(please read the author thoughts if you become offended)
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"My fathers have already reprimanded me."
I said softly, attacking that girl, was I in the right? I truly did not like my things being touched or taken by another. Hands once again ran through my hair, following once again was the coolness of the water.
"Have you finished with your soak?"
"En, I just need to take a shower-"
"Would you like me to help you?"
I shivered feeling the water quickly empty from the tub, after hearing such a question.
My hair was piled and secured before I had the chance to reply, soon after I sat up silently allowing him to scrub my back, there is no need to reply.
Not long later, the coldness of the peach-scented shower gel was placed on my back and the gentle rubbing of a cloth made from a coarse but gentle material, to not damage my skin was used to clean my skin.
It was hard writing about races. It have to be done, because this is a new fantasy world... For her at least.
I felt that I should have really tried harder with the description and add more but decided not to. After all it was an emotional moment for the two... If you get what I mean.
Anyway further we will then go deeper into the 'mad Queen' and explain why she had destroyed earth. I'm not sure where I will add it but I will try dropping it fully in the next twenty chapters or so.