's interesting to hear such unique words. [img=recommend]
There's plot twists and all kinds of craziness right from the beginning. The MC also has a unique story and I am intrigued to see more from this.
Well done for writing your first book. The idea is interesting and I enjoyed the first chapters. Good luck in this entry for WSA and for the future. What I don’t like it’s a bit slow but many people will not mind the pace✌🏻👏🏻👍🏻
I have to say Amazing work dear author! The characters are unique in their own way and the story lines are great. I love how you explained the relationship between the aliens and the humans. Keep doing a great job author, will be waiting for new updates!😊
This is pretty unique! A scifi alien evolution plot! The worldbuilding is so good that you can see the images. Good read, definitely recommended!
Three chapters in and we're off to a great start. The pacing is nice as the first few introductory chapters. The world building is really the best part of the story with several nice imageries given in the descriptions. This story has great potential if the plot develops well in the future. Great job, continue writing!
Overall an amazing story I can't wait to see what happens next. that said some of the writing didn't make sense or flow well and the grammar needs some work.
this novel is so so so creative, so gripping ahhhh! i can keep reading it for hours!! the world background is fascinating, the characters are fun, also all the events flow naturally and the development doesn’t seem rushed. i need more chapters.
Is this what people call "shameless author review"? Well, the novel is gonna develop slowly as the first arc focuses on character development. So please be patient!
Even the Destroyer of Gods must have a beginning. In a world where human race is connected with the universe, even a human can rise up to that title. This novel is about how a human reached that place. It's about the journey only the strong can bear to take
Tiết lộ Spoiler So I just saw the author of this novel asked me to review it after reading a different review I made. I happen to be at work at the moment so it isn't in depth but I got a good feel for it from what I managed to read. In all honesty it is not half bad. The characters have personalities, a history, and interact like normal people. World building is interesting, the idea of a Galatic Alliance always means you can stretch your legs for character design/plot elements. You can see the passion in the writing, and I am assuming this is a new writer making their first work. My only real gripe is the grammar of the novel. Post, Current, and Past tensing seems to be all over the place creating difficulty for what point the story is currently at/referencing. The flavor of words is there, not a lot of repeats and some interesting descriptors. However sometimes the "impact" of a sentence can be ruined as there is to much "flavor" so an impactfull statement may fall flat in the crowd. Or they are just not used in the correct context. Another gripe I'd a general sense of over explaining. There was a line that stood out to me literally stating that a crowd of people some who are in suits, reporters, etc, is "foreshadowing" the arrival of someone important. I as a reader understand the context of a stated situation. It is the same as bad movie exposition where you have never seen a character before and then the MC says "O Bob you are my best friend, I have known you since I was 5, I would do anything for you!" Where as good exposition would be maybe the MC walks up slings his arm over Bob's shoulder and starts a conversation with him. I can infer that due to the physical touch and Bob not being upset they must know each other pretty well, and through that I can start inferring about their relationship until the next thing happens that would give me more info. Subtlety like that can really bring your writing to the next level. Finding that line to ride between over explaining and "having conversations from looking at eachother" can be hard. But with some effort it will be worth it in the long run and this can be applied to casual conversation in the story as well. Obviously I do not know what languages the author is fluent in so this may be as simple as English being a difficult language. But it seems more to me that they took "grab them by the eyes" and went a little to much with it. With some simple editing and R&D this could be a good novel so I do look forward to future chapters. At which point I will either update or make a different review.
I really like the idea of the Alliance and people being able to travel between planets and communicate freely. It's a complex and interesting system. The writing quality is okay, the author is still new to writing. Keep up the good work! :)
First of all, the story is very well written. I love the world setting and it's even explained in a very smooth way that makes such complex things easily comprehensive. Also, the characters are well defined, Otsuka seems pretty humane as as for Araz , those are the type of people who get into trouble very easily. however you can never hate them. I'm just so done with worrying about these people. Hope to see more of it and the day when Regi and Wera realise it
Good plot and very detalied too . This story has good potential .I hope our MC becomes powerful and reigns over all superpower users .Keep it up and update more ..
