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The Immortal Adventure
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It was a cold night, but unusually loud. There was one man being chased down from building to building by 5 big shot organisations resulting in a big explosion killing everyone including the civilians.... {Welcome Host to the world of the Pirates} "What the fu-".
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don't make it like a video game make it adventurous that will be loved and make the paragraph a little more clearer and thanks for the chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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