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Chương 8: Chapter 8. Elizabeth

It was the person we were looking for, he just looked at us and began to calm his breathing, feeling relieved that he was not discovered, at least for now. Breathing, feeling relieved to know that he was not discovered, at least for now. Apparently he had thought someone else was he had thought someone else was coming in and decided to hide, but hiding behind the door doesn't turn out to be a good option. door doesn't turn out to be a good option. It wasn't a good time to go around asking questions, for that we would see each other another time, now we focused more on Johan being able to leave my house without being discovered. My house without being discovered. My mother was still at the front door, so she couldn't go downstairs. She had to go out the way she had come in earlier in the morning, through the window. The window. He became nervous when he started to climb down the stairs, apparently he was afraid of heights, but he had never told us that he was afraid of heights. He was afraid of heights, but he had never said anything about it before, so he had to hold it in if it was true. true. But from the state he was in, everything indicated that he did have vertigo. It took a few minutes to get down. But he made it, and by that time my mother was already inside the house. The house. Johan could now go out the door and would not have to climb the wall, I gave him a copy of the key that he hardly ever used. I gave him a copy of the key that I almost never used, that was for an emergency, just like this one. And I took it to him. When we met again she would give it back to me. A few minutes later Carla left, this time she went out the door. She went out the door, where she came in and left leaving me alone in my room. I then returned my full attention to the app I was on minutes before all that and went to my profile so I could see how I was doing. I went to my profile so I could see how the story I had posted was coming along. It was only two chapters two chapters posted and with less than two hours of existence on the app, it already had just over 50 views. a little more than 50 visits. That surprised me a little, I didn't believe that something like that could happen so fast. a smile formed on my lips and that made me happy for the rest of the morning. I had done was starting to be recognized by people other than my friends and family. family. So I grabbed the Link to the story and decided to pass it on to my sister, so she could let me know how it was doing or if I had any to tell me how it was or if I had any spelling mistakes, which I was sure I always overlooked those little details. unnoticed those little details and I didn't realize it until some time later, but this one did not respond. I still couldn't bring myself to share it with anyone else. Story and I didn't want to pass it on to the wrong people, who would only leave their destructive criticism instead of the destructive reviews instead of the ones that help you grow from the constructive ones, so I let it get more readers on its own and more readers on its own and I started reading the chapter that the writer of ''living with my enemy'' had posted earlier in the morning. had posted earlier in the morning. This book was amazing, even though I still didn't have too many chapters and therefore the story was incomplete, but with the ones I already had, it made it amazing. made it incredible, yes this girl knew how to make a story, she knew how to make the person who was reading it cling to it.

person who was reading it to cling to each character as if he/she was one of the characters. characters. I loved the book so much that I decided to leave her a small comment and I was going to make the first one I did in this the first one I made in this application.

''This is getting better and better, it's amazing, I love it''.

After making the comment I put my cell phone aside, and went to the kitchen to get something to eat because I hadn't been able to have breakfast. because I hadn't been able to eat breakfast. On top of the refrigerator I saw the bag of cinnamon cookies. I took the whole bag of cinnamon cookies to my room along with a full bottle of water for later. for later. I went into my room with both things in my hand, and left them on the bed, I settled down and grabbed the bag of cinnamon cookies. and grabbed the bag of cookies to open it but suddenly a loud noise sounded in the whole room which made several people which caused several cookies to fall scattered all over the bed. I had I had received a notification on my cell phone, to be more specific it was a notification from Maipad! this one. Maipad! Described by itself as a community of quiet and peaceful coexistence where you could read stories and also close them and where no plagiarism was allowed, was also a good place if you were a writer and wanted to make a name for yourself, besides the application had small contracts for those stories that reached a high level of popularity. of popularity. The writer of the book had responded to the comment I had made.

''That comment touched me to the bottom of my heart 💟'''.

I couldn't help but get excited, a smile formed on the edge of my lip, it was almost as if a celebrity was responding to me.

it was almost as if a celebrity was responding to me, since I saw her like this because her book was already successful for me, it had already successful, it had already passed a thousand visits and seeing her respond to me was almost like my favorite singer doing it. my favorite singer, well in this case my new favorite writer, I knew she would become someone special in my life, she captivated me. special in my life, she captivated me with that writing of hers and now by being so kind and modest to answer my first and only comment in this my first and only comment in this application. It crossed my mind to come back to another comment just to see if she would answer me again or in any case, to answer again the comment that I had just the comment he had just made to me, but the nervousness and the excitement I was feeling didn't help me to concentrate I couldn't concentrate and I couldn't think of what to write, I didn't want to write just anything, I wanted it to be something special. I didn't want to write just anything, I wanted it to be something special, it had to be. I thought for several minutes, watching the typing bar throbbing, screaming at me to write something, anything? anything. But I didn't, I just closed the app and rested the phone on the edge of the bed, my hands covering my hands. the edge of the bed, my hands now covering my entire face in frustration.


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