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As of Epilogue Vol 2: Amazing pacing, the characters are continuing to grow and develop, the stakes are being set and the threat is real each time they enter a fight. I love how realistic the dialogue is; written descriptions and prose are beautiful; and grammatical errors are hard to find. I’m routinely impressed at the quality of this work. Thank you and I’m so happy that this novel is now a part of the privilege status!
one of the stories that I have invested time to read and I really enjoyed it.I'm kind of hoping/praying for more but it has to end at some point.thank you author! [img=recommend]
This has been a ride, from getting frustrated witht the characters for not JUST TALKING TO EACHOTHER to having to deal with the struggles they go through. Its been great, Curses the fact that it doesn’t end super happily though, Why D:
this was so captivating actually the first I stumbled on after downloading the app surely it had proven to me that it's worth it sure 5 stars
one of the best stories I've ever seen I'm excited to be able to slowly but surely read since I have to earn the passes. I've never been hit with awe and now I have I am in love with all the characters....its one of the best stories you'll find and its my num. one fave you need to read this for sure
Great writing and wonderful, believable characters. The story is fun to read and the world is an interesting setting, but the characters are the real centers of interest for me. After getting to know the characters, I actually understand who they are and why they do the things they do and, more amazingly, I totally believe in the relationship the main characters built.
Been reading this as guest and Ive sign up here to appreciate and give you some stars. Nice story, esp since its Yuri. Like the charac devs. Keep it up. <3
Не знаю, насколько целесообразно оставлять на англоязычном сайте отзыв на русском, но, думаю, если кто-то пропустит это через переводчик будет намного понятней, чем если я буду писать на английском с тонной ошибок. Так вот, о романе. Первое впечатление, когда я только начал читать, было просто прекрасным. Главная героиня просто прекрасно проработана и действительно чувствуется живой, а не пустышкой. Про второстепенных персонажей тоже особо плохо отзываться не буду. Сам сюжет в принципе ожидаемый: Есть плохой парень, которому надо надрать зад, есть герои, которые избранные богами, и которые этому злодею будут противостоять. Вот только, в отличие от большинства романов, здесь никому внезапные читы на голову не упадут. Герои часто получают по заднице. Само их развитие, как личностей, тоже вполне устраивает. Хотя, как по мне, всё как то ну слишком быстро. Они только палки в руки взяли, а их уже в ад кидают. И я вот читаю и, по ощущениям, уже скоро как бы и конец. Но ты смотришь, а там ещё хренова туча глав и становится интересно, а что, собственно там дальше? Романтика тут просто класс. В отличие от большинства других книг, где у главного героя больше одного партнёра, тут всё вокруг него одного не вертится. То есть все три персонажа взаимодействуют друг с другом в полной мере, а не только вылизывают главного героя. Сами сцены выглядят просто отлично, хотя, честно говоря, то, как начались их отношения немного натянуты. Одна просто сказала, что она провинилась, так что бери меня полностью. Другая сначала вела себя как то даже невинно, будто не особо понимала отношения в таком плане, но потом оказалось, что она вполне опытна в этом плане. Хотя её ситуация всё-таки лучше выглядит, чем первая. А вот мир немного подкачал. Я, конечно, ещё не прочитал прямо все вышедшие главы, но на данный момент он мне представляется, как просто случайно раскиданные недалеко друг от друга города, ничем не связанные. Может быть это так ощущается, потому что в ранних главах особо об устройстве цивилизации мало что сказано было? Возможно. Но если отбросить эту часть, то всё вполне сносно. В заключении скажу, что я продолжу читать. Может, за это время я ещё изменю некоторые оценки или добавлю чуть больше своих впечатлений, но на данный момент мне просто интересно, что же будет дальше? Ах, да, за грамматику ничего не скажу, мой английский не настолько хорош, как то разглагольствовать на эту тему. Хотя по ощущениям всё очень даже неплохо.
Very interesting setting. Although the first villain was a little cliche, the main characters (MC and love interests) were nicely done and their romance was wholesome too.
the story is well plotted, but the fear and shyness of the zayama in there relation ship is really unnecessary. also the holding back feelings and stuff kinda can't relate, blondey is outgoing so sharing her feelings kinda seems like her thing...no? other than that it's good
Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading.
