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Overall, it's a good Harry Potter fanfic with a distinct character and some interesting additions to the HP world. The romance is the weakest point and is quite jarring as it really makes the story worse overall, its not that well written and the harem is forced. If the interactions between characters are taken in isolation, then this is a very good story with many interesting differences from cannon that make this story alive. If you like Harry Potter fanfic, this is a great one to read. Just be prepared for the slightly subpar harem/romance as it really is out of place in this story.
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honesty my expectations where high but even a few chapters in i already caught my self skipping paragraphs the thing that made me drop this is his the issue with wands the same old conspiracy that makes no sense for me early on with dumbledor and the low iq of the mc overall its not entertaining to read for me many things feel jsut wrong in this novel
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Review 1 Thank you so much author for finishing the story, there is no doubt that I had a lot of ups and downs while reading this novel but overall I am happy I did it cause that's how much I was invested in it. I can't believe it's your first novel, the quality of writing is really good. All the best for your future endeavours!
Honestly, I really enjoyed this book. It slowed down a little in places, but overall, I really enjoyed it. Solid read, would recommend. 👍👍
Definitivamente hace honor al título, es un viaje mágico. Espero que los epílogos puedan dar claridad a los pocos misterios que quedaron sin responder, además de dar un segundo vistazo al futuro del MC. Gracias por dar vida a esta obra.
[1] I read this story when it was new but stopped because of a really bad story arc. Now, years later, I decided to reread it, which turned out to be a mistake. [2] TL;DR: The story starts off near-perfect but gradually turns to trash over time. [i] The first five volumes (Prologue - Quinn's 5th year) were a 10/10. The story was engaging, and even the filler content made sense within the context of the plot. It was genuinely enjoyable to read. [ii] However, things started to go downhill in Year 6 (6/10). While there were some great moments, the Umbridge arc didn’t make any sense. In canon, it worked because the "Light side" was a mess, but that wasn't the case in this story. [iii] Year 7 was an absolute disaster (0/10). The plot felt like a forced, never-ending progression that made me feel as if it was written by a completely different person. [iv] As for the post-Hogwarts content, I didn’t even bother reading it. I was so disappointed by the direction Year 7 took that I stopped reading altogether.
HP: A Magical Journey HP: Un viaje mágico Realmente esperaba los epílogos para ver lo que el futuro libre le trajo a Quinn, excelente novela que seguramente extrañaré esperando nuevos capítulos. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
Well it starts so great and I even think the first sin vault was okayish, but going back to it and ruining the romance by making it a harem makes this a tough read after chapter 300 and the fact it's not even the MC in control and him just going alright harmed time ia beyond infuriating. So yeah not worth it in my opinion.
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meh.. it was alright a read i would say, author not tagging harem, some parts being forced. personally i hate harems i immediately dropped when i found out.
I really liked the book until the 2nd Sin vault (Greed) arc. So I'll just say the ending has Harem if you don't like it drop this as i did
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I read the whole thing on my other account it is amazing, I can recommend this to anyone who wants to read a hp oc ff, or if you aren’t, it’s great.
You have continuity issues. about halfway through you started forgetting stand alone details that you had established just a dozen chapters before hand as well as some verbatim repeating paragraphs and a few 3 paragraph sections that looked copy pasted almost word for word from other works I remember. Just to be clear, I am not accusing you of plagiarism, just that certain short sections were concise in such a specific undeveloped way that I've seen it a dozen times. Otherwise, a well written compelling story I just need to take a break from from time to time to avoid minor annoyances from discrepancies building up too much.
Honestly this fanfic is so very good. There is just a few problems with it. One of the story arcs in chapter 100-150 i think it was not done well and the author even after the readers bad reaction to this MADE it a huge deal in chapters 350-to the end. Disappointing and the authors decision in tje end to make it a harem between two girls is so idiotic but it wasnt his fault i think the fans actually voted for it on his patreon and he executed it poorly. It felt as if cucking them both at the same time and the Mc not really sure at one scene he loves this girl more and the other he loves this girl more. Anyways the romance at the end was a let down and the arc that im talking about was not good to me other than that MASTERPIECE.
I loved it there were some errors like wrong names or stuff but i understood what you meant so it was ok 👍
Decent even entertaining until you reach the nerf. Not readable beyond chapter 70 in my opinion.. beyond frustrating and disappointing. Would have loved more but the nerf kills all interest
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Top 3 hp fanfics. Also it's completed, involves vaults (if you don't know they a good concept), and also incorporates real knowledge of hp books not a fast paced fic, and decently paced power growth. Not villain mc, more grey-good. Best legilemency/occulemency development. Loveable and smart characters. Biggest W is that MC is not a R3T*RD.
For all the people considering dropping this story because of Quinn's decision to not use a wand I would strongly recommend that you don't. The lack of an actual wand has very little affect on the story as a whole and as a person who has read multiple different HP fanfics the story probably would have played out exactly as it did if Quinn used an actual wand. Additionally because Quinn uses a fake wand and the author rarely bringing up that the wand isn't real it is extremely easy to forget this fact and if you read through the story you probably will forget the wand is fake relatively early in Quinn's years at Hogwarts. Finally if I still haven't convinced you that lack of a real wand doesn't affect the story I strongly urge you to read up until at least Quinn's 2nd or 3rd year before dropping the story. I gave the story 4.8 out of 5 because the translation sometimes has grammatical mistakes but they are rare enough to not really affect the reading experience.
