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I like the writers style of writing simple everyday story, with lots of details and emotions
this is the second book of author I'm reading, and it has mesmerized me, I'm completely hook to it, simple characters with simple desires, keep up the good work dear
Amazing Story, very well written. Its motivational and shows real life or at least aspirations for real life characters. Slow at times and I wish would move along at faster pace but an enjoyable read. This author has solid plots and works hard to deliver good quality in every single story.
Short and nice story. This author writes very well, have read her other books run girl if you can and Hazel in the devils den. All her books are captivating
Wow❗️Absolutely Superb from the beginning all the way to the end. Dear author🥰❤️, hope all is well with you and do take good care & stay safe to write some more good quality of art for all your readers You are doing such a wonderful job, please do keep writing ✍️
Great story! Keeps you engaged throughout! As always , The story wraps everything up nicely. Smooth transition from eden's Story telling to current time.
What a sweet story! I love these characters and got totally wrapped up in their lives; I’m so sad it’s over! Thank you, Mclorrycat, for another fantastic read!
This was a fun, fluffy, feel-good, romantic narrative. The author had me engaged the whole time, and put a smile on my face! Thanks for another great read!!
This is my favourite of all the many good books by Mcllorycat. As usual, great characters, but this one also has a story of love without any unrealistic elements. No rebirth or special powers.
What I like most about Mcllorycat's works is that she seems to really know humans and has a vivid imagination. From her 'what if scenarios' she takes something ordinary or crazy, like e.g. a man and woman tripping over each other at their workplace or an assassin hired to kill an orphaned secret heiress (Watch Out! My Boyfriend, the Human Weapon), and spins sweet romance from that for us to read which isn't unnatural or over-the-top. Kind of like cheesecake; not too sweet that it makes you feel sick after just one slice, but enough to keep you craving for more without getting bored. Her characters are never flawless, are full of humour, have plenty of insecurities about themselves, don't necessarily look like Adonis or Aphrodite but instead like normal people one can see on the streets, and they are never stereotypical. They have depth and complexities like you and me, which makes them seem so humane and not just characters in a novel. I could write the same review on basically any of Mcllorycat's novels and always give a full score. Try them out, you won't regret it.
Romantic, suspenseful, heartbreaking, passionate, amazingly written with a beautiful happy ever after ending for multiple characters not just the main couple. A real page turner. I finished reading it in 1 day.
Another compelling story by an amazing author. Characters progress smoothly and you can actually visualize the story happening as you read. No error in grammar or spelling which makes it all that much better. LoOking forward to the other stories writen by this author saved in my library.
this is such a good book. I fell in love with each of the characters and was wishing the best for all of them throughout the entire book. Jonah and Eden were meant to be. Even Troy found love and success.
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This story was hilarious and charming. From the begining i was captured by the storyline. I have laughed and cried while reading this story. i really Enjoy Jonah and Eden’s development and the end beautifully ties things up.
Great story, short, sweet and simple. I'm really happy tha everyone got their happy ending, especially Troy, cuz i really liked him. Everyone must give this story a try, you'll love it. 💗
Thank you dear Author, for another beautiful and lovely story. I'm a big fan of your storytelling because the leads, their struggles and plot is always somewhat related to real life, to which we can connect. They always inspire and gives different perspective about the situations, like in this one, you've beautifully described the struggles and beauty of flaws. A beautiful message that society should not behave differently with others just because of their flaws, but they should understand their struggles, they don't need pity but love and support. I've read 5 stories of yours including this, and there are another beautiful stories of urs that are waiting for me, so see u around Author. love❤
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Great characters! Loved that there were tWo stories and the fact that the characters deAl with real world issues . Looking forward to more of thIs Authors work.
I love the story! I'm addicted to Jonah and Eden, heck, even Troy and Aunt Mel! There are such strong characters with great development and true romance without being trashy. If you start this one, the biggest disappointment will be waiting for the upcoming chapters. I seriously find a lot of swiss cheese story lines on this sight, but this is a solid, well written beautiful story that I never want to end.
I just finished reading it and I love it!! I'm so glad it turned out the way it did. they all got their happy ever after! if you ever decide to add more chapters later on, I'll definitely be reading it! amazing as always!!!
