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Viết đánh giáPlease I am begging you to update more please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please I am begging begging begging please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
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Story Development: very poor . I understand that is good when MC has absolute power but adding a tagg of " no harem " is the same as going to a candy story with ALL the candy in the multiverse and just go to become a priest or something. That's bllsht . No man with infinite amount of time would consider only having 1 girl for him . We need to admid that humans are infinitely ambitious and we always want more until we get bored. We are the same as babies with toys , we don't know why we want more but we want. World Background: Horrible, creating a base multiverse is nice and all but again you visited a world of fantasy and magic and it felt like I was eating plastic, no quality , no good story, no challenge and no adventure . Fantasy worlds are for that but the MC didn't even tried to get realistic stats and all people just knew that he was a monster in stats ( why even change stats so people can see " normal " if you add super high stats anyway ??? 11 chapters and I think I reat 2-3 chapter more than what I should have.
i haven't read this until now because I saw you drop the other fanfic, and I'm glad you continue making another fanfic, this is also very good, the same quality as the other one [img=recommend]
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me gusto mucho jaja este concepto me gusta pero no encuentro algo similar que tenga muchos capítulos si alguien lee esto y conoce algo similar lo necesito jaja
Please I am begging you to update more please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please I am begging begging begging please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
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Story Development: very poor . I understand that is good when MC has absolute power but adding a tagg of " no harem " is the same as going to a candy story with ALL the candy in the multiverse and just go to become a priest or something. That's bllsht . No man with infinite amount of time would consider only having 1 girl for him . We need to admid that humans are infinitely ambitious and we always want more until we get bored. We are the same as babies with toys , we don't know why we want more but we want. World Background: Horrible, creating a base multiverse is nice and all but again you visited a world of fantasy and magic and it felt like I was eating plastic, no quality , no good story, no challenge and no adventure . Fantasy worlds are for that but the MC didn't even tried to get realistic stats and all people just knew that he was a monster in stats ( why even change stats so people can see " normal " if you add super high stats anyway ??? 11 chapters and I think I reat 2-3 chapter more than what I should have.
i haven't read this until now because I saw you drop the other fanfic, and I'm glad you continue making another fanfic, this is also very good, the same quality as the other one [img=recommend]
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me gusto mucho jaja este concepto me gusta pero no encuentro algo similar que tenga muchos capítulos si alguien lee esto y conoce algo similar lo necesito jaja