This book is amazing I started reading it years ago but just only finished it now.
Uma ótima história de harry potter, mundo bem construído e personagens bem desenvolvidos, MC poderoso mas não overporwer boa dinâmica com os personagens, mistérios incríveis que faz você pensar.
The story is amazing while yes the story can and is slow at times it will amaze anyone who's going to read it. Character development is done very well albeit a bit too prolonged for me, the same can be said about the world as the story is not centered around the main storyline that we know from movies or books.
mc loses all his memories after transmigration so rather than reincarnation novel it is about a boy with mental disorder who thinks he is not in his body and knows about Harry Potter novel plot
This was a good novel. I liked it at first, good premise, interesting characters (although not too much oc), ok worlbuilding (courtesy of Ms. Rowling), and ok power system. But it fell flat right about the end, more specifically, around half blood prince arc. I didn't understand having a 2nd sin arc, I think it was just for him to get 2 girls. Power system and power scaling was all over the place, it was good at first but went bad when vold and dumbly-dor was involved in the fights. Vigilante was also interesting at first, but then there were no solid developments in terms of character and skill. Just a masked kid killing some side characters, boring and immature. It was ok I guess, maybe I just liked the OG version too much and it interested me when mc was doing all sorts of things differently. Future Mc had a dope introduction, but it was suuuch a major spoiler. All the 'skills' mc had kinda had and all the magic without wand bs honestly wasn't too different if he had a wand. Maybe he could have been better actually. All opinions ofcourse, Great work to the author still. I had a blast reading this.
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Review #2 [FictionOnlyReaders' Author Review] At the time of this post, this review is the 269th review of this story. (200+Nice!) Current Story stats: Regular chapters: 125 || Aux chapters: 1 Collections: 11.55K || Views: 3.47M || Average Word Count: 3.36K || Rating: 4.84 Stars My rating: 5 STARS || Reason: Because I like my story, that's it. My review was too long and wasn't being accepted, so I have broken it down and put it in comments. Please go down to see the rest. Just like always, Review, comment, add to the library and share this fic. Thx. Regards, FictionOnlyReader (LET'S GO!)
Overall, it's a good Harry Potter fanfic with a distinct character and some interesting additions to the HP world. The romance is the weakest point and is quite jarring as it really makes the story worse overall, its not that well written and the harem is forced. If the interactions between characters are taken in isolation, then this is a very good story with many interesting differences from cannon that make this story alive. If you like Harry Potter fanfic, this is a great one to read. Just be prepared for the slightly subpar harem/romance as it really is out of place in this story.
Best harry potter fanfic.............👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️⚡️
honesty my expectations where high but even a few chapters in i already caught my self skipping paragraphs the thing that made me drop this is his the issue with wands the same old conspiracy that makes no sense for me early on with dumbledor and the low iq of the mc overall its not entertaining to read for me many things feel jsut wrong in this novel
Tiết lộ Spoiler Review 1 Thank you so much author for finishing the story, there is no doubt that I had a lot of ups and downs while reading this novel but overall I am happy I did it cause that's how much I was invested in it. I can't believe it's your first novel, the quality of writing is really good. All the best for your future endeavours!
Honestly, I really enjoyed this book. It slowed down a little in places, but overall, I really enjoyed it. Solid read, would recommend. 👍👍
Definitivamente hace honor al título, es un viaje mágico. Espero que los epílogos puedan dar claridad a los pocos misterios que quedaron sin responder, además de dar un segundo vistazo al futuro del MC. Gracias por dar vida a esta obra.
[1] I read this story when it was new but stopped because of a really bad story arc. Now, years later, I decided to reread it, which turned out to be a mistake. [2] TL;DR: The story starts off near-perfect but gradually turns to trash over time. [i] The first five volumes (Prologue - Quinn's 5th year) were a 10/10. The story was engaging, and even the filler content made sense within the context of the plot. It was genuinely enjoyable to read. [ii] However, things started to go downhill in Year 6 (6/10). While there were some great moments, the Umbridge arc didn’t make any sense. In canon, it worked because the "Light side" was a mess, but that wasn't the case in this story. [iii] Year 7 was an absolute disaster (0/10). The plot felt like a forced, never-ending progression that made me feel as if it was written by a completely different person. [iv] As for the post-Hogwarts content, I didn’t even bother reading it. I was so disappointed by the direction Year 7 took that I stopped reading altogether.
HP: A Magical Journey HP: Un viaje mágico Realmente esperaba los epílogos para ver lo que el futuro libre le trajo a Quinn, excelente novela que seguramente extrañaré esperando nuevos capítulos. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
Well it starts so great and I even think the first sin vault was okayish, but going back to it and ruining the romance by making it a harem makes this a tough read after chapter 300 and the fact it's not even the MC in control and him just going alright harmed time ia beyond infuriating. So yeah not worth it in my opinion.
