World Devouring Snake (Pokemon Fanfiction)

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TeaDragon1

Hey Guys, Shameless Author TeaDragon1 here. I think its only right that I give my perfect sory 5 stars! On a more serious note, please comment and review my fanfiction. Your feedback will help me continue to improve my writing and keep my motivation levels up! Thank you once again for the support! -TeaDragon1.

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Nyareh_Grant

lmao so far this is an amazing pokemon fan fiction im looking forward to how it develops [img=recommend] ..?...............................

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Primordial_Phoenix

oh my God finally someone had the idea of evolution fanfiction in the Pokemon world I've been waiting for someone to make one of these I hope you do not drop this and actually finish it

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Jso7474

Really enjoying things so far. It seems like the MC will follow the path of power of the "The Tales The World Devouring Serpent". The beginning also seems like "Custom Made Demon King".

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Lucy_Carla

too slow.... 15 chapter and still level 1... how much chapter it needs to reach level 10 ?? 100 chapter ? 150 ? well it doesnt matter if author planning or already have draft 1000-2000 chapter...

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Doverow

Been looking for Pokémon novels like this for awhile and finally someone delivers, thanks author and don’t drop or you might lose some important people in you’re life.

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RrJ

I love the story so far. I hope that that you could Keep up the quality you have👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Luzx

what i can say about this novel? it's basically a pokemon xianxia journey, and i'm not kidding about that, has a lot of chinese cliche in this novel like: the guy how born with a poor potential but i have fortuity encounters and work hard to suppress the guy borned with better status and talent the ill of young mester is present in this novel too. apparently the pokemon are born with a a great arrogance and great sense of superiority of EVERYTHING ''weaker" than they. things like "how dare touche me humble form of life" or some of that bullshits And finally the cliche of the dog eat dog world where **** the berries and herbivorous pokemon they dont exist, here you are born to eat others pokemon meat (even if you are a buneary) kill and subjugate the weak and is it. although everything i said above this is a good novel with a good potential i personalty like it ( except the young mester pokemon part they suck), this novel is not recommended for who dont like xinxia but if you want to see a brutal pokemon novel with a no human MC and no op system trying to climb the power rank to be at the top, this novel is for you

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Kobeyuh

Hey I love novels like this great stuff man. 5 star to help ya out. 140 charcters. One two three four five six seven eight nine ten one two one two one two three one teo one two one two

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Excavelier

5/5 Stars. Perfecto, I have something to criticize, Something's are not completely Explained, Im Not complaining the story hasn't even entered its Mid Stage. I highly Recommend for people who like the mc becoming a pokemon, And very amazing writing quality and Detail on the story Recommend it highly.

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CockroaChan

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Starcat777

I love pokemon world and like the idea of him reincarnetad as ekans it’s a exciting story so ı hope your not gonna drop this story. Also can you release more chapter like some days 2 or 3 but it’s okay i like your update stability. Good story keep up 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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phoenixfrom_below

Really enjoyed the premise of the book. I liked the levelling system keep up the good work.

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Abilash_RH

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CookieHoarder

Pretty terrible, aside from the fact that all pokemon are supposedly monsters in this world, ignoring the fact that that totally ignores what the food chain is. the pokemon are way too smart and act like the arrogant young masters straight out of a wuxia novel. the aesthetic is just way too bloody even for a supposedly realistic novel about surving in the wild as a pokemon. The spirit system is way too wacky. It in essence acts like a lantern ring and this is my personal opinion, but that kind of just doesn’t work for me.

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Efenval

So, let's start our review with the fact that the book at the beginning is quite similar to "the story of a snake devouring the world" but the author changed our world to the world of Pokemon, which is quite logical. in the opening chapters, I was a little confused by the size of the chapters themselves, but fortunately over time, the author began to write more characters in the chapters. Well, I hope that this creation does not go downhill like the "story of the snake" in which the MC came to eat in one location, evolved and crawled into the next.

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Roon_Toon1

My review for this fanfic: Writing Quality: There are some problems like the author not putting a zero in a decimal like you can get something like "Wisdom: .7" though kind of noticeable it can confuse some people but the author has fixed for the first couple chapters so 4 stars. Stability of Updates: Pretty good as there is a chapter every few days so 5 stars. Story Development: There have been only like 25 chapters so I can't say a lot on it but he's slowly getting stronger as time passes and not suddenly OP so 5 stars. Character Design: Right now the Mc is the only character that is introduced and he is characterized as a person who can adapt to a situation as he adapted to killing other Pokemon in a couple of sentences so 4 stars. World Background: As the author said the world is basically a more brutal version of Pokemon like how some Pokemon are more animalistic than human as we see in the show and games so 5 stars.

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