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32.14% Death in the Multiverse Re-Write / Chapter 24: Training (R-18)

Chương 24: Training (R-18)

POV Velvet Scarlatina

After returning to Beacon for the second Semester, she had joined Team CFVY, and accepted a mission right away, leading them to the Northeast of Vale. Team CFVY was one of Four teams that had actually chosen to investigate this area, where there had been an abnormal spike in the number of Grimm present.

While the four teams were not travelling together, since they were trying to cover a fairly large area, Velvet knew that Coco was keeping in contact with the other teams and had been coordinating with them for the last week and a half.

"Nevermore's to the North!." Yatsuhashi called out as he pointed them out.

Velvet and Coco both looked in that direction.

"I see them" Coco affirmed "I count six of them."

"No, five now." Velvet countered "Someone seems to be be fighting them."

"Who? The other three teams shouldn't be in this area?" Yatsuhashi frowned.

"I see one woman, a winged faunus" Velvet announced "Worry about who she is later. For now lets go help her."

"Like Velvet said, lets get there and help" Coco verified, then made a gesture to head towards the scene of the battle and charged towards in with her teammates.

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POV Hazel Rainart

After a month and a half trying to catch up with the runaway, the woman that Salem had taken an interest in was before him, fighting five Nevermore, and looking rather exhausted after being hunted for so long, but she was still feisty, so he was not going to underestimate the dark-skinned beauty.

After a month and a half of frustration, Hazel had decided that he definitely would not let her run away again! In the air, she was just too fast and too maneuverable, so he decided he had to properly deal with her aerial supremacy in the most efficient manner possible before she was aware of his presence again.

While he had these thoughts, the winged woman killed two more Nevermore, leaving three remaining. Hazel stabbed each of his arms with lightning dust crystals to empower himself, letting the energy build up inside him to be rapidly unleashed in just a couple short seconds. In doing so, even he started feeling a bit of pain, in spite of his semblance, but it was still not beyond his ability to cope with it.

The instant that the winged woman was landing a killing blow to the final Nevermore, Hazel leapt with insane speed, grabbing the woman by her wings as he came near her, and dragging her behind him when he eventually returned to the ground.

The woman did not cry out it pain, but rather sounded like she was completely enraged "I've had enough of you running away!" Hazel yelled as the woman tried to stab him behind her with her great sword, but he easily dodged.

Hazel roared out, his muscles bulged, and after a couple seconds he violently ripped off the woman's wings and kicked her away from himself in the process of doing so.

"Human scum!" The infuriated woman who had lost her wings glared at Hazel, clenching her hand that wasn't holding her massive sword into a fist, ignoring the pain from the stumps of her stolen wings "I will never forgive you! Attacking me in such a shameful manner as an ambush, it is beyond redemption! she readied her Great Sword to fight Hazel, who still held her wings, which were now separated from her body, in his hands.

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POV formerly winged woman

The pain from having her wings ripped off was immense, but the rage she directed towards Hazel kept her from giving up and passing out. She wanted, deep down, to find a quiet place to nurse her wounds and rest, but the injury that had been inflicted was not something that she could heal from with a little rest.

This human filth had been chasing her for a month and a half, and during that time she had seen many strange creatures, while being unable to reach out to her allies, and having no idea where she was or how she had come to be in it.

She had been cut off from her home for so long, with the only creature capable of speech she had seen lately being the man that ripped off her wings. She had never actually hated humans before, but this human was surprisingly very strong, and had been hunting her for so long, that she was beginning to seriously despise their kind.. After all, she had done nothing to this human to merit such treatment.

A human hunting someone like her? The very idea would have been preposterous to her just a month and a half ago, and yet it was so.. She couldn't help but question when a human had ever been so strong?

Granted, she felt a bit weakened for some inexplicable reason, but not to the extent where she would expect to have a mere human match her! Facing down now against this muscular human, she found herself regretting that she had not just killed him at their first meeting, but she had seen him as a weak creature that was not a threat, and that she should try to protect him even if he was a total ass. For these reasons she just had no desire to kill a human, no matter how much he tried to provoke her.

Now, though, there was no choice. She could not flee anymore, so it was her or him, and she did not want to die, so she gathered her resolve to slay the man and was about to attack him, when she saw others arriving.

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POV Velvet Scarlatina

When Team CFVY reached the site of the battle they'd previously seen from afar, Velvet was horrified. She was accustomed to seeing Grimm, and their vileness was normal too her, so she wouldn't react to that in the slightest, but seeing the woman from before, now wingless and bleeding from the stumps on her back, while a human man was holding her wings that he'd apparently ripped off of her was a level of depravity she was not ready for.

"Damn insects" Hazel said with annoyance, casting the wings in his hands aside, and preparing to fight Uriel and Team CFVY. It did not take a rocket scientist to discern who was the 'bad guy', considering the woman's condition and the fact that the man was still holding her wings!

"Attacking a woman as she's dealing with the creatures of Grimm is shameless." Coco said angrily as her briefcase transformed into its minigun form.

Velvet was impressed by the woman's resolve to remain standing and to fight, and also thought she seemed quite attractive, though in a rugged sort of way, looking like a warrior, who wore heavy metal armor, though it was nicely shaped to accentuate her feminine curves. In her mind, she wondered how this woman would fly with such heavy-looking armor on, but she thought this only for a moment before her attention was drawn to her brilliantly golden iris's, and what remained of her once beautiful white feathered wings, stumps now dyed red by her own blood.

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POV formerly winged woman

The fight did not last long, since against these five opponents, her attacker was forced to flee. She did not want to let him go, but was in no state to pursue him either. One of the girls in the group of four people approached her, and unexpectedly, she saw that the girl had rabbit-like ears.

"I'm sorry we didn't get here sooner." the girl told her "My name is Velvet. My teammates and I will get you to a doctor."

"Velvet, I am...Uriel..." since she was safe, her last bit of willpower faded and she passed out.

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POV Velvet Scarlatina

Velvet saw the woman beginning to collapse and caught her.

"I already called for a bullhead to extract her." Coco announced "E.T.A. twenty-three minutes."

Velvet nodded to Coco and carefully laired down Uriel, who she assumed was a bird faunus, on her stomach to begin applying first aide and hopefully stop the bleeding from her wing stumps "Coco, she said her name was Uriel."

Coco nodded "I'll call it in and see if we can identify her. Yatsuhashi, grab her wings." though it was unlikely that they'd ever return to their previous full potential, it was possible that the doctors in Vale might be able to reattach them. Only the medical personnel would know for certain, so Coco understandably knew the importance of bringing the wings with them.

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Two days later was a Friday, and Team CFVY had finally returned from their nearly two week mission. with the only unusual incident their team or the other three teams encountered, apart from an unusual density of Grimm, was the bird faunus, Uriel, whom no one seemed to have any record of.

Though they had collected her wings and sent them back with Uriel on the bullhead, they had sadly learned on the way back to Beacon that the damage to them and to her was too severe and doctors were not able to reattach them..

Velvet couldn't help but feel bad for the poor woman who had her wings brutally ripped off of her. She imagined that for Uriel it was equivalent to someone ripping off her arms. Velvet couldn't begin to fathom how traumatized she was likely going to be after that, though at least she was alive.

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POV Death Rose

Having heard about Team CFVY returning today from Velvet who reached out via her scroll on the way, Death was waiting nearby as the bullhead landed. He noticed that Velvet seemed a bit depressed when she came out of the bullhead, but when she spotted him she smiled and ran over to hug him.

Death chuckled and returned the hug "Welcome back."

"Don't let go of me yet." Velvet told him, seeking comfort in his arms.

Death nodded in understanