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I couldn't get through the first chapter, it seems for me like the author is simping for Sasuke. -How can u tell that someone like Naruto was luckier when being ostracized from the time he could remember(just read what it does to human if u don't know the result of something like that), ofc I'm not saying that Sasuke had it light, but he had the help to overcome his problems from the whole village, he just didn't want it. -How can the author tell that Itachi is a hypocrite when he has just chosen the most optimal option he could take at that time (he was just 13yo kid at that time btw), he didn't have other options, could u tell what would u do? face the annihilation with the rest of ur clan or just maybe give a chance to live life to his brother, -Itachi takes Fugaku MS and replaces it with Sasuke. Do u know that eyes grow with body ? -Impossible 'sharingun' growth, he is 7 and without any training, he gets fully evolved 'sharingun', when even the youngest Uchiha that awaken 'sharingun' got only one(The youngest person to awaken 'sharingun' is Izumi Uchiha at the age of 5)... -And after over relaying on 'sharingun' he still makes some comments about how Naruto is talentless and without Kurama is total weakling, Idk how others think but for me it seems like the whole Sasuke strength is 'sharingun', only after getting it Sasuke started growing strength and naruto talent is not mediocre or low, he learned Kage bunshin in hours and Rasengan in a week, that feat took Jiraya 3 years, Naruto just didn't have a way to learn something before getting to know Jiraya, after which he cought on to Sasuke in no time. Now please compare author a Sasuke without sharingan with him medicore talent(He really is not genius, idk why people think that when his growth before sharingan was slow, not comparable to likes like Minato, Orochi, Itachi, Shisui, he had resources to grow stronger but only in that time learned a couple of jutsus.) and Naruto without Kurama that was not ostracized and got similar resources that should have as the son of 4th hokage. If u compared let me know ur answer :)
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Very good fanfic. Development of characters is very good it show that autor put some braincels in to it. But writing number could be im próbę.Im don't read so good fanfic in a loot of time 10/10
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I hope and wish that you never drop this novel like so many other fan-fic author. Before I started reading this novel, I thought it will be okay and I didn't had too much hope. But, after reading this novel, I feel like I awakened my Sharingan. Best fan-fic ever. Again, take your time to create chapters, but, please finish it.
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I'm loving the story concept and idea right off the bat. I also was dragged in from the #noharem tag. So far I am not disappointed. The only thing is that the grammar is pretty bad but its not to the point that it makes the story illegible. So it is fine with me. Please keep writing author the more you write the better you get and this will be an amazing story.
This is a pretty good story that is made from the author. The speed is quite nice and the altered Sasuke seems pretty cool along with the changes of the other characters as well. I am enjoying reading as well as thinking about what going to happen in the next chapter. However, the updates are a bit slow which is sad because I just can't get enough. The writing quality is pretty good however there are a few grammatical errors here and there but everyone's human. Your brain usually doesn't register them unless you reread a sentence. Those were really the only problems with the novel in my opinion if you really even want to count them as such. PLEASE UPDATE MORE AUTHOR :) EVERYONE WANTS YOU TOO!
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Author has a bare bones grasp on the source material, the English language, and story telling. I like Sasuke SI fics a lot. Most fics bash Sasuke or fetishize him, but SI fics put a relatable person into the most important character in the series.
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Honestly, this was very fun to read. Thanks for not dropping it, and reuploading the older chapters! Don't listen to people's complaints, your story is great!
Can the author change Sakura's breast size, I am quite annoyed why many people hate Sakura even though she is the strongest woman in Konoha, hopefully this is a harem. And don't forget Tsunade, to hell with age !!
I love the premise of the book I know if has kind of been done before but I like the changes in this one and the fact that your putting him on a route to ensure his continued notoriety in the story.
It's fine. Grammar and spelling could use a lot of work. In my experience with dealing with people who criticize your English, most writers usually say "English not main Language sry" So just do that if you don't want people up you ass for spelling "using" as "useing" Sometimes you go form 1st person to 3rd person, it's a bit annoying by bearable. MC is pretty nice, not as in morally nice, but likeable. Fuck naruto, I appreciate your views on the village and it's resident hokage-wannabe-idiot. I like how your stimulating the growth of everyone in Team 7 even though MC wants to run off into the wind as soon as possible. As for pairings, I couldn't care less, I saw you liking a comment about using the rinnegan to world travel, so if you do that I don't know how to feel about having the FL from Naruto World. Harem = Don't give a ****, if you do it don't collect them like pokemon. TBH I really don't give a **** who you pair with, even if it's sakura, that's how much I don't care, as long as you make the interactions between MC and FL as reasonable as possible and not "Ay let's ****" and they live happily ever after. I'm looking forward to the senjutsu power creep with a rinne-sharigan crap, however that switcharoo with the MS in the first few chapters was a bit of an asspull.
