Heroes Reborn

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Slan

I've never been a fan of people who write a novel as if it were a script. in my point of view it ruins the thrill of reading, it seems like I'm reading a script. Nor do I like that in addition to the ‘protagonist’ there are his friends, do not ask me why I have simply never liked this type of novel.(excuse my english)

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Saintbarbido

You're all over the place. The plot isn't that interesting and the grammar is a chore to read. Don't make things happen because you can. I'm not telling you how to write your book because I hate being told how to myself. Great idea, poor execution.

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Asta_sama

I really like how powe rank are in this but can u use explains rank of other hero so all how par his is in food chain, and more details about universe timeline and mix up

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Soul_Of_The_Wing

Honestly has to be one of my favorite fanfics, it's just good quality, without sacrificing intrest levels and has a good base for the mcs ability. Author if you drop I'll riot!

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OnlyMesha

Dude ur still legend at mobile legend you should play duo with your best friend that way u can get to mythic really fast up up up up up up up up up

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SORCERERSUPREME_7

this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..

LV 4

ANANTA

To the Author, Make MC an Anti-Hero with Solid full BLACK ASSASSIN SUIT! Make the MC The Master Of All Things- Martial Arts(Chi, Energies, and more), Magic( Rune, Wizardery, Sorcery or More) Science(Inventor, Scientist in all aspect, Engineer) and Bring all characters from comic both western and eastern characters. Hope to see these soon. Thanks! Reader.

LV 14

Arbarelo

it's decent but the MC Just go around collecting powers and barely uses them and messing around marvel's movies and TV series. what's missing Is a bit more original content. BTW i dropped at ch.13

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LazyPandaman

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SORCERERSUPREME_7

this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..

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starking

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SORCERERSUPREME_7

this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..

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Fausto_Neto

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DLife7

Over all this is a very good story. The main character is realatable and the powers are intresting. It says it has a system but it only helpes manage his powers. Give it a try😀😀

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SORCERERSUPREME_7

this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..

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starking

Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank

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OnlyMesha

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Hopefully, get your groove back with a continuous update! Also, try working more on putting up fight scenes instead of time skips and letting most of the clones do all the work, if not elaborate more on the events where the clones take stuffs.