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EmanatorofAha

A self-insert character that is hypocritical and unlikable? Check. A predictable plot, self-insert character bashing and stealing Issei's girls and making him into a cuckold? Check. The MC comes to Kuoh of all places instead of exploring the rest of the world and wasting potential plot ideas? Check. The MC with alpha male domination nonsense? Check. Unreliable updates? Check. The result is a one-star rating. It's a shame that I can't give zero stars.

28d
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mike_w_0544

In all it's a pretty good book not sure what the updates are like since i just started reading it. But if you like dxd then it should scratch an itch.

1mth
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Shinomiya_Akira

Mc memiliki sifat sampah, menyebalkan, munafik, seperti bocah puber smp[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

2mth
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Seyitan_Odufalu

Author why did you drop your konosuba fic😭😭I’ve been craving it a lot these days

8mth
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Bad_news_83

To tell you the truth I still didn’t start reading but I anticipated something good because I had followed a lot of your stories Plus when I see That this fiction is DXD😍 Rosario Vampire,🥺 Testament Of New Sister Devil🥰 I expect something good I hope you don’t disappoint me Especially that you disappear suddenly a lot I hope in the future you make a crossover multiverse fiction about Marvel + Dc+ Harry Potter

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8mth
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RustyBoi

As someone who read the whole thing on FanFiction dot net, imma tell you why i like this so much despite it not being THAT different from above average fics: author got death threats so he doesn’t include any of Issei’s og harem in mc’s women, and in response author cooked up a legitimate, classic NTR arc for Issei where he beat his meat to Akeno getting railed

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9mth
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TaterRumble

One of the only good DXD fics at the moment. Good writing, good pacing, good premise, good creativity and great update stability. Good job bro.

9mth
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Avengtank

read upto chapter 31. The novel is pretty boring. its a DXD world where the powers of MC seems lack luster and not interesting. There is no buildup and climax in the story. Feels very boring to read also with the mixing of different anime feels very unpolished. Mixtures of different powers also feels clanky. Mostly feels like reading a story for muscle headed gym rat. Still gave a 5 star cause u know, if i give criticisms with low start it will get deleted by author.

9mth
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J754
LV 1

Keep it up. Great story. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................

9mth
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Dreams_Reader01928

This is a very good story, but there are some pothole like the devil not finding they are fighting, but I like how MC had different way then getting reincarnated as devil. I love it thank you for hard work 👍👍👍👍👍

9mth
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Kaiser9

It's Jord, quality is guaranteed. 5 stars.

9mth
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ranaltor

I've read some of your other fiction and this one is really good so I just wanted to you know give you five stars and I hope that you keep on posting for this fanfiction

10mth
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TaterRumble

Keep it bro cuz there aren't many dxd novels that aren't cringey. Writing is good, consistent updates so far, and no reincarnated as a devil cliche. Good work bro

10mth
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Lector567

Buena historia Le bas adar la apariencia de acnologia de fairy tail? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

10mth
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AbelWizard

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10mth
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MasterBo

When I heard of this novel I didn't expect much but when I opened it, I was left in awe. This is spectacular and amazing. A real piece of art right here. It's really interesting and I would recommend it.

10mth
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dankoku

so it appears I'm yet again reading a novel from this guy. What can I say? Epic.

11mth
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Arcanemissile

A great story. Updates , at least for now, are coming out quick, a story with a great potential and having read this authors other works there is no doubt in my mind that the quality of the story will stay on this high of a level.

11mth
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Cultured_Skeleton

Honestly love the premise. Not just 1 But 2 twice criticals and now we are Making the Gimp dragon emperor 10/10 can't wait for more updates

12mth
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Kaiser9

With Jord the quality of the story is assured. 5 Stars

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12mth
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M_Zero09

I'll just leave this image here.. 🙃👀☕🗿[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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12mth
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Trouxa_157

One of the best FanFiction writers in the webnovel, unfortunately he is the one who leaves the most unfinished work. Every time Jordino appears, his stories are at the top of the Ranking.

1yr
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skidmark

this is just for those of you that don't now where to read jords stuff go ff.live it's where he posts a lot this has like 100 /200 webnovel chapters on there same with most his books

1yr
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Gamer_Otaku448879

I like how the story is going and how you are spitting fact and how much your OC is such a chad and roast the MC but can you leave the anime atmosphere alone and let you OC be the realist one and how much he’s roasting the MC and if you do get what i am talking about just tell me

1yr
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Freak_g_s

Already up to date on fanfic .net and this story is great, glad to see it posted here

1yr
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Gency_Nda

Amazing. Hope you are not going to drop it and update frequently [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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ONGFRFR

already up to date on FF.net, great as always

1yr
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deavon_stubbs

if you have indeed abandoned this fanfic you should remove it from the web site can you upload more for blazing fist and stack the deckbeacuse s5ack the deck just got to the good part

3yr
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ArthurCE10

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

3yr
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THEPUMPKINL0RD

This is good, keep up the good work!

