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An amazing book, not gonna lie, I only picked it up to get the 200 points for a recommend book, but I'm glad I did. It gives an accurate and detailed description of the world, the characters, and the abilities. There are some spelling mistakes, but they are fat fingers or he went to fast an repeated something. But the Author fixes them very quickly once pointed out. The MC might be overpowered, but there isn't any plot armor and he is very smart. So it doesn't seem that way. Over all a very, very good book and I'm waiting for my next fast pass to read some more!
It is a pretty well written story. Thought out and planned well. The spelling and sentences are improving as chapters go on. Currently on chapter 56 so got a while to give my full thoughts yet only getting a few passes a day.
Love your marksman system book its amazing. exceptional character growth, you watch an underdog grow slowly. not just take this green ray, bam your the hulk. its nice, I enjoy it so far. one of my favorite reads on here, wish I knew how to contact you on here though. keep it up one of my favorite authors also.
very good!!! I'm loving the story, the protagonist is also very captivating, I expected him to be darker in relation to the monsters, more until it's cool. Keep up the great work!!!
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
what the where is the rifts monsters coming out and 1 million people dying stuff which chapter?
This novel has good foundation overall but the lack of explanation of how the game related to the event and how the character doesn't confuse to what happened seem confusing like how he doesn't what is the power he get so maybe there's already someone out there who had the same thing? it's so confusing. Regardless I'm still reading it till I can't take it anymore
I am here why?? Because I can relate with the name of the book. "All time marksman."🤣😅 As a player who can only play marksman I feel like I can sympathize with the Mc😌. And the cover is lit and welp although there few problems here there, not too big thing to fret on.. Even though I am reading it to get idea about action and all, I am enjoying it quite a bit...hmmm..I must say..🤔🤔it was a nice read..
This is one is gooooood......................................................................................................................................
Content wise, I say three things; I LOVE IT! The plot is very interesting and has really caught my attention. I'm very curious as to how everything came as it is and I can't wait to know as the author drop more chapters in the future. I also like Jin, I love his calm demeanor and level-headedness, or at least that what I noticed about him so far. And no, it's not a spoiler. Grammar and structure wise, it does need a little touch up, but just a little. Seriously, it's something one can just ignore if they love the story, well that's what I did. But over all, the story is fantastic and I can't wait to read more of it! Keep it up Author-san!
It was a good read. As what the author had said on his review, his sentence structure needs improvement. But welp, I also need it for mine so overall, this story good. It has interesting and unique plots, and even tho the pace was a little slow at start, it did not disrupt my immersion while reading it.
5/5 ლ(●ↀωↀ●)ლ Recommended! ╰( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )つ──☆ I love the concept of this story! (ΦωΦ) I like how interesting the characters are! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧ I am excited to know what more thrilling events will take place! ٩(ↀДↀ)۶
timeline on future...interesting,🤩. very interesting. 😍 I have also read author's other book. the plot was good. so I also think this will also come out as a good piece of work... Good luck authornim...
My favor goes to the side of destiny... oop**! Great start ark! Looking forward for more updates! (can't wait!) I added your story to my library to follow the progress of the main :D
To be honest, the start of the novel was not so good...the vocabulary needs improvement too, dialogues didn't looked good...in the first two chapters, it still hasn't explained what is going on. Who is the mc? what is Mythical Realms 😂? I might die out of suspense. On top of that, character introduction n design was not so good. Respected Author, you need to work on that too. some scenes are not explained well...in short, the work is done in an effortless manner. It needs re-editing so that it can show some great work which our author shown in previous novel lol. I hope author is not joking with us by presenting such novel with his current skills lol. I'm expecting great results in future. Hope you edit it soon 👍
I have been into video games for a while and to be honest, I am absolutely amazed by seeing what the book has to offer. It may have a few weak points here and there but I think it would do amazing with better editing. best of luck author san
Hiya author, your book is too lit. Though I am not an ml reader, your book hooked me in the start. I love the plot and synopsis. The bg and MC development are lit. Best of luck in advance. Hey you , you there. Grab your popcorn and enjoy this novel.[img=update]
The abstract is amazing, not too much revealing about the plot, after reading all the 15 chapters, i can feel like this novel as the potential. words are common not too difficult to read, which is the best thing because other reader who are not fluent in english can also enjoy the novel. keep it up author and make sure to upload 1 or 2 chapters daily.
Ok let’s begin, the writing is good but not overly good. However, the story quality is dope and that’s what makes me keep reading it. You should give this novel a try if you had never done so otherwise, you will regret it.
the world background is nice and detailed. u can actually see how the author would want his readers to see the world that the characters were living in. the story is fantastic and the development is thrilling. the cover looks lit as well.
Just read it. It's fun and worth your time. I am only a few chapters in but I can say that it'll be interesting ahead. It doesn't look fast-paced and the chapters are well written. One thing I have to say about this book is it's so great and has such a nice plot and it seems to be pretty attractive towards readers and the main thing, keep. going Author and it's really great!!!
This book has a really interesting plot. Although the pacing of the story is quite slow, it would leave you hooked to know what's going to happen next. The world building also has a slow pace, but it will not mess up the overall quality of the novel.
I rate my novel low because I know for myself I need a lot of improvements regarding the structure of the sentences. But like that being said I want you guys to support it thanks a lot!
