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To call someone lower than you with sama is a big NO for me.... For me if you have the power... Then your the one who's hold the authority..... Must to burst the planet Just for killing some bug or pest? Why not? But if you Dont want you Just can control it with Giving them a taste of fear if they rebel..... NO OFFENSE!!!
Interesting story, Hope you would finish the fan fic as I would fully support be giving this a lot of power stones.
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Best novel ever. I have read a lot of novels on Webnovel and this is probably one of the best written. Really enjoyable and not confusing to read. Would recommend.
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the fanfaction is great and interesting. the only problem is the main character since he trust people to easily I only hope mc character changes to be more mature and not be naive.
Story and background are nice and all, but the MC is dumb and pussy as hell. One time he removes some 'Unwanted bugs' from existence and threatens 'them' and another moment he's calling the 'bug' with sama honorific when clearly he's the one who has the bugs life in his palm... It killed all mood to read further into the story. The author didn't find any other plot so he's going with the DarlingFX soldier taking orders from lower beings route...
It really just makes no sense to me how he can know so much yet so little. And using the excuse that he's young when he's the fucking origin himself. Plus saying that it would strain him. Are you kidding me. I love the fic but the thing that absolutely ruins it is his character. I like is cutsey, friendly and funny side, but not his naive side. I mean he instantly knows how to pilot a Franx yet dosent know good from evil and when its nessosary to kill evil and when to keep it. Besides that little rant of mine the novel is definitely a fun read so far and I recommend you give it a try.
I like the plot everything about the novel is good. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) lol lol lol lol lol lol LMAO lol
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I like how it goes, but with the personality for being a naive child, I don't like it very much, but I'll still see how you develop it to see if it's worth continuing reading.
Hmm, it looks good IDK, just came here because of the tags which are definitely a green light from me[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hmm, although I am quite new to webnovel and this is the first fan-fic I am reading I liked it, The setting was nice and most of all it has Zero Two Keep up the good work author I wish to see much more later~
so here we start okay, to be honest I haven't read this novel but from this title it's definitely interesting so don't disappoint the reader okay and don't HIATUS / drop this novel ok ?, so my suggestion is that the author needs to go crazy up chapters and lengthen words in 1 chapter if it can't be long, at most, make it 2 chapters per day so readers will be happy and will give you support so that's all, well, don't drop it okay! hah ... the important thing is to keep the spirit in making this novel goodbye!
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Hmm! it's the start so can't say anything but it looks promising and the setting is unique..Hmm nice work author can't wait for more[img=fp]
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Tiết lộ Spoiler To call someone lower than you with sama is a big NO for me.... For me if you have the power... Then your the one who's hold the authority..... Must to burst the planet Just for killing some bug or pest? Why not? But if you Dont want you Just can control it with Giving them a taste of fear if they rebel..... NO OFFENSE!!!
Interesting story, Hope you would finish the fan fic as I would fully support be giving this a lot of power stones.
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
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Best novel ever. I have read a lot of novels on Webnovel and this is probably one of the best written. Really enjoyable and not confusing to read. Would recommend.
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the fanfaction is great and interesting. the only problem is the main character since he trust people to easily I only hope mc character changes to be more mature and not be naive.
Story and background are nice and all, but the MC is dumb and pussy as hell. One time he removes some 'Unwanted bugs' from existence and threatens 'them' and another moment he's calling the 'bug' with sama honorific when clearly he's the one who has the bugs life in his palm... It killed all mood to read further into the story. The author didn't find any other plot so he's going with the DarlingFX soldier taking orders from lower beings route...
It really just makes no sense to me how he can know so much yet so little. And using the excuse that he's young when he's the fucking origin himself. Plus saying that it would strain him. Are you kidding me. I love the fic but the thing that absolutely ruins it is his character. I like is cutsey, friendly and funny side, but not his naive side. I mean he instantly knows how to pilot a Franx yet dosent know good from evil and when its nessosary to kill evil and when to keep it. Besides that little rant of mine the novel is definitely a fun read so far and I recommend you give it a try.
I like the plot everything about the novel is good. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) lol lol lol lol lol lol LMAO lol
Cause Today Is A Good Day . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. . . .. ...... . . . . .... . .... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . ..
I like how it goes, but with the personality for being a naive child, I don't like it very much, but I'll still see how you develop it to see if it's worth continuing reading.
Hmm, it looks good IDK, just came here because of the tags which are definitely a green light from me[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hmm, although I am quite new to webnovel and this is the first fan-fic I am reading I liked it, The setting was nice and most of all it has Zero Two Keep up the good work author I wish to see much more later~
so here we start okay, to be honest I haven't read this novel but from this title it's definitely interesting so don't disappoint the reader okay and don't HIATUS / drop this novel ok ?, so my suggestion is that the author needs to go crazy up chapters and lengthen words in 1 chapter if it can't be long, at most, make it 2 chapters per day so readers will be happy and will give you support so that's all, well, don't drop it okay! hah ... the important thing is to keep the spirit in making this novel goodbye!
hm, its nice[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
noice.......................................................................................................................................
Hmm! it's the start so can't say anything but it looks promising and the setting is unique..Hmm nice work author can't wait for more[img=fp]
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