A very decent read. Our mc redeems himself very early and becomes a much more promising mc. I have high hopes for this novel as the plot is very diverse and there’s so many unexplored aspects to still talk about. Writing quality is Okay and there aren’t many grammatical errors so all good. Great job Author!
this was the first time to read the sci-fi genre for me. It is still the beginning but I liked it too much. The invasion begins directly. Thank you to the author for sharing a good one like this.
The story is really good, I enjoy the story even though it's only 4 chapters. It's well written and the characters are well described. I want to see more of these! Keep up the good work!
Well i am interested in this but some times i have to re-read thing on things well whatever story is interesting I would like to read it again again if if need . Some people comment that they are glued to chapter updates, well they are not wrong. Just read enjoy. lastly Support the author (ﾉ*ФωФ)ﾉ by (/ $ _ $ )/[img=recommend][img=coins]
i like the way you combined the elements and your story is really good, your background is great, so is your MC and it is well written, great work author, i will keep on reading, i surely deserves the five star . Good luck and i hope to see future chapters.
i love this story. This is my first time reading a story of this genre. (I was so excited when I read it that I forgot what genre it was) I'm still a beginner. What's more, I found a few things I could learn while reading. good job and keep up the spirit to continue this story. 😊👍
Nice work, author. keep it up! Your web novel is Awesome. Your story development is good enough. 👍👍👍Hope you will own your goal soon.🌱🌱
I enjoy the read, it's pretty good so far even though it only has 4 chapters. The wording play is very creative and it gets it point across without confusion. There's rarely any grammatical errors. The story background is quite good but I would like to see more about the world in the future chapters. I am quite happy that the author updates is quite frequently. As for character design I think there could be more details about the characters specially the more important ones. I hope this review helps ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
Here is my thought about this Novel: The world building in this novel is quite nice especially with aliens, different planets, and even how they communicate with each other or I can say their own form of social media. So far the setting up about the MC is quite well done especially the beginning chapter and the last chapter that he finally realized the horrible truth he face. Overall, this novel has great potential, especially with the unique setting and the main character's personal goal that will be very interesting. Can't wait for another chapters. I think that's all I have to say and thank you, keep up the good work
Tiết lộ Spoiler The author has a vivid imagination with the ability to combine elements from different fantasy sections. Nice flow and the story builds up beautifully. Good work,keep it up!
well written for a new author............................ gods and asuras are really interesting to read............................ keep up the hard work ...........
it has a good concept and the development's interesting enough it's a bit of a product of its time but that's not necessarily a bad thing as long as it's done well.
I loved the first couple of chapters and the world set-up is great it has a good convincing world that I am reminiscent of. The characters are well described.
The story is really good. I liked how you used the words like BHAVA, YOGIN, and I think there are more in the coming parts. I'm looking forward to such words and keep up your words like this it's interesting to hear such unique words. [img=recommend]
There's plot twists and all kinds of craziness right from the beginning. The MC also has a unique story and I am intrigued to see more from this.
Well done for writing your first book. The idea is interesting and I enjoyed the first chapters. Good luck in this entry for WSA and for the future. What I don’t like it’s a bit slow but many people will not mind the pace✌🏻👏🏻👍🏻
I have to say Amazing work dear author! The characters are unique in their own way and the story lines are great. I love how you explained the relationship between the aliens and the humans. Keep doing a great job author, will be waiting for new updates!😊
This is pretty unique! A scifi alien evolution plot! The worldbuilding is so good that you can see the images. Good read, definitely recommended!
Three chapters in and we're off to a great start. The pacing is nice as the first few introductory chapters. The world building is really the best part of the story with several nice imageries given in the descriptions. This story has great potential if the plot develops well in the future. Great job, continue writing!
Overall an amazing story I can't wait to see what happens next. that said some of the writing didn't make sense or flow well and the grammar needs some work.
this novel is so so so creative, so gripping ahhhh! i can keep reading it for hours!! the world background is fascinating, the characters are fun, also all the events flow naturally and the development doesn’t seem rushed. i need more chapters.
Is this what people call "shameless author review"? Well, the novel is gonna develop slowly as the first arc focuses on character development. So please be patient!