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Plz write more Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
That's amazing, write another chapter. Write more.https://cos4activity-1253177085.file.myqcloud.com/emoji/recommend.pnghttps://cos4activity-1253177085.file.myqcloud.com/emoji/recommend.png
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So far so gooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood thinking gooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood
I like the concept, its nice...written well, 4 chps in no smut, very good for a bk of this genre, ..story matters more than ' action '. And I like that this is an own world rather than generic world travel. hopefully u have a balanced PL system cause some of ur lovers are way off compared to others. some advice? -so I dont like shit like this cause the authors of most works just make the MC and lovers all sluts, and easy chicks [ only one that was atleast decent was a one piece one ]. And these bks, becomes a pokemon game where the MC collects chicks and the way its done is so retarded. ex: one chicks like MC...MC says he wants to build harem..chick sad but say fine...and the right after he finds another chick. no build, no progress of first relationship, fking nothing. And u have mature married women, or mature women being shy around a kid? My advice, just build the damn relationship and character. dont make em fall for some kid like that, or u know fk within hrs of meeting, cause its a relationship right? thats the focus of the bk. take shit slow. Dont make lovers or MC sluts. And try to take time when building. And if u are going to have netori, do right.. like Idk, abusive husband/lover , who MC saves ' Love Interest ' from and start a relationship, or something like that. U get good CD and drama. instead of some shit like, MC meets chick and takes her from lover cause MC is better or something. or he fks some married chick better than husband and she like that so goes with MC. seems shallow. I'd personally say no netori, but people like that shit. so idk. oh, and pls dont make the love interests fall for MC cause he goodlooking, I get people want to look good but honestly when reading bks, makes me wonder whether writers are some ugly ass mutant MF's for em to focus on ML looks so much. and to make it a focus when any FL meets the ML. And it ruins chance for proper CD. And the harem, dont make it something like 10 or more. like 10 less? massive harems ruin a story, happened to many bks of this genre, reviews say it and people agree. - tbh, bks of this genre aint my thing, but I like villain concept and world merge, so I want to see what happens, it unique concept and only reason I am suggesting this shit is so I can hopefully too enjoy it. rant over. ..anyway GL ,, pumpkin -
I haven't Read the fanfic yet, But The Concept is interesting it's new I'm looking forward to it. As long as the author doesn't do Something that will ruin the fanfic. 5 stars for me.
This is my obligatory 5-star review...you know...the one authors are supposed to give there own work. So...yeah...here it is. ... To be perfectly honest...I don’t really know what I should say here. ... Well it doesn’t matter now that I have reached the 140 word minimum.
Plz write more Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
That's amazing, write another chapter. Write more.https://cos4activity-1253177085.file.myqcloud.com/emoji/recommend.pnghttps://cos4activity-1253177085.file.myqcloud.com/emoji/recommend.png
nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice
So far so gooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood thinking gooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood
I like the concept, its nice...written well, 4 chps in no smut, very good for a bk of this genre, ..story matters more than ' action '. And I like that this is an own world rather than generic world travel. hopefully u have a balanced PL system cause some of ur lovers are way off compared to others. some advice? -so I dont like shit like this cause the authors of most works just make the MC and lovers all sluts, and easy chicks [ only one that was atleast decent was a one piece one ]. And these bks, becomes a pokemon game where the MC collects chicks and the way its done is so retarded. ex: one chicks like MC...MC says he wants to build harem..chick sad but say fine...and the right after he finds another chick. no build, no progress of first relationship, fking nothing. And u have mature married women, or mature women being shy around a kid? My advice, just build the damn relationship and character. dont make em fall for some kid like that, or u know fk within hrs of meeting, cause its a relationship right? thats the focus of the bk. take shit slow. Dont make lovers or MC sluts. And try to take time when building. And if u are going to have netori, do right.. like Idk, abusive husband/lover , who MC saves ' Love Interest ' from and start a relationship, or something like that. U get good CD and drama. instead of some shit like, MC meets chick and takes her from lover cause MC is better or something. or he fks some married chick better than husband and she like that so goes with MC. seems shallow. I'd personally say no netori, but people like that shit. so idk. oh, and pls dont make the love interests fall for MC cause he goodlooking, I get people want to look good but honestly when reading bks, makes me wonder whether writers are some ugly ass mutant MF's for em to focus on ML looks so much. and to make it a focus when any FL meets the ML. And it ruins chance for proper CD. And the harem, dont make it something like 10 or more. like 10 less? massive harems ruin a story, happened to many bks of this genre, reviews say it and people agree. - tbh, bks of this genre aint my thing, but I like villain concept and world merge, so I want to see what happens, it unique concept and only reason I am suggesting this shit is so I can hopefully too enjoy it. rant over. ..anyway GL ,, pumpkin -
I haven't Read the fanfic yet, But The Concept is interesting it's new I'm looking forward to it. As long as the author doesn't do Something that will ruin the fanfic. 5 stars for me.
This is my obligatory 5-star review...you know...the one authors are supposed to give there own work. So...yeah...here it is. ... To be perfectly honest...I don’t really know what I should say here. ... Well it doesn’t matter now that I have reached the 140 word minimum.