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amazing I would love to see more and I really would not like to see this novel being dropped it is very interesting to me because I have never seen one similar to this
5 ⭐ - writing quality 3 ⭐ - updating stability 4 ⭐ - story development 5 ⭐ - character design 5 ⭐ - world background =~ 4.4 ⭐ Your story has potential, but you need to improve the stability so that more people will be interested in the story, when you improve your stability I'll come back and increase the rating, but for now I'll leave it safe in the library.
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Hope this continues, the story seems very intriguing. He's made a cliche trope feel unique already. very good flow in the story.
I'm very much enjoying it so far, the grammar could use some work and some parts of the story could be better developed but I think that this story has a lot of potential.
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amazing I would love to see more and I really would not like to see this novel being dropped it is very interesting to me because I have never seen one similar to this
5 ⭐ - writing quality 3 ⭐ - updating stability 4 ⭐ - story development 5 ⭐ - character design 5 ⭐ - world background =~ 4.4 ⭐ Your story has potential, but you need to improve the stability so that more people will be interested in the story, when you improve your stability I'll come back and increase the rating, but for now I'll leave it safe in the library.
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Hope this continues, the story seems very intriguing. He's made a cliche trope feel unique already. very good flow in the story.
I'm very much enjoying it so far, the grammar could use some work and some parts of the story could be better developed but I think that this story has a lot of potential.
Please update uwnwbwhwusbebshsusjsbvtddtyyhgfffrggbbjrjrjdndisoxjdbdhduxuxjdndbdhdudhsbwbahsushsbshusbdhsjdhdhsusnsbsyusbsgsudjshdhdhdhhhhbbb
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