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Very interesting concept its the first novel I’ve read where the mc is the system, ive really enjoyed this so far and im looking forward more😊
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
I read this on Wattpad........................................................................................................................
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Oh Calli our Dad is in the FanFic 5 Star #TAKAMORI #TAKAMORI #TAKAMORI #TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI
5 Stars because I'm confident in my work. Okay, to the curious ones, this fan-fic is about a Higher Being who becomes a System for existing female characters in a certain anime world. She'll help these host of hers, like a System should, but she could easily influence the host how she wants, and would reward her with things either for the host, or for her own benefit. Then, along the line, the Higher Being would achieve a physical form after the host reaches a certain requirement, where she could actively help them. Plot-wise, it's going to depend on the anime, but it would definitely end not going fully as cannon . I try my best at character and romantic development, and I do a bit extra in world-building, since the existing setting is already there for me to work from. I hope you enjoy my fan-fic!
love the story so far. The chapters are long and the characters lovable. .....................................................................
yuri is life , yuri is love. ****************************************************************************************************************************************
More chapter please. ,,..........................................................................................................................................
Thank you fort makinng this amazing story "now". Aside from that I dont really know what to put here so................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. Thank you again for making this story :3
Very interesting concept its the first novel I’ve read where the mc is the system, ive really enjoyed this so far and im looking forward more😊
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
I read this on Wattpad........................................................................................................................
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Oh Calli our Dad is in the FanFic 5 Star #TAKAMORI #TAKAMORI #TAKAMORI #TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI#TAKAMORI
5 Stars because I'm confident in my work. Okay, to the curious ones, this fan-fic is about a Higher Being who becomes a System for existing female characters in a certain anime world. She'll help these host of hers, like a System should, but she could easily influence the host how she wants, and would reward her with things either for the host, or for her own benefit. Then, along the line, the Higher Being would achieve a physical form after the host reaches a certain requirement, where she could actively help them. Plot-wise, it's going to depend on the anime, but it would definitely end not going fully as cannon . I try my best at character and romantic development, and I do a bit extra in world-building, since the existing setting is already there for me to work from. I hope you enjoy my fan-fic!
love the story so far. The chapters are long and the characters lovable. .....................................................................
yuri is life , yuri is love. ****************************************************************************************************************************************
More chapter please. ,,..........................................................................................................................................
Thank you fort makinng this amazing story "now". Aside from that I dont really know what to put here so................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. Thank you again for making this story :3