Tiết lộ Spoiler
Hello! I'm the author of this story. If you have any questions about what you might be able to expect here or something you want to know more about, or whatever, do let me know!
Trust me its worth it. Character design- check Story pace-check World- check Read it
I just found this novel last week and I have binge readto chapter 88 in 3 days. This is an amazing story! Keep up the amazing story and the interesting characters.👍
As of the end of Vol 3 (chapter 200): The writing continues to be superb and the characters all continue to grow and change. Stakes have been raised, and events are fully in motion. Honestly, can’t even put in words how much I love this story.
To make up for the other guy who put a 1-Star just for nothing. Smh... This site is a lost cause with all the $tupid readers spamming their nonsense everywhere.
Truthfully, I'm only writing a second review for the Halloween event but this novel is amazing and it's become one of my favourites. I love the character interactions, the world and the unique mechanics of the Saviors and the system. The romance between the three main girls is amazing (and pretty spicy) and it honestly makes me feel warm and fluffy inside whenever they have cute and passionate interactions with each other. Every part of the world is different and has its own uniqueness to it. No two cities are generally the same. The system is a cool part of this novel along with the Saviors. The stats and skills are basic and easy to understand. The proficiency mechanic is such a smart idea that it is based around the skill level of everyone in the world who uses that same weapon or item (basically if you use a weapon no one else has ever used, it automatically gives you a proficiency of 10). Though this does mean that you are technically "the best" even if you suck at using your own unique item, it makes sense that you'd be the most proficient at something that has never been used before. And at 1256 characters, I think this is my longest review, longer than my original one on this novel. As always, keep up the great work author!
Why is this so good it has no right being this good. Why is this the only good haram romance story ever made?...........................................
Still in volume 1 Really loving the story so far. Every character feels like their own person with their own motives and goal. The Worldbuilding is good, every place feels different different. Amazing work Author! Can’t wait to read more!
Just amazing no other words needed to explain this Grgeeffrfgcghgyjjyhvjhvhvbhhn,mhmhjhjhjjhjhhjhjjhhjhfhfhfhfhfhffhfhfhhfhfhhfhhhfhfhhfhhhfhfhhfhhffhfhf
I've only read up to Volume 2 and haven't even completed it at that, gotta use those Free Passes eh? lol. So take this review with a side of salt maybe somethings changes in later volumes? Anyway, I've so far enjoyed the ride so far. Ash is an enjoyable character to read about, with reasonable demands in this world, although very few of the side characters really stand out to me except for Satsuhiro and his wife and Kasumi. Story progression is in my opinion very smooth and it always feels like the power is earned instead of given thanks to author fiat. I look forward to reading more when I can.
Frist time reviewing, but I think this is a great story. It keep me into the plot and make want more. I want to see Moonlight Demon story from start to the end.
all i want to say, what really turn me off from the novel was the three way relationship, i think the novel started good but became boring. unpleasant things like what happened off screen with one of heroin fall in mind control under the priest
The characters lack a bit of depth in their interaction with the world if not good story.........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Amazing novel, definitely worth reading. This is probably only the 2nd? review I've ever bothered to write so that says something. The world building is amazing, the character development is amazing, the writing quality is amazing. Everything about this novel is amazing. I binged all current 44 chapters in one day and I've been reading this for a few hours now. Also Yuri Shall Conquer The World!
Pretty good, I do like where this story is going. I feel like the noncon elements are an unfortunate way to develop a certain character's growth- like it's a pretty stupid way for that to happen why would you drink anything from him a second time? Well written nonetheless, I do like the main character. I look forward to reading more.
I really love the characters so much, ash feels super poignant in a way that most characters of that archetype fall flat, she is interesting and fun to read. All the interactions between the characters are varied and dynamic, really bringing the story to life. This story definitely has its interests which may not be your cup of tea, but if they are you would be hard pressed to find something even remotely comparable. I highly recommend if you couldn't tell by the rating and the rest of this review XD
Really good. Please update more often. .................................... .................................... .................................... ....................................
As of Vol. 1 Epilogue: Honestly, I don’t think I can even do it justice in a review. Amazing, well thought out and well written. Love it all and I look forward to seeing more!
Uuh, I wish I can write as beautifully as the author. The choice of words is excellent, the character's interaction is superb. Grammatical error is minimal. In short, the writing was crystal clear! I won't regret giving this book a solid 5-stars!