Tiết lộ Spoiler Probably the first couple chapters are slightly confusing with the mistaken identity, but it is such a good story that once I got it figured out I could not put it down! I love Jonah and Eden and every other character in this book! There is a lot of laugh out loud moments and parts where I find myself crying. No smut here, just a REALLY GOOD story with really good characters... I am having such a hard time waiting for the next chapters to unlock! This Author is "going to be the death of me" I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!
I’m loving this story. The ML is so cute, even if he makes terrible choices. I love this author, and this new book did not disappoint. I can’t wait to see what happens next! Good thing it’s updated regularly. 😁
I am 50 chapters in and I can't wait for the author to release more! I have started books by other authors but couldn't really get into them. Mcllorycat really knows how to draw you in! I have completed 4 plus 2 that are all being released and I have a hard time putting my phone down to sleep and work!
loving this book! I can't wait chapters to be released!! I have read 4 of her books plus 2 all working on and they are so amazing. I'm trying to patiently wait for more chapters to be released!! love love love!
This story is super adorable so far💛 The author does a great job creating relatable and realistic characters. I’m looking forward to seeing where this story goes!
🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶 I feel Eden’s pain. I once worked at a place that sold fried chicken and that’s all I smelled like and I hated it because I liked fried chicken but after working there a while I did NOT want to eat it any more! Looking forward to seeing where this book goes.
🔳🔲🔳🔲🔳🔲🔳🔲🔳🔲🔳🔲🔳 This author is so creative. Another book with unique characters. Good job! I really hope that Eden isn’t judgy when she finally gets to meet the person in the suit!
I love finding (or being referred to) new books that make me smile. This one definitely fits the bill. I didn’t see any typos or erroneous word usage either. I really like this author’s writing style! 🔵🔴🔵🔴
I’m really looking forward to more of this book!! 🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶 🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷 🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶 🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷
♥️♥️I know this book only has a few chapters, but the writing is excellent and the premise is fun. I hope to see how well the characters develop over time! ♥️♥️
I like the writers style of writing simple everyday story, with lots of details and emotions
this is the second book of author I'm reading, and it has mesmerized me, I'm completely hook to it, simple characters with simple desires, keep up the good work dear
Amazing Story, very well written. Its motivational and shows real life or at least aspirations for real life characters. Slow at times and I wish would move along at faster pace but an enjoyable read. This author has solid plots and works hard to deliver good quality in every single story.
Short and nice story. This author writes very well, have read her other books run girl if you can and Hazel in the devils den. All her books are captivating
Wow❗️Absolutely Superb from the beginning all the way to the end. Dear author🥰❤️, hope all is well with you and do take good care & stay safe to write some more good quality of art for all your readers You are doing such a wonderful job, please do keep writing ✍️
Great story! Keeps you engaged throughout! As always , The story wraps everything up nicely. Smooth transition from eden's Story telling to current time.
What a sweet story! I love these characters and got totally wrapped up in their lives; I’m so sad it’s over! Thank you, Mclorrycat, for another fantastic read!
This was a fun, fluffy, feel-good, romantic narrative. The author had me engaged the whole time, and put a smile on my face! Thanks for another great read!!
This is my favourite of all the many good books by Mcllorycat. As usual, great characters, but this one also has a story of love without any unrealistic elements. No rebirth or special powers.
What I like most about Mcllorycat's works is that she seems to really know humans and has a vivid imagination. From her 'what if scenarios' she takes something ordinary or crazy, like e.g. a man and woman tripping over each other at their workplace or an assassin hired to kill an orphaned secret heiress (Watch Out! My Boyfriend, the Human Weapon), and spins sweet romance from that for us to read which isn't unnatural or over-the-top. Kind of like cheesecake; not too sweet that it makes you feel sick after just one slice, but enough to keep you craving for more without getting bored. Her characters are never flawless, are full of humour, have plenty of insecurities about themselves, don't necessarily look like Adonis or Aphrodite but instead like normal people one can see on the streets, and they are never stereotypical. They have depth and complexities like you and me, which makes them seem so humane and not just characters in a novel. I could write the same review on basically any of Mcllorycat's novels and always give a full score. Try them out, you won't regret it.
