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‘English isn’t my first language “ so you know this is about to be a masterpiece
Lagi.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The story is messed up from the very beginning. Every major naruto character starts of the same age. I don't understand what the author was hoping for, but he dropped the novel and that speaks for itself.
The chapters are incredibly short while it has 49 chapters each chapter could be read in maybe 20 seconds or so Huge turn-off. ............
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Great story with an amazing consept and great pasing and a system that is not too broken so i hope you finish the Story as it would be a shame not to get an ending to it
Need new chapters plllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
i don't know what to say but i can't understand how the world work cause there's too many different things from what i know about naruto world even if you say that it is because it has to be the fact that the world is alternative universe but too many different things. i will not surprised anymore if you say that the six path sage has a surname banjamin instead outsutsuki.
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A great fanfiction. It is very interesting. Never expected this from a fanfic with Orochimaru as the protagonist. I really love this one .Not to mention it has humor as well.👍
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very very good good structure (planing/history/ranks/abilitys/talent) also orochi has a very intresting character cold calculative ruthless and most important vigelente
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This book barely makes any sense like everything‘s in a different timeline and their account and during either a belong to under this is a fanfic
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The novel is amazing, the genius writer wrote the naruto story in a special way and added new things like differences in the level of the ninja (the ninja could not defeat a higher rank easily) and also added a balanced system to the mc. A chakar monster that feeds on people and animals
My dude please don’t drop this although I didn’t like the beginning I loved the middle and ending parts there freaking great my dude. anyways Powerstones for you.
‘English isn’t my first language “ so you know this is about to be a masterpiece
Lagi.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The story is messed up from the very beginning. Every major naruto character starts of the same age. I don't understand what the author was hoping for, but he dropped the novel and that speaks for itself.
The chapters are incredibly short while it has 49 chapters each chapter could be read in maybe 20 seconds or so Huge turn-off. ............
Try more chapters .......,..........,,.,,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,,,.,...,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,,.,.,...,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,,.,.,.,,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,..,...
Great story with an amazing consept and great pasing and a system that is not too broken so i hope you finish the Story as it would be a shame not to get an ending to it
Need new chapters plllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
i don't know what to say but i can't understand how the world work cause there's too many different things from what i know about naruto world even if you say that it is because it has to be the fact that the world is alternative universe but too many different things. i will not surprised anymore if you say that the six path sage has a surname banjamin instead outsutsuki.
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A great fanfiction. It is very interesting. Never expected this from a fanfic with Orochimaru as the protagonist. I really love this one .Not to mention it has humor as well.👍
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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very very good good structure (planing/history/ranks/abilitys/talent) also orochi has a very intresting character cold calculative ruthless and most important vigelente
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Le veo mucho potencial 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁 😁
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This book barely makes any sense like everything‘s in a different timeline and their account and during either a belong to under this is a fanfic
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The novel is amazing, the genius writer wrote the naruto story in a special way and added new things like differences in the level of the ninja (the ninja could not defeat a higher rank easily) and also added a balanced system to the mc. A chakar monster that feeds on people and animals
My dude please don’t drop this although I didn’t like the beginning I loved the middle and ending parts there freaking great my dude. anyways Powerstones for you.
