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bro it's so bad grammer is barely readable no "" no commas, super cringe. I don't even know how this got a lot of reviews it's a waste of time in my opinion.
Is this novel dropped I really hope that isn't the case This book was really good This is one of the few Multiverse books which is good, although the grammar isn't.
bro it is amazing 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 and comedy is next level 😂😂😂😂😂 we want more chapters ,......................................,............
Worst fic I have ever read , it looks some 12-14 year old started bragging about I have this and that and can do this and that blaw!!!blaw ,blaw!!! To his school mates😂😂😂😂
Is so good ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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Really enjoy the vibe , so far the mc is always being himself which is good, the interaction, meeting with new customer(fictional character) is so fresh, the grammar i have nothing to say, me not good at writing english, so good luck thanks for the story. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
really like this story now im just waiting for the big man author to update....still a great story for me.... ..........Mortal God......
good story but the way of writing gives me eyes the creep... (┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻(ノಥ,_｣ಥ)ノ彡┻━┻┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻(ノ￣皿￣)ノ ⌒== ┫(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻(ノ￣皿￣)ノ ⌒== ┫(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻┻━┻︵└(´_｀└)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻┻┻︵¯\(ツ)/¯︵┻┻
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Im not very good at writing reviews since i don't do it often but I thought all of you should know thag this is a very fun read. How many words do i need to submit? (Turns out its 140)
I like the story. But i hope you can get an editor. I also hope you can change the currency to karma. I mean the customers are heroes and that Will make sure they don't misuse the products.
Foi uma das fanfics que mais ri. Espero que o autor a atualize ..................... .................... ....................... ..................... ....................
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It’s good but the Grammar hmm........................................................................................here you’ll understand
Te elogio me encanta la historia .............................,.............. Jsjssbdjsjsjdbdbdbjsbseubebxivufjskksnsbeebfu ncuxksbdjeke e muy buena recomendado
Al principio puede parecer generica o que no vale pero se pone muy buena mientras sigues leyendo de verdad muy muy muy buena espero sigan las actualizaciones por que es una genial y excelente historia
the writing is pretty bad so bad it looks like a wattpad novel ... the idea is a good thing ... the rest of the story in general is pretty cliché very typical
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I'll be honest, the Death Tag thing is getting old. The interactions between characters of different universes is why I was interested in reading this, not multi-chapter tournaments that never seem to end.
The premise of this story is great but the story itself? Not so much. LET'S start with the grammar. That is something that can be easily improved, author. 1. Don't use [Name:"..."] when someone talks, use ["...", I said] for example 2. Don't shorten words like [please] into [plz]. Use the whole word. 3. Clean up those paragraphs, they get cut off in the middle of a sentence 4 Fix the grammar in general. Seriously, how can you write non-negotiable like that 5. Put commas where they belong. Read the sentences out loud if you must, so you can better notice it. I personally do it like this, if I think there should be a short pause when reading it out loud, I put a comma inbetween it. Not always right, but it's definitely better than what you are doing If you can't do it alone, use grammarly, translators, a dictionary or get an Editor. It's honestly sad to see such a good idea being ruined by easily fixed mistakes.
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A very good fanfic if you like slow paced slice-of-life the only thing that slightly downgrades the experience is the grammar mistakes, which can be easily ignored
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bro it's so bad grammer is barely readable no "" no commas, super cringe. I don't even know how this got a lot of reviews it's a waste of time in my opinion.
Is this novel dropped I really hope that isn't the case This book was really good This is one of the few Multiverse books which is good, although the grammar isn't.
bro it is amazing 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 and comedy is next level 😂😂😂😂😂 we want more chapters ,......................................,............
Worst fic I have ever read , it looks some 12-14 year old started bragging about I have this and that and can do this and that blaw!!!blaw ,blaw!!! To his school mates😂😂😂😂
Is so good ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
anyone come here for the catgirl pic aside from me of course👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
is this book dropped or something pls tell me I really want to know because i really loved this book SO TELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
Really enjoy the vibe , so far the mc is always being himself which is good, the interaction, meeting with new customer(fictional character) is so fresh, the grammar i have nothing to say, me not good at writing english, so good luck thanks for the story. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
really like this story now im just waiting for the big man author to update....still a great story for me.... ..........Mortal God......
good story but the way of writing gives me eyes the creep... (┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻(ノಥ,_｣ಥ)ノ彡┻━┻┻━┻ ヘ╰( •̀ε•́ ╰)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻(ノ￣皿￣)ノ ⌒== ┫(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻(┛✧Д✧))┛彡┻━┻(ノ￣皿￣)ノ ⌒== ┫(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻┻━┻︵└(´_｀└)(╯ರ ~ ರ)╯︵ ┻━┻┻┻︵¯\(ツ)/¯︵┻┻
Tiết lộ Spoiler Im not very good at writing reviews since i don't do it often but I thought all of you should know thag this is a very fun read. How many words do i need to submit? (Turns out its 140)
I like the story. But i hope you can get an editor. I also hope you can change the currency to karma. I mean the customers are heroes and that Will make sure they don't misuse the products.
Foi uma das fanfics que mais ri. Espero que o autor a atualize ..................... .................... ....................... ..................... ....................
WHERE IS KIMETSU NO YAIBA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
It’s good but the Grammar hmm........................................................................................here you’ll understand
Te elogio me encanta la historia .............................,.............. Jsjssbdjsjsjdbdbdbjsbseubebxivufjskksnsbeebfu ncuxksbdjeke e muy buena recomendado
Al principio puede parecer generica o que no vale pero se pone muy buena mientras sigues leyendo de verdad muy muy muy buena espero sigan las actualizaciones por que es una genial y excelente historia
the writing is pretty bad so bad it looks like a wattpad novel ... the idea is a good thing ... the rest of the story in general is pretty cliché very typical
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I'll be honest, the Death Tag thing is getting old. The interactions between characters of different universes is why I was interested in reading this, not multi-chapter tournaments that never seem to end.
The premise of this story is great but the story itself? Not so much. LET'S start with the grammar. That is something that can be easily improved, author. 1. Don't use [Name:"..."] when someone talks, use ["...", I said] for example 2. Don't shorten words like [please] into [plz]. Use the whole word. 3. Clean up those paragraphs, they get cut off in the middle of a sentence 4 Fix the grammar in general. Seriously, how can you write non-negotiable like that 5. Put commas where they belong. Read the sentences out loud if you must, so you can better notice it. I personally do it like this, if I think there should be a short pause when reading it out loud, I put a comma inbetween it. Not always right, but it's definitely better than what you are doing If you can't do it alone, use grammarly, translators, a dictionary or get an Editor. It's honestly sad to see such a good idea being ruined by easily fixed mistakes.
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A very good fanfic if you like slow paced slice-of-life the only thing that slightly downgrades the experience is the grammar mistakes, which can be easily ignored
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MY EYES!!!!! It's a fun read also guy needs an editor.