Re: Hero Camp!

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Nr_Yet1208

The first thing I noticed was the quality of writing. It was pretty good. The beginning was slow and some part was a little monotonous. But the action started soon enough. Overall it's a well-written story.

LV 13

IkuSaari

The main character is really sharp, yet not too powerful or clever to be relatable. I find this story easy and enjoyable to read due to the fact that the language flows naturally. The central concept is also very intriguing. Everyone loves an underdog story, because there is room for the MC to progress and grow. Great work!

LV 13

Jo_J

First of all, the genre it's not my cup of tea, but I have to admit that is a pleasure to read your story. The descriptions are nicely written, the main lead is expressive and the storyline is addictive. Well done! You don't struggle with the language so it's your advantage over the rest (non-English speakers), use it well! All the best!

LV 11

Yvcme

Potential massive .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 14

Mineva

I don't know what it is about this story that attracted me. It could be the excellent artwork that represents the character and the feel of the story well. It could also be that this is just a great story that deserves your time. Check it out!

LV 2

Sonder_Ella

Hi, Your story seems like something I would be nose deep in on a daily basis. Totally loved your writing style and the character development. Happy writing! :)

LV 2

miu_hozuki

This is the genre I like. So, chances are I am going to be far more forgiving than those who don't like the genre. That being said, the book is good in it's own right. The language is smooth, the story flows neither too fast, nor to slow, it's a compelling read to the end.

LV 14

KageMugen

Reviewed after chapter 6: The Pros: Great grammar and pace World building is well developed and fused into the story The Cons: Characters seem a bit flat and accepting the story without any doubts or panic Characters who die so far leave you without any emotional attachment like cannon fodder Idiotic level 7 All in all it was entertaining so far.

LV 2

meixiaolian

How to join Hero Camp? This book is quite interesting to read and when the author write "prey and predators", I never come across to a novel like this before. Author is descriptive enough to let the readers imagine the world where the MC is in.

LV 2

Yairy

I have a soft spot for systems, as they take you away from daily life and bring you into a world you can enjoy. This story's writing is well done, the main character seems interesting too. As this is only the beginning, I'm excited to see where it goes. Thanks for the story so far, author! Best of luck to you!

LV 2

Andrew_Oak

A great story that creates a nice and sympathetic mood. I loved the dynamics of the story and the details of the world in this book. Especially the personality traits of the characters in the book are nice. Thank you for your creativity author and good luck with the sequels.

LV 1

Cloki

Author here, I appreciate all feedback. If you think something was interesting, let me know! If you thought something was disinteresting, let me know! I wanna make sure this story appeals to a wide audience.

LV 4

Mel_Aniv

The protagonist was likeable and has his emotions fleshed out. It was very nice reading this novel as I saw potential in this author's work. The narration was splendidly done for the readers to easily read and has its immersion within it. Its charm was very good as I saw the story development was in a good pacing. Overall, a nice read! Gotta recommend this to others!

LV 10

BlindBandit

I read the synopsis, and it intrigues me to give it a go, and better than I expected, The story building is superb, The characters are lifelike especially The Main Characters Characteristics can be relatable to a slightly smart person IRL. not too smart like aka. Albert and not too stupid like aka Karens calling the stores manager.. overall its good 5/5. keep up the great work author! Kudos to you!

LV 3

Campoccino

The writing quality in itself is good. You can understand the situation of the main character, even the part at the beginning when he was slowly regaining his senses. Every part after that, the rescue and the fight scene were both nice creating an overall wholesome first chapter. I've yet to read the other chapters but from this point I know that it'll be something epic!

LV 3

TofSpades

The world building is going well and the writing style is very unique. As the book still only has 15 chapters, there's not much to say but Great work by the Author! It's written very well.

LV 14

PinnacleExistence

This is great. A nice first pov that makes sense and you can feel the main character and the others as well, I was surprised by this last one. It's pretty hard to keep those two emotions in check so that it doesn't feel one-dimensional. And then the way that the author presented the world didn't feel like an info dump, but you already figured a lot about it. Keep up the good work.

LV 4

Geminel

Solid first few chapters, really gives the feel of a classic rpg without actually being gamey about it. Has a much better flow and level of description than a lot of other first person narratives. Looking forward to reading more in the future for sure.

LV 1

Hosn

this may sims like I am giving it high ratong but the book is actually good the only problem you may have with this is that its chapters are longer than abridged books.

LV 2

Anthony_Galloway

This story's beginning isn't bad I like how it was detailed and let you know what was happening in a single moment makes me have to imagine I like it a nice book to the author.