3yr
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EmanatorofAha

A self-insert character that is hypocritical and unlikable? Check. A predictable plot, self-insert character bashing and stealing Issei's girls and making him into a cuckold? Check. The MC comes to Kuoh of all places instead of exploring the rest of the world and wasting potential plot ideas? Check. The MC with alpha male domination nonsense? Check. Unreliable updates? Check. The result is a one-star rating. It's a shame that I can't give zero stars.

28d
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mike_w_0544

In all it's a pretty good book not sure what the updates are like since i just started reading it. But if you like dxd then it should scratch an itch.

1mth
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Shinomiya_Akira

Mc memiliki sifat sampah, menyebalkan, munafik, seperti bocah puber smp[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

2mth
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Seyitan_Odufalu

Author why did you drop your konosuba fic😭😭I’ve been craving it a lot these days

8mth
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Bad_news_83

To tell you the truth I still didn’t start reading but I anticipated something good because I had followed a lot of your stories Plus when I see That this fiction is DXD😍 Rosario Vampire,🥺 Testament Of New Sister Devil🥰 I expect something good I hope you don’t disappoint me Especially that you disappear suddenly a lot I hope in the future you make a crossover multiverse fiction about Marvel + Dc+ Harry Potter

img
8mth
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RustyBoi

As someone who read the whole thing on FanFiction dot net, imma tell you why i like this so much despite it not being THAT different from above average fics: author got death threats so he doesn’t include any of Issei’s og harem in mc’s women, and in response author cooked up a legitimate, classic NTR arc for Issei where he beat his meat to Akeno getting railed

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9mth
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TaterRumble

One of the only good DXD fics at the moment. Good writing, good pacing, good premise, good creativity and great update stability. Good job bro.

9mth
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Avengtank

read upto chapter 31. The novel is pretty boring. its a DXD world where the powers of MC seems lack luster and not interesting. There is no buildup and climax in the story. Feels very boring to read also with the mixing of different anime feels very unpolished. Mixtures of different powers also feels clanky. Mostly feels like reading a story for muscle headed gym rat. Still gave a 5 star cause u know, if i give criticisms with low start it will get deleted by author.

9mth
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J754
LV 1

Keep it up. Great story. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................

9mth
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Dreams_Reader01928

This is a very good story, but there are some pothole like the devil not finding they are fighting, but I like how MC had different way then getting reincarnated as devil. I love it thank you for hard work 👍👍👍👍👍

9mth
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Kaiser9

It's Jord, quality is guaranteed. 5 stars.

9mth
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ranaltor

I've read some of your other fiction and this one is really good so I just wanted to you know give you five stars and I hope that you keep on posting for this fanfiction

10mth
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TaterRumble

Keep it bro cuz there aren't many dxd novels that aren't cringey. Writing is good, consistent updates so far, and no reincarnated as a devil cliche. Good work bro

10mth
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Lector567

Buena historia Le bas adar la apariencia de acnologia de fairy tail? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

10mth
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AbelWizard

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10mth
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MasterBo

When I heard of this novel I didn't expect much but when I opened it, I was left in awe. This is spectacular and amazing. A real piece of art right here. It's really interesting and I would recommend it.

10mth
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dankoku

so it appears I'm yet again reading a novel from this guy. What can I say? Epic.

11mth
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Arcanemissile

A great story. Updates , at least for now, are coming out quick, a story with a great potential and having read this authors other works there is no doubt in my mind that the quality of the story will stay on this high of a level.

11mth
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Cultured_Skeleton

Honestly love the premise. Not just 1 But 2 twice criticals and now we are Making the Gimp dragon emperor 10/10 can't wait for more updates

12mth
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Kaiser9

With Jord the quality of the story is assured. 5 Stars

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12mth
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M_Zero09

I'll just leave this image here.. 🙃👀☕🗿[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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12mth
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Trouxa_157

One of the best FanFiction writers in the webnovel, unfortunately he is the one who leaves the most unfinished work. Every time Jordino appears, his stories are at the top of the Ranking.

1yr
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skidmark

this is just for those of you that don't now where to read jords stuff go ff.live it's where he posts a lot this has like 100 /200 webnovel chapters on there same with most his books

1yr
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Gamer_Otaku448879

I like how the story is going and how you are spitting fact and how much your OC is such a chad and roast the MC but can you leave the anime atmosphere alone and let you OC be the realist one and how much he’s roasting the MC and if you do get what i am talking about just tell me

1yr
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Freak_g_s

Already up to date on fanfic .net and this story is great, glad to see it posted here

1yr
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Gency_Nda

Amazing. Hope you are not going to drop it and update frequently [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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ONGFRFR

already up to date on FF.net, great as always

1yr
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deavon_stubbs

if you have indeed abandoned this fanfic you should remove it from the web site can you upload more for blazing fist and stack the deckbeacuse s5ack the deck just got to the good part

3yr
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ArthurCE10

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

3yr
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THEPUMPKINL0RD

This is good, keep up the good work!

3yr
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