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I gave all 5 stars except for the character design. I really tried to push myself to read further than chapter 46 but I just couldn't bare the MC's antic and attitude. Sorry, it's just me. But do keep up the great work and good luck on your future endeavors.
I was trying a find a naruto story with a good romance when I stumbled upon this great story. it was everything you need good writing quality, for non system guys mc just has appraisal skill so it works I guess, romance part is quite good. so I can say it deserves a 5 star rating. ps. if you have any recommendations of naruto world with good romance, non system please tell me.
A very good fanfiction novel in the Naruto AU. I very much enjoyed this since the plot was good. The grammar is without too much problems which is something I consider a must when reading... All in all highly recommended to anyone who likes this gender. Just one thing before anyone read this, the author probably abandoned it so it isn't finished...
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This fanfic is pure gold, it may be that the author finds time to keep writing it. Strength with what you have to do author.
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good story author hope you will have more time to write .i always wait it continue ( 60 years lelf). p/s: this is one of the best naruto fanfic don't want it to drop
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when are you going to start back.....................................................,...............................,...................,..
wkwkwkw,,saya suka sekali fanfic ini . ceritanya menarik dan menghibur, saya harap chaphter kelanjutannya akan lebih seru lagi. saya dukung karya anda author sama ...hehehe
Really enjoy this book recommend it for everybody. Very well written and thought out. MC is way different than a lot of other M c's and other books. The way he portrays himself and others portray him is not only hilarious but frustrating at times in a good way. All I can say is give the book a try.
Hahaha....😂😂😂😂😂😂😂👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 This fanfic ia very funny.... All hail mitsu gown sama😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂... #overlord #ainz #demiurge Wkwkwkwkkw.....
It's not bad, but i just can't come to like the MC . The way he acts, the things he's done or his denial and slow growth just make no sense to me. Many people seem to like the story and that's ok, but i can't shake the idea that in the grand total of it all the world would be better of without the MC existing and that's just sad. The writing quality is solid but the development of the MC is pretty slow and not really smooth and the amount of chapters that is needed to get any real development of the MC is pretty staggering. The backstory is not that solid and had a bunch of stuff that make no real sense with the way the MC acts. So all in all worth a try but it's pretty slow, the MC is unlikeable and at times stupid. It has potential but i believe we would need another 100 chapters or more to see if the MC ever really grows up.
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It’s super funny that coincidences and misunderstanding happen just right to make Mitsu seem like some sort of benevolent Prince that does no wrong, lol. And Author-san’s writing is funny as hxll lol. Like the writing style is definitely a semi-serious crack fic style. There’s also stuff in this fic that I have not seen before, which is super fxcking cool, cause I’ve read SO many Naruto fics and it’s nice to see something I haven’t before.
Nice story! I just hope you finish it with a bang! 5 stars from me! 5 stars from me! 5 stars from me! 5 stars from me! 5 stars from me! 5 stars from me!
This is good,.............really good......vividly good, .....insanely good.....here, take all my power stones Author-san ..................
I really tried to read this story, in chapter 5 I wanted to leave it because of the Mc's nonsense but I told myself just continue with the story, but my limit was 25, more than that I can't give another chance, if a hamburger is not from your taste you just don't finish eating it and say "you know what, it was disgusting". Well this story is that hamburger, you can't connect with the Mc so that you can care what happens to him, literally the chapter has more complaints and meaningless whining from the Mc than important things. so much potential wasted on a pirate deadpool attempt. It's not a bad story, it's just not for everyone, in my case I like more an interesting development of characters and there isn't in this project, so I recommend that you try to give it a chance but lower your expectations, don't expect a masterpiece like It makes it look like so many 5 stars that I don't understand where they come from. unfortunately it's not my cup of tea
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cringe level supreme comedy GODLIKE this novel is HILARIOUS the author CLEARLY knows what to write and i'm thankful for not going overboard with cringiness all the love and thank you for writing a funny book.
Awesome fanfic, Awesome book cover, Awesome author.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Wonderful story, it's quite rare to see a mc that's so...human, with his own bad habits and sides unlike some of those that are practically robot mcs that only train and have very little human interaction. His personality is quite unique and alright as well. The love story need a bit more improvements tho, seems nice but a bit boring to read it:,) the love story I meant- but wonderful story or novel indeed
I gave all 5 stars except for the character design. I really tried to push myself to read further than chapter 46 but I just couldn't bare the MC's antic and attitude. Sorry, it's just me. But do keep up the great work and good luck on your future endeavors.
