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Very engaging story with good character development! I binged it in one day, now I'm searching for the rest lol. Is there a 2nd novel? Will this one continue?
Author's here! Thanking for having checked my story! I suggest you reading the first 70-80 chapters since that’s when the main themes of the story will begin shaping up. This book is not only about romance (even if from the first chapters it may appear that way) but there is also fantasy, mistery and suspence involved so I understand it may not be everyone’s cup of tea! Still, hope you give it a try and read first 70 chapters before giving it up! Thank you! 💖💖 Have a good day! :)
Author, I think your creativity is spot on, and you have great potential to be successful writer! 💯 Just a bit of advice… Now that you’ve reached the end of this story, it would be a GREAT FAVOR 🙏🏽🙏🏼 to future readers if you could go back and PROOFREAD your work — making grammatical corrections and changing incorrect word usage where applicable. Please STOP using words you don’t fully understand or know how to use in context; seriously, that’s a major issue you have. 😩 It’s okay to use simple language if you have to because it will save the readers a few braincells 🧠 from trying to comprehend what the heck you’re talking about! LOL Overall, it’s a good plot, but the poorly quality writing is quite distracting from the narrative and lowers the mastery of the storyline, especially when the reader has to decipher what you probably… most likely… maybe meant to write. Yet and still, I’m rooting for you! 🙌🏽🙌🏼🙌
I really enjoyed this novel . The story line was really easy to follow and understand. The only problem I had is the pronouns were all mixedup, causing confusion with gender. Also the names were mixed up when speaking about the characters .
Think of Brigerton setting, but fantasy!! 💕💕O—AnD the SLOW BURN was satisfying, realistic, and believable!!!! @Elle_Lynn ‘s Webnovel easily tops my list In the romance genre!
Very loving and touching end to a story that kept me enraptured from the beginning. I loved the family aspect with all immediate and adopted members giving me a sense of nostalgia. Bravo!! *bowing gracefully* ...onto more written works by this same author😉😁😍
Cute storyline 😁💞 The family aspect at the end with a twist for a new adventure for the parents and the kids was better than an abrupt ending in my opinion[img=recommend]. I would have to say the translation and grammar could use a little more work but I was able to read it with little difficulty. I followed this story from the beginning. Keep writing and I will read❤️👍😁
Ahhh!! It's so sickening sweet (LMAO)in this romance but also captivating with the action and adventure. I have been pleasantly surprised how I have been caught up so far and how their twins are such real children 😍. Please keep writing!!
This is well pretty written by author, i am really thankful to you author for giving me this beautiful story, i am in love with that book, I can't express by the world totally fabulous all the parts. 😍😍😍
Loving it!!! Pretty intense love makin… lol Incredible Story plot between 2worlds the myster and suspense among family members and the unknown of not knowing who you are until one day tHat special someone brings it out of you
Tackle the story first. I don't really read romance books, they aren't my thing. Despite that, you've managed to create a lot of clear drama and intrigue in this first chapter, so if I was into romance novels I'm pretty sure I'd keep reading just to find out what was going to happen next. The writing, for the most part, is actually pretty good. There are a fair few syntax errors, that is to say mistakes in sentence structure and grammar mistakes, but not so many that it's overwhelming and ruins the story. The flow of your writing is fairly well defined, things move into one another decently enough, though in some places it can be a little choppy. That's a problem that everyone, including me, has at times though. I think you should be proud of the work you've done here, and I'm sure your flow and overall sentence structure will improve as you continue to write and iron out your style!
Honestly, I didn't read This book yet, but Looking into the synopsis I found this book quite interesting and appealing. The plot is looking very interesting. You are doing a great job.[img=recommend]
This is a gem! I like how the author weave the story. The characters are well written and the plot is really interesting! There are few grammatical errors but that can be remedied by editing. All in all, it was quite a good read!
Interesting Plot, The story managed to pull me in after the first 10 chapters, I'm on the 30th chapter and I'm already in love with the novel. Hope to see more from Author🙂
First of all, wow. That's some really interesting book. I wasn't much a fan of historical novels but your book has changed that perspective of mine. The unique narration style is what gave life to the characters. Everything was well developed. Keep going author, loved your book.
It’s incredibly well writing. All emotions are displayed properly and in detail, but not overly so. The main girl sticks to her personality and I really like that! She wants love, not money. All in all, an amazing novel! 5/5!
The story is catchy and interesting. The plot is set in medieval ear and the character design is set to that exact setting. The narration style is unique and author did a good job in expressing the things or the back ground an even emotions. Looking forward to read more.
The story is interesting...definitely going to read it further!! The story was a bit sad at first but as it continued and showed the FL's side it began to become more of a cute story... Keep writing and Keep updating!!!
