Warlock of the Magus World – Redux

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Rival789

Within the first chapter, I already liked the story much better than the original. Giving the AI an actual personality and name makes the interactions between them interesting and fun, especially when they scheme together, and gives us, the readers an emotional attachment to her. The revamped AI vs the original is like comparing an EV to a toaster, just that much better. I really like the new Leylins personality, he is arrogant, but doesn't suffer the curse of typical CN characters and spouting about 'courting death'. He knows he is weak and is making plans to get stronger. If you have read the original, you will inevitably know what happens, but I think this is much better overall. Can't wait for more chapters

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SadFrostie

I like it, dont drop this. ...................................................................................................................

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Sculp

keep it up author I had read the original vut didnt finish it, Thanks for your efforts.........................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Sloth_King21

Keep up the good work. I like this leylin much better [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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KillingmeSoftly

Author are you going to dig deep in the power of the laws cause in the original we didn't get to see the full extent of the powers of sin so are going to make changes so that we get to see leylin and the magus alliance use their laws to their full potential?

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Kaisen1

I haven't started reading it yet but it doesn't stop me from rating it 5 stars. the synopsis is the answer to my prayer. no romance with a.i./system and will not have its own physical body. i feel like kira when he cummed to mona lisa's hand

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Monarch_Of_Hell

AUTHOOOOOOR WAKEEEE UPPP!!! ITS BEEN 19DAYSSSSSSSS WHERE R YAAAAAAA!?[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Panda343

this is better then the other Warlock of the Magus World fanfiction i have seen the mc is much more evil unlike the original mc the only problem is that auther of the novel is not updateing the chapter regularly and all in all the story is good keep it up auther and don't drooped it plz[img=faceslap]

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ShadowlessMoon

Solid 5 stars story.It's a gem hiding in dirt.Read it and see if it suits your style, you'l probably like it though if you are bored of the super op mc's in different fanfics. First five or six chapters shouldn't take more than five minutes to read so you can give it a try.Also again the Author's mind is the best.Love ya Author<3<3<3

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Sloth_King21

Love this leylin better than the original. Keep it up author. You are awesome [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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TheComedy_Mask

i continued readingand i must sya i apologize author you wrote a better leylin then the original keep up the good work if you finish i sure it will a lot more interesting then the original guys trust hes'sevil evil if helps someone his practically buying there life and then watching them suffer for his enjoyment and experiment

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KeTchuP

Very good, I hope there are more chapters ..........................................................................................................................

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_JuneDays_oz

World building- five star because it’s a fan fic. Character design- is unique as he is actual going out of his way to be evil, except for the last few chapter where he helping bicky. AI chip should not have intelligence, I feel as though the author put it there so he could sound out ideas and thought between the AI chip and leylin. Story development- it follows the same thing as the original except he obtains a buff from the serpent in the lab he finds the Spector in. Update schedule- is trash it was dropped for five months without any notice. Writing quality- its alright it not mtl material but it isn’t the greatest at least it doesn’t have as many exclamation point.

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IiILoVeMe

Evil mc not many differences with the original

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Munchnax

Updated: Truly enjoying the story can't wait for more. For future readers please note that the mc has no clue about the original novel and he has a semi sentient ai system(though I almost dropped the story because sentient beings and living in others bother me I've read way to many betrayal fics to trust them...) it is a master slave relationship so it's all good.

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Master_Of_gu

Amazing thing, I enjoyed a lot, but the problem is with the intelligence chip, which has human behavior with its trivial words, which destroyed this masterpiece. The intelligence chip should have remained only for analysis without trivial expressions. I wish you success.

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Sacrefin

I love it plz give us more...............................I love it plz give us more...............................I love it plz give us more...............................

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IanLi89

nice so far, but Id like more chapters. I still give the 5 stars tho ------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Sacrefin

I love it so far just wish for more chapters, please dont quit on this, keep up the good work...... .. ..... ........... .... .... .........

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Chili_Dog

I like it. It's not what I wouldve wanted but I like it. Problem is too few updates. Do you best author-san! charcharcharcharcharcharcharcharcharchar