Tiết lộ Spoiler meh.. it was alright a read i would say, author not tagging harem, some parts being forced. personally i hate harems i immediately dropped when i found out.
I really liked the book until the 2nd Sin vault (Greed) arc. So I'll just say the ending has Harem if you don't like it drop this as i did
Tiết lộ Spoiler I read the whole thing on my other account it is amazing, I can recommend this to anyone who wants to read a hp oc ff, or if you aren’t, it’s great.
You have continuity issues. about halfway through you started forgetting stand alone details that you had established just a dozen chapters before hand as well as some verbatim repeating paragraphs and a few 3 paragraph sections that looked copy pasted almost word for word from other works I remember. Just to be clear, I am not accusing you of plagiarism, just that certain short sections were concise in such a specific undeveloped way that I've seen it a dozen times. Otherwise, a well written compelling story I just need to take a break from from time to time to avoid minor annoyances from discrepancies building up too much.
Honestly this fanfic is so very good. There is just a few problems with it. One of the story arcs in chapter 100-150 i think it was not done well and the author even after the readers bad reaction to this MADE it a huge deal in chapters 350-to the end. Disappointing and the authors decision in tje end to make it a harem between two girls is so idiotic but it wasnt his fault i think the fans actually voted for it on his patreon and he executed it poorly. It felt as if cucking them both at the same time and the Mc not really sure at one scene he loves this girl more and the other he loves this girl more. Anyways the romance at the end was a let down and the arc that im talking about was not good to me other than that MASTERPIECE.
I loved it there were some errors like wrong names or stuff but i understood what you meant so it was ok 👍
Decent even entertaining until you reach the nerf. Not readable beyond chapter 70 in my opinion.. beyond frustrating and disappointing. Would have loved more but the nerf kills all interest
its good. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Top 3 hp fanfics. Also it's completed, involves vaults (if you don't know they a good concept), and also incorporates real knowledge of hp books not a fast paced fic, and decently paced power growth. Not villain mc, more grey-good. Best legilemency/occulemency development. Loveable and smart characters. Biggest W is that MC is not a R3T*RD.
For all the people considering dropping this story because of Quinn's decision to not use a wand I would strongly recommend that you don't. The lack of an actual wand has very little affect on the story as a whole and as a person who has read multiple different HP fanfics the story probably would have played out exactly as it did if Quinn used an actual wand. Additionally because Quinn uses a fake wand and the author rarely bringing up that the wand isn't real it is extremely easy to forget this fact and if you read through the story you probably will forget the wand is fake relatively early in Quinn's years at Hogwarts. Finally if I still haven't convinced you that lack of a real wand doesn't affect the story I strongly urge you to read up until at least Quinn's 2nd or 3rd year before dropping the story. I gave the story 4.8 out of 5 because the translation sometimes has grammatical mistakes but they are rare enough to not really affect the reading experience.
This book is amazing I started reading it years ago but just only finished it now.
Uma ótima história de harry potter, mundo bem construído e personagens bem desenvolvidos, MC poderoso mas não overporwer boa dinâmica com os personagens, mistérios incríveis que faz você pensar.
The story is amazing while yes the story can and is slow at times it will amaze anyone who's going to read it. Character development is done very well albeit a bit too prolonged for me, the same can be said about the world as the story is not centered around the main storyline that we know from movies or books.
mc loses all his memories after transmigration so rather than reincarnation novel it is about a boy with mental disorder who thinks he is not in his body and knows about Harry Potter novel plot
This was a good novel. I liked it at first, good premise, interesting characters (although not too much oc), ok worlbuilding (courtesy of Ms. Rowling), and ok power system. But it fell flat right about the end, more specifically, around half blood prince arc. I didn't understand having a 2nd sin arc, I think it was just for him to get 2 girls. Power system and power scaling was all over the place, it was good at first but went bad when vold and dumbly-dor was involved in the fights. Vigilante was also interesting at first, but then there were no solid developments in terms of character and skill. Just a masked kid killing some side characters, boring and immature. It was ok I guess, maybe I just liked the OG version too much and it interested me when mc was doing all sorts of things differently. Future Mc had a dope introduction, but it was suuuch a major spoiler. All the 'skills' mc had kinda had and all the magic without wand bs honestly wasn't too different if he had a wand. Maybe he could have been better actually. All opinions ofcourse, Great work to the author still. I had a blast reading this.
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Review #2 [FictionOnlyReaders' Author Review] At the time of this post, this review is the 269th review of this story. (200+Nice!) Current Story stats: Regular chapters: 125 || Aux chapters: 1 Collections: 11.55K || Views: 3.47M || Average Word Count: 3.36K || Rating: 4.84 Stars My rating: 5 STARS || Reason: Because I like my story, that's it. My review was too long and wasn't being accepted, so I have broken it down and put it in comments. Please go down to see the rest. Just like always, Review, comment, add to the library and share this fic. Thx. Regards, FictionOnlyReader (LET'S GO!)