As of Epilogue Vol 2: Amazing pacing, the characters are continuing to grow and develop, the stakes are being set and the threat is real each time they enter a fight. I love how realistic the dialogue is; written descriptions and prose are beautiful; and grammatical errors are hard to find. I’m routinely impressed at the quality of this work. Thank you and I’m so happy that this novel is now a part of the privilege status!
one of the stories that I have invested time to read and I really enjoyed it.I'm kind of hoping/praying for more but it has to end at some point.thank you author! [img=recommend]
This has been a ride, from getting frustrated witht the characters for not JUST TALKING TO EACHOTHER to having to deal with the struggles they go through. Its been great, Curses the fact that it doesn’t end super happily though, Why D:
this was so captivating actually the first I stumbled on after downloading the app surely it had proven to me that it's worth it sure 5 stars
one of the best stories I've ever seen I'm excited to be able to slowly but surely read since I have to earn the passes. I've never been hit with awe and now I have I am in love with all the characters....its one of the best stories you'll find and its my num. one fave you need to read this for sure
Great writing and wonderful, believable characters. The story is fun to read and the world is an interesting setting, but the characters are the real centers of interest for me. After getting to know the characters, I actually understand who they are and why they do the things they do and, more amazingly, I totally believe in the relationship the main characters built.
Been reading this as guest and Ive sign up here to appreciate and give you some stars. Nice story, esp since its Yuri. Like the charac devs. Keep it up. <3
Не знаю, насколько целесообразно оставлять на англоязычном сайте отзыв на русском, но, думаю, если кто-то пропустит это через переводчик будет намного понятней, чем если я буду писать на английском с тонной ошибок. Так вот, о романе. Первое впечатление, когда я только начал читать, было просто прекрасным. Главная героиня просто прекрасно проработана и действительно чувствуется живой, а не пустышкой. Про второстепенных персонажей тоже особо плохо отзываться не буду. Сам сюжет в принципе ожидаемый: Есть плохой парень, которому надо надрать зад, есть герои, которые избранные богами, и которые этому злодею будут противостоять. Вот только, в отличие от большинства романов, здесь никому внезапные читы на голову не упадут. Герои часто получают по заднице. Само их развитие, как личностей, тоже вполне устраивает. Хотя, как по мне, всё как то ну слишком быстро. Они только палки в руки взяли, а их уже в ад кидают. И я вот читаю и, по ощущениям, уже скоро как бы и конец. Но ты смотришь, а там ещё хренова туча глав и становится интересно, а что, собственно там дальше? Романтика тут просто класс. В отличие от большинства других книг, где у главного героя больше одного партнёра, тут всё вокруг него одного не вертится. То есть все три персонажа взаимодействуют друг с другом в полной мере, а не только вылизывают главного героя. Сами сцены выглядят просто отлично, хотя, честно говоря, то, как начались их отношения немного натянуты. Одна просто сказала, что она провинилась, так что бери меня полностью. Другая сначала вела себя как то даже невинно, будто не особо понимала отношения в таком плане, но потом оказалось, что она вполне опытна в этом плане. Хотя её ситуация всё-таки лучше выглядит, чем первая. А вот мир немного подкачал. Я, конечно, ещё не прочитал прямо все вышедшие главы, но на данный момент он мне представляется, как просто случайно раскиданные недалеко друг от друга города, ничем не связанные. Может быть это так ощущается, потому что в ранних главах особо об устройстве цивилизации мало что сказано было? Возможно. Но если отбросить эту часть, то всё вполне сносно. В заключении скажу, что я продолжу читать. Может, за это время я ещё изменю некоторые оценки или добавлю чуть больше своих впечатлений, но на данный момент мне просто интересно, что же будет дальше? Ах, да, за грамматику ничего не скажу, мой английский не настолько хорош, как то разглагольствовать на эту тему. Хотя по ощущениям всё очень даже неплохо.
Very interesting setting. Although the first villain was a little cliche, the main characters (MC and love interests) were nicely done and their romance was wholesome too.
the story is well plotted, but the fear and shyness of the zayama in there relation ship is really unnecessary. also the holding back feelings and stuff kinda can't relate, blondey is outgoing so sharing her feelings kinda seems like her thing...no? other than that it's good
Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading. Reading.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Hello! I'm the author of this story. If you have any questions about what you might be able to expect here or something you want to know more about, or whatever, do let me know!