Romantic, suspenseful, heartbreaking, passionate, amazingly written with a beautiful happy ever after ending for multiple characters not just the main couple. A real page turner. I finished reading it in 1 day.
Another compelling story by an amazing author. Characters progress smoothly and you can actually visualize the story happening as you read. No error in grammar or spelling which makes it all that much better. LoOking forward to the other stories writen by this author saved in my library.
this is such a good book. I fell in love with each of the characters and was wishing the best for all of them throughout the entire book. Jonah and Eden were meant to be. Even Troy found love and success.
Tiết lộ Spoiler This story was hilarious and charming. From the begining i was captured by the storyline. I have laughed and cried while reading this story. i really Enjoy Jonah and Eden’s development and the end beautifully ties things up.
Great story, short, sweet and simple. I'm really happy tha everyone got their happy ending, especially Troy, cuz i really liked him. Everyone must give this story a try, you'll love it. 💗
Thank you dear Author, for another beautiful and lovely story. I'm a big fan of your storytelling because the leads, their struggles and plot is always somewhat related to real life, to which we can connect. They always inspire and gives different perspective about the situations, like in this one, you've beautifully described the struggles and beauty of flaws. A beautiful message that society should not behave differently with others just because of their flaws, but they should understand their struggles, they don't need pity but love and support. I've read 5 stories of yours including this, and there are another beautiful stories of urs that are waiting for me, so see u around Author. love❤
Tiết lộ Spoiler Great characters! Loved that there were tWo stories and the fact that the characters deAl with real world issues . Looking forward to more of thIs Authors work.
I love the story! I'm addicted to Jonah and Eden, heck, even Troy and Aunt Mel! There are such strong characters with great development and true romance without being trashy. If you start this one, the biggest disappointment will be waiting for the upcoming chapters. I seriously find a lot of swiss cheese story lines on this sight, but this is a solid, well written beautiful story that I never want to end.
I just finished reading it and I love it!! I'm so glad it turned out the way it did. they all got their happy ever after! if you ever decide to add more chapters later on, I'll definitely be reading it! amazing as always!!!
Tiết lộ Spoiler Probably the first couple chapters are slightly confusing with the mistaken identity, but it is such a good story that once I got it figured out I could not put it down! I love Jonah and Eden and every other character in this book! There is a lot of laugh out loud moments and parts where I find myself crying. No smut here, just a REALLY GOOD story with really good characters... I am having such a hard time waiting for the next chapters to unlock! This Author is "going to be the death of me" I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!
I’m loving this story. The ML is so cute, even if he makes terrible choices. I love this author, and this new book did not disappoint. I can’t wait to see what happens next! Good thing it’s updated regularly. 😁
I am 50 chapters in and I can't wait for the author to release more! I have started books by other authors but couldn't really get into them. Mcllorycat really knows how to draw you in! I have completed 4 plus 2 that are all being released and I have a hard time putting my phone down to sleep and work!
loving this book! I can't wait chapters to be released!! I have read 4 of her books plus 2 all working on and they are so amazing. I'm trying to patiently wait for more chapters to be released!! love love love!
This story is super adorable so far💛 The author does a great job creating relatable and realistic characters. I’m looking forward to seeing where this story goes!
🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶 I feel Eden’s pain. I once worked at a place that sold fried chicken and that’s all I smelled like and I hated it because I liked fried chicken but after working there a while I did NOT want to eat it any more! Looking forward to seeing where this book goes.
🔳🔲🔳🔲🔳🔲🔳🔲🔳🔲🔳🔲🔳 This author is so creative. Another book with unique characters. Good job! I really hope that Eden isn’t judgy when she finally gets to meet the person in the suit!
I love finding (or being referred to) new books that make me smile. This one definitely fits the bill. I didn’t see any typos or erroneous word usage either. I really like this author’s writing style! 🔵🔴🔵🔴
I’m really looking forward to more of this book!! 🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶 🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷 🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶🔹🔶 🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷🔸🔷
♥️♥️I know this book only has a few chapters, but the writing is excellent and the premise is fun. I hope to see how well the characters develop over time! ♥️♥️
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