The world building is done in a really nice way... no info dumps too which I truly appreciate. It's a pretty straight forward Romance which usually doesn't appeal to me but in this book is so well presented that you are drawn to it. Very pretty cover.
A promising story and a great example of hystorical romance with a hint of magic and mystery that gives it a whole new level of freshness. Nice!
This book definitely has to get out there and become popular because it is really worth it. The opening of this book is so interesting and the language is so relatable. I recommend this book to all.
As the author stated in a previous review, the grammar is holding this novel back. Aside from that, this story is very interesting! The characters and the plot are both unique, the world is interesting, and the characters are quite witty! The dialogue can keep you entertained.
I really enjoyed reading your novel! I would without a doubt recommend this to others. your characters would great and everything seems to be well thought out. Keep it up author and good luck!
I would definitely rate this book a 5 star because of the classic but common supernatural romance plot but the dialogues are the main fire of this book! This is such an underrated book and deserves much more readers so please give this book a shot and you won't regret it! Highly recommended to all fantasy romance lovers!! BEST OF LUCK!
Engaging, straight to the point, and good in direction, this is a romance novel that manages to keep the reader pay attention to what is going to happen next. The early chapters start off great with the introduction of the world, and the situation of said world via dialogue and events the characters go through. There are no info dumps that talk about the history of the setting and so forth. The author does a fantastic job at showing their characters and setting. Good job author. Keep on writing.
The story about the kingdom and referencing the detective at its finest, sherlock holmes. I adore the storyline, the characters, and the plot. I hope you continuing your story because I see potential in your style of writing. Keep it up!
I'll give 5 stars to the novel, because, it is interesting, the story still has few chapters but, I feel that it has a lot of potential. So, I already added to my library, hope to continue reading! Thanks for the new gem my dear author! Keep going, I'm cheering you up from here! xD I'll continue to enjoy the reading, with some tea!
OK, so uhm, why are you here, shouldn't you just form your own opinion. How can other people decide what you like, they like different things so it makes no sense that you listen to the opinion of other people. So, go read now, bye.
Author’s note 🥰 I’m very proud of how my story is developing and I am putting much work into it. I hope you like it and ignore eventual grammar mistakes. I know grammar is a weak point of my novel but I wish you can still give my book a try💖
Very engaging story with good character development! I binged it in one day, now I'm searching for the rest lol. Is there a 2nd novel? Will this one continue?
Author's here! Thanking for having checked my story! I suggest you reading the first 70-80 chapters since that’s when the main themes of the story will begin shaping up. This book is not only about romance (even if from the first chapters it may appear that way) but there is also fantasy, mistery and suspence involved so I understand it may not be everyone’s cup of tea! Still, hope you give it a try and read first 70 chapters before giving it up! Thank you! 💖💖 Have a good day! :)
Author, I think your creativity is spot on, and you have great potential to be successful writer! 💯 Just a bit of advice… Now that you’ve reached the end of this story, it would be a GREAT FAVOR 🙏🏽🙏🏼 to future readers if you could go back and PROOFREAD your work — making grammatical corrections and changing incorrect word usage where applicable. Please STOP using words you don’t fully understand or know how to use in context; seriously, that’s a major issue you have. 😩 It’s okay to use simple language if you have to because it will save the readers a few braincells 🧠 from trying to comprehend what the heck you’re talking about! LOL Overall, it’s a good plot, but the poorly quality writing is quite distracting from the narrative and lowers the mastery of the storyline, especially when the reader has to decipher what you probably… most likely… maybe meant to write. Yet and still, I’m rooting for you! 🙌🏽🙌🏼🙌
I really enjoyed this novel . The story line was really easy to follow and understand. The only problem I had is the pronouns were all mixedup, causing confusion with gender. Also the names were mixed up when speaking about the characters .
Think of Brigerton setting, but fantasy!! 💕💕O—AnD the SLOW BURN was satisfying, realistic, and believable!!!! @Elle_Lynn ‘s Webnovel easily tops my list In the romance genre!
Very loving and touching end to a story that kept me enraptured from the beginning. I loved the family aspect with all immediate and adopted members giving me a sense of nostalgia. Bravo!! *bowing gracefully* ...onto more written works by this same author😉😁😍
Cute storyline 😁💞 The family aspect at the end with a twist for a new adventure for the parents and the kids was better than an abrupt ending in my opinion[img=recommend]. I would have to say the translation and grammar could use a little more work but I was able to read it with little difficulty. I followed this story from the beginning. Keep writing and I will read❤️👍😁
Ahhh!! It's so sickening sweet (LMAO)in this romance but also captivating with the action and adventure. I have been pleasantly surprised how I have been caught up so far and how their twins are such real children 😍. Please keep writing!!