An amazing book, not gonna lie, I only picked it up to get the 200 points for a recommend book, but I'm glad I did. It gives an accurate and detailed description of the world, the characters, and the abilities. There are some spelling mistakes, but they are fat fingers or he went to fast an repeated something. But the Author fixes them very quickly once pointed out. The MC might be overpowered, but there isn't any plot armor and he is very smart. So it doesn't seem that way. Over all a very, very good book and I'm waiting for my next fast pass to read some more!
It is a pretty well written story. Thought out and planned well. The spelling and sentences are improving as chapters go on. Currently on chapter 56 so got a while to give my full thoughts yet only getting a few passes a day.
Love your marksman system book its amazing. exceptional character growth, you watch an underdog grow slowly. not just take this green ray, bam your the hulk. its nice, I enjoy it so far. one of my favorite reads on here, wish I knew how to contact you on here though. keep it up one of my favorite authors also.
very good!!! I'm loving the story, the protagonist is also very captivating, I expected him to be darker in relation to the monsters, more until it's cool. Keep up the great work!!!
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
what the where is the rifts monsters coming out and 1 million people dying stuff which chapter?
This novel has good foundation overall but the lack of explanation of how the game related to the event and how the character doesn't confuse to what happened seem confusing like how he doesn't what is the power he get so maybe there's already someone out there who had the same thing? it's so confusing. Regardless I'm still reading it till I can't take it anymore
I am here why?? Because I can relate with the name of the book. "All time marksman."🤣😅 As a player who can only play marksman I feel like I can sympathize with the Mc😌. And the cover is lit and welp although there few problems here there, not too big thing to fret on.. Even though I am reading it to get idea about action and all, I am enjoying it quite a bit...hmmm..I must say..🤔🤔it was a nice read..
This is one is gooooood......................................................................................................................................
Content wise, I say three things; I LOVE IT! The plot is very interesting and has really caught my attention. I'm very curious as to how everything came as it is and I can't wait to know as the author drop more chapters in the future. I also like Jin, I love his calm demeanor and level-headedness, or at least that what I noticed about him so far. And no, it's not a spoiler. Grammar and structure wise, it does need a little touch up, but just a little. Seriously, it's something one can just ignore if they love the story, well that's what I did. But over all, the story is fantastic and I can't wait to read more of it! Keep it up Author-san!
It was a good read. As what the author had said on his review, his sentence structure needs improvement. But welp, I also need it for mine so overall, this story good. It has interesting and unique plots, and even tho the pace was a little slow at start, it did not disrupt my immersion while reading it.
5/5 ლ(●ↀωↀ●)ლ Recommended! ╰( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )つ──☆ I love the concept of this story! (ΦωΦ) I like how interesting the characters are! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:・ﾟ✧ I am excited to know what more thrilling events will take place! ٩(ↀДↀ)۶
timeline on future...interesting,🤩. very interesting. 😍 I have also read author's other book. the plot was good. so I also think this will also come out as a good piece of work... Good luck authornim...
My favor goes to the side of destiny... oop**! Great start ark! Looking forward for more updates! (can't wait!) I added your story to my library to follow the progress of the main :D
To be honest, the start of the novel was not so good...the vocabulary needs improvement too, dialogues didn't looked good...in the first two chapters, it still hasn't explained what is going on. Who is the mc? what is Mythical Realms 😂? I might die out of suspense. On top of that, character introduction n design was not so good. Respected Author, you need to work on that too. some scenes are not explained well...in short, the work is done in an effortless manner. It needs re-editing so that it can show some great work which our author shown in previous novel lol. I hope author is not joking with us by presenting such novel with his current skills lol. I'm expecting great results in future. Hope you edit it soon 👍
I have been into video games for a while and to be honest, I am absolutely amazed by seeing what the book has to offer. It may have a few weak points here and there but I think it would do amazing with better editing. best of luck author san
Hiya author, your book is too lit. Though I am not an ml reader, your book hooked me in the start. I love the plot and synopsis. The bg and MC development are lit. Best of luck in advance. Hey you , you there. Grab your popcorn and enjoy this novel.[img=update]
The abstract is amazing, not too much revealing about the plot, after reading all the 15 chapters, i can feel like this novel as the potential. words are common not too difficult to read, which is the best thing because other reader who are not fluent in english can also enjoy the novel. keep it up author and make sure to upload 1 or 2 chapters daily.
Ok let’s begin, the writing is good but not overly good. However, the story quality is dope and that’s what makes me keep reading it. You should give this novel a try if you had never done so otherwise, you will regret it.
the world background is nice and detailed. u can actually see how the author would want his readers to see the world that the characters were living in. the story is fantastic and the development is thrilling. the cover looks lit as well.
Just read it. It's fun and worth your time. I am only a few chapters in but I can say that it'll be interesting ahead. It doesn't look fast-paced and the chapters are well written. One thing I have to say about this book is it's so great and has such a nice plot and it seems to be pretty attractive towards readers and the main thing, keep. going Author and it's really great!!!
This book has a really interesting plot. Although the pacing of the story is quite slow, it would leave you hooked to know what's going to happen next. The world building also has a slow pace, but it will not mess up the overall quality of the novel.
I rate my novel low because I know for myself I need a lot of improvements regarding the structure of the sentences. But like that being said I want you guys to support it thanks a lot!