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I couldn't get through the first chapter, it seems for me like the author is simping for Sasuke. -How can u tell that someone like Naruto was luckier when being ostracized from the time he could remember(just read what it does to human if u don't know the result of something like that), ofc I'm not saying that Sasuke had it light, but he had the help to overcome his problems from the whole village, he just didn't want it. -How can the author tell that Itachi is a hypocrite when he has just chosen the most optimal option he could take at that time (he was just 13yo kid at that time btw), he didn't have other options, could u tell what would u do? face the annihilation with the rest of ur clan or just maybe give a chance to live life to his brother, -Itachi takes Fugaku MS and replaces it with Sasuke. Do u know that eyes grow with body ? -Impossible 'sharingun' growth, he is 7 and without any training, he gets fully evolved 'sharingun', when even the youngest Uchiha that awaken 'sharingun' got only one(The youngest person to awaken 'sharingun' is Izumi Uchiha at the age of 5)... -And after over relaying on 'sharingun' he still makes some comments about how Naruto is talentless and without Kurama is total weakling, Idk how others think but for me it seems like the whole Sasuke strength is 'sharingun', only after getting it Sasuke started growing strength and naruto talent is not mediocre or low, he learned Kage bunshin in hours and Rasengan in a week, that feat took Jiraya 3 years, Naruto just didn't have a way to learn something before getting to know Jiraya, after which he cought on to Sasuke in no time. Now please compare author a Sasuke without sharingan with him medicore talent(He really is not genius, idk why people think that when his growth before sharingan was slow, not comparable to likes like Minato, Orochi, Itachi, Shisui, he had resources to grow stronger but only in that time learned a couple of jutsus.) and Naruto without Kurama that was not ostracized and got similar resources that should have as the son of 4th hokage. If u compared let me know ur answer :)
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Very good fanfic. Development of characters is very good it show that autor put some braincels in to it. But writing number could be im próbę.Im don't read so good fanfic in a loot of time 10/10
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I hope and wish that you never drop this novel like so many other fan-fic author. Before I started reading this novel, I thought it will be okay and I didn't had too much hope. But, after reading this novel, I feel like I awakened my Sharingan. Best fan-fic ever. Again, take your time to create chapters, but, please finish it.
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I'm loving the story concept and idea right off the bat. I also was dragged in from the #noharem tag. So far I am not disappointed. The only thing is that the grammar is pretty bad but its not to the point that it makes the story illegible. So it is fine with me. Please keep writing author the more you write the better you get and this will be an amazing story.
This is a pretty good story that is made from the author. The speed is quite nice and the altered Sasuke seems pretty cool along with the changes of the other characters as well. I am enjoying reading as well as thinking about what going to happen in the next chapter. However, the updates are a bit slow which is sad because I just can't get enough. The writing quality is pretty good however there are a few grammatical errors here and there but everyone's human. Your brain usually doesn't register them unless you reread a sentence. Those were really the only problems with the novel in my opinion if you really even want to count them as such. PLEASE UPDATE MORE AUTHOR :) EVERYONE WANTS YOU TOO!
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Author has a bare bones grasp on the source material, the English language, and story telling. I like Sasuke SI fics a lot. Most fics bash Sasuke or fetishize him, but SI fics put a relatable person into the most important character in the series.
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This story is just so great, the grammar do not bother me too much as i'm not a grammar nazi (and honestly i don't f*cking pay attention to it). and chapter 15 was just too much fun, continue like that [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Honestly, this was very fun to read. Thanks for not dropping it, and reuploading the older chapters! Don't listen to people's complaints, your story is great!
Can the author change Sakura's breast size, I am quite annoyed why many people hate Sakura even though she is the strongest woman in Konoha, hopefully this is a harem. And don't forget Tsunade, to hell with age !!
I love the premise of the book I know if has kind of been done before but I like the changes in this one and the fact that your putting him on a route to ensure his continued notoriety in the story.
It's fine. Grammar and spelling could use a lot of work. In my experience with dealing with people who criticize your English, most writers usually say "English not main Language sry" So just do that if you don't want people up you ass for spelling "using" as "useing" Sometimes you go form 1st person to 3rd person, it's a bit annoying by bearable. MC is pretty nice, not as in morally nice, but likeable. Fuck naruto, I appreciate your views on the village and it's resident hokage-wannabe-idiot. I like how your stimulating the growth of everyone in Team 7 even though MC wants to run off into the wind as soon as possible. As for pairings, I couldn't care less, I saw you liking a comment about using the rinnegan to world travel, so if you do that I don't know how to feel about having the FL from Naruto World. Harem = Don't give a ****, if you do it don't collect them like pokemon. TBH I really don't give a **** who you pair with, even if it's sakura, that's how much I don't care, as long as you make the interactions between MC and FL as reasonable as possible and not "Ay let's ****" and they live happily ever after. I'm looking forward to the senjutsu power creep with a rinne-sharigan crap, however that switcharoo with the MS in the first few chapters was a bit of an asspull.
I like the story a lot I like the training I like the fight I like were story going thank you aloooooot for taking your time to write this [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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