This is well pretty written by author, i am really thankful to you author for giving me this beautiful story, i am in love with that book, I can't express by the world totally fabulous all the parts. 😍😍😍
Loving it!!! Pretty intense love makin… lol Incredible Story plot between 2worlds the myster and suspense among family members and the unknown of not knowing who you are until one day tHat special someone brings it out of you
Tackle the story first. I don't really read romance books, they aren't my thing. Despite that, you've managed to create a lot of clear drama and intrigue in this first chapter, so if I was into romance novels I'm pretty sure I'd keep reading just to find out what was going to happen next. The writing, for the most part, is actually pretty good. There are a fair few syntax errors, that is to say mistakes in sentence structure and grammar mistakes, but not so many that it's overwhelming and ruins the story. The flow of your writing is fairly well defined, things move into one another decently enough, though in some places it can be a little choppy. That's a problem that everyone, including me, has at times though. I think you should be proud of the work you've done here, and I'm sure your flow and overall sentence structure will improve as you continue to write and iron out your style!
Honestly, I didn't read This book yet, but Looking into the synopsis I found this book quite interesting and appealing. The plot is looking very interesting. You are doing a great job.[img=recommend]
This is a gem! I like how the author weave the story. The characters are well written and the plot is really interesting! There are few grammatical errors but that can be remedied by editing. All in all, it was quite a good read!
Interesting Plot, The story managed to pull me in after the first 10 chapters, I'm on the 30th chapter and I'm already in love with the novel. Hope to see more from Author🙂
First of all, wow. That's some really interesting book. I wasn't much a fan of historical novels but your book has changed that perspective of mine. The unique narration style is what gave life to the characters. Everything was well developed. Keep going author, loved your book.
It’s incredibly well writing. All emotions are displayed properly and in detail, but not overly so. The main girl sticks to her personality and I really like that! She wants love, not money. All in all, an amazing novel! 5/5!
The story is catchy and interesting. The plot is set in medieval ear and the character design is set to that exact setting. The narration style is unique and author did a good job in expressing the things or the back ground an even emotions. Looking forward to read more.
The story is interesting...definitely going to read it further!! The story was a bit sad at first but as it continued and showed the FL's side it began to become more of a cute story... Keep writing and Keep updating!!!
The world building is done in a really nice way... no info dumps too which I truly appreciate. It's a pretty straight forward Romance which usually doesn't appeal to me but in this book is so well presented that you are drawn to it. Very pretty cover.
A promising story and a great example of hystorical romance with a hint of magic and mystery that gives it a whole new level of freshness. Nice!
This book definitely has to get out there and become popular because it is really worth it. The opening of this book is so interesting and the language is so relatable. I recommend this book to all.
As the author stated in a previous review, the grammar is holding this novel back. Aside from that, this story is very interesting! The characters and the plot are both unique, the world is interesting, and the characters are quite witty! The dialogue can keep you entertained.
I really enjoyed reading your novel! I would without a doubt recommend this to others. your characters would great and everything seems to be well thought out. Keep it up author and good luck!
I would definitely rate this book a 5 star because of the classic but common supernatural romance plot but the dialogues are the main fire of this book! This is such an underrated book and deserves much more readers so please give this book a shot and you won't regret it! Highly recommended to all fantasy romance lovers!! BEST OF LUCK!
Engaging, straight to the point, and good in direction, this is a romance novel that manages to keep the reader pay attention to what is going to happen next. The early chapters start off great with the introduction of the world, and the situation of said world via dialogue and events the characters go through. There are no info dumps that talk about the history of the setting and so forth. The author does a fantastic job at showing their characters and setting. Good job author. Keep on writing.
The story about the kingdom and referencing the detective at its finest, sherlock holmes. I adore the storyline, the characters, and the plot. I hope you continuing your story because I see potential in your style of writing. Keep it up!
I'll give 5 stars to the novel, because, it is interesting, the story still has few chapters but, I feel that it has a lot of potential. So, I already added to my library, hope to continue reading! Thanks for the new gem my dear author! Keep going, I'm cheering you up from here! xD I'll continue to enjoy the reading, with some tea!
OK, so uhm, why are you here, shouldn't you just form your own opinion. How can other people decide what you like, they like different things so it makes no sense that you listen to the opinion of other people. So, go read now, bye.
Author’s note 🥰 I’m very proud of how my story is developing and I am putting much work into it. I hope you like it and ignore eventual grammar mistakes. I know grammar is a weak point of my novel but I wish you can still give my book a try💖