I was trying a find a naruto story with a good romance when I stumbled upon this great story. it was everything you need good writing quality, for non system guys mc just has appraisal skill so it works I guess, romance part is quite good. so I can say it deserves a 5 star rating. ps. if you have any recommendations of naruto world with good romance, non system please tell me.
A very good fanfiction novel in the Naruto AU. I very much enjoyed this since the plot was good. The grammar is without too much problems which is something I consider a must when reading... All in all highly recommended to anyone who likes this gender. Just one thing before anyone read this, the author probably abandoned it so it isn't finished...
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This fanfic is pure gold, it may be that the author finds time to keep writing it. Strength with what you have to do author.
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good story author hope you will have more time to write .i always wait it continue ( 60 years lelf). p/s: this is one of the best naruto fanfic don't want it to drop
👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼🗑️💩👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼🗑️💩👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼
Tiết lộ Spoiler when are you going to start back.....................................................,...............................,...................,..
wkwkwkw,,saya suka sekali fanfic ini . ceritanya menarik dan menghibur, saya harap chaphter kelanjutannya akan lebih seru lagi. saya dukung karya anda author sama ...hehehe
Really enjoy this book recommend it for everybody. Very well written and thought out. MC is way different than a lot of other M c's and other books. The way he portrays himself and others portray him is not only hilarious but frustrating at times in a good way. All I can say is give the book a try.
Hahaha....😂😂😂😂😂😂😂👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 This fanfic ia very funny.... All hail mitsu gown sama😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂... #overlord #ainz #demiurge Wkwkwkwkkw.....
It's not bad, but i just can't come to like the MC . The way he acts, the things he's done or his denial and slow growth just make no sense to me. Many people seem to like the story and that's ok, but i can't shake the idea that in the grand total of it all the world would be better of without the MC existing and that's just sad. The writing quality is solid but the development of the MC is pretty slow and not really smooth and the amount of chapters that is needed to get any real development of the MC is pretty staggering. The backstory is not that solid and had a bunch of stuff that make no real sense with the way the MC acts. So all in all worth a try but it's pretty slow, the MC is unlikeable and at times stupid. It has potential but i believe we would need another 100 chapters or more to see if the MC ever really grows up.
Tiết lộ Spoiler It’s super funny that coincidences and misunderstanding happen just right to make Mitsu seem like some sort of benevolent Prince that does no wrong, lol. And Author-san’s writing is funny as hxll lol. Like the writing style is definitely a semi-serious crack fic style. There’s also stuff in this fic that I have not seen before, which is super fxcking cool, cause I’ve read SO many Naruto fics and it’s nice to see something I haven’t before.
Nice story! I just hope you finish it with a bang! 5 stars from me! 5 stars from me! 5 stars from me! 5 stars from me! 5 stars from me! 5 stars from me!
This is good,.............really good......vividly good, .....insanely good.....here, take all my power stones Author-san ..................
I really tried to read this story, in chapter 5 I wanted to leave it because of the Mc's nonsense but I told myself just continue with the story, but my limit was 25, more than that I can't give another chance, if a hamburger is not from your taste you just don't finish eating it and say "you know what, it was disgusting". Well this story is that hamburger, you can't connect with the Mc so that you can care what happens to him, literally the chapter has more complaints and meaningless whining from the Mc than important things. so much potential wasted on a pirate deadpool attempt. It's not a bad story, it's just not for everyone, in my case I like more an interesting development of characters and there isn't in this project, so I recommend that you try to give it a chance but lower your expectations, don't expect a masterpiece like It makes it look like so many 5 stars that I don't understand where they come from. unfortunately it's not my cup of tea
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cringe level supreme comedy GODLIKE this novel is HILARIOUS the author CLEARLY knows what to write and i'm thankful for not going overboard with cringiness all the love and thank you for writing a funny book.
Awesome fanfic, Awesome book cover, Awesome author.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Wonderful story, it's quite rare to see a mc that's so...human, with his own bad habits and sides unlike some of those that are practically robot mcs that only train and have very little human interaction. His personality is quite unique and alright as well. The love story need a bit more improvements tho, seems nice but a bit boring to read it:,) the love story I meant- but wonderful story or novel indeed