Trust me its worth it. Character design- check Story pace-check World- check Read it
I just found this novel last week and I have binge readto chapter 88 in 3 days. This is an amazing story! Keep up the amazing story and the interesting characters.👍
As of the end of Vol 3 (chapter 200): The writing continues to be superb and the characters all continue to grow and change. Stakes have been raised, and events are fully in motion. Honestly, can’t even put in words how much I love this story.
To make up for the other guy who put a 1-Star just for nothing. Smh... This site is a lost cause with all the $tupid readers spamming their nonsense everywhere.
Truthfully, I'm only writing a second review for the Halloween event but this novel is amazing and it's become one of my favourites. I love the character interactions, the world and the unique mechanics of the Saviors and the system. The romance between the three main girls is amazing (and pretty spicy) and it honestly makes me feel warm and fluffy inside whenever they have cute and passionate interactions with each other. Every part of the world is different and has its own uniqueness to it. No two cities are generally the same. The system is a cool part of this novel along with the Saviors. The stats and skills are basic and easy to understand. The proficiency mechanic is such a smart idea that it is based around the skill level of everyone in the world who uses that same weapon or item (basically if you use a weapon no one else has ever used, it automatically gives you a proficiency of 10). Though this does mean that you are technically "the best" even if you suck at using your own unique item, it makes sense that you'd be the most proficient at something that has never been used before. And at 1256 characters, I think this is my longest review, longer than my original one on this novel. As always, keep up the great work author!
Why is this so good it has no right being this good. Why is this the only good haram romance story ever made?...........................................
Still in volume 1 Really loving the story so far. Every character feels like their own person with their own motives and goal. The Worldbuilding is good, every place feels different different. Amazing work Author! Can’t wait to read more!
Just amazing no other words needed to explain this Grgeeffrfgcghgyjjyhvjhvhvbhhn,mhmhjhjhjjhjhhjhjjhhjhfhfhfhfhfhffhfhfhhfhfhhfhhhfhfhhfhhhfhfhhfhhffhfhf
I've only read up to Volume 2 and haven't even completed it at that, gotta use those Free Passes eh? lol. So take this review with a side of salt maybe somethings changes in later volumes? Anyway, I've so far enjoyed the ride so far. Ash is an enjoyable character to read about, with reasonable demands in this world, although very few of the side characters really stand out to me except for Satsuhiro and his wife and Kasumi. Story progression is in my opinion very smooth and it always feels like the power is earned instead of given thanks to author fiat. I look forward to reading more when I can.
Frist time reviewing, but I think this is a great story. It keep me into the plot and make want more. I want to see Moonlight Demon story from start to the end.
all i want to say, what really turn me off from the novel was the three way relationship, i think the novel started good but became boring. unpleasant things like what happened off screen with one of heroin fall in mind control under the priest
The characters lack a bit of depth in their interaction with the world if not good story.........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Amazing novel, definitely worth reading. This is probably only the 2nd? review I've ever bothered to write so that says something. The world building is amazing, the character development is amazing, the writing quality is amazing. Everything about this novel is amazing. I binged all current 44 chapters in one day and I've been reading this for a few hours now. Also Yuri Shall Conquer The World!
Pretty good, I do like where this story is going. I feel like the noncon elements are an unfortunate way to develop a certain character's growth- like it's a pretty stupid way for that to happen why would you drink anything from him a second time? Well written nonetheless, I do like the main character. I look forward to reading more.
I really love the characters so much, ash feels super poignant in a way that most characters of that archetype fall flat, she is interesting and fun to read. All the interactions between the characters are varied and dynamic, really bringing the story to life. This story definitely has its interests which may not be your cup of tea, but if they are you would be hard pressed to find something even remotely comparable. I highly recommend if you couldn't tell by the rating and the rest of this review XD
Really good. Please update more often. .................................... .................................... .................................... ....................................
As of Vol. 1 Epilogue: Honestly, I don’t think I can even do it justice in a review. Amazing, well thought out and well written. Love it all and I look forward to seeing more!
Uuh, I wish I can write as beautifully as the author. The choice of words is excellent, the character's interaction is superb. Grammatical error is minimal. In short, the writing was crystal clear! I won't regret giving this book a solid 5-stars!