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I'm a simple man I see potential Yuri content I click call me shameless if you may but that's exactly what makes me cultured. Please continue this master piece.
As a shameless author it is my duty to give myself I 5 star rating so do it I shall. Yes yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup
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this story is just as good as your other stories and I'm looking forward for more. I also kinda want this one to be a futa one as well since it Yuri but she use magic spell to become a futa. please keep up the good.
I'm honestly clapping seeing how much better this is than so many of the authors other fics, Of course exaggeration is still there, but much more tame and easier to take in. A few parts on how god is super evil could be removed since GOD still has a bottom line I would like to think. Quality could still be improved, but overall this is much better than your other works. :3
I liked the prologue, and that you do not start in the canon, it was what I liked the most, I prefer that it start before where there were wars so that it is tempered or that it is an important figure, be it with a tragic past, it keeps taking chapters, great start.
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I like..........it..... 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘🦻🦻🦻🦻🦻🦻🦻🦻🦻🦻🦻🦻🦻🦻🦻
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I'm a simple man I see potential Yuri content I click call me shameless if you may but that's exactly what makes me cultured. Please continue this master piece.
As a shameless author it is my duty to give myself I 5 star rating so do it I shall. Yes yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup
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this story is just as good as your other stories and I'm looking forward for more. I also kinda want this one to be a futa one as well since it Yuri but she use magic spell to become a futa. please keep up the good.
I'm honestly clapping seeing how much better this is than so many of the authors other fics, Of course exaggeration is still there, but much more tame and easier to take in. A few parts on how god is super evil could be removed since GOD still has a bottom line I would like to think. Quality could still be improved, but overall this is much better than your other works. :3
I liked the prologue, and that you do not start in the canon, it was what I liked the most, I prefer that it start before where there were wars so that it is tempered or that it is an important figure, be it with a tragic past, it keeps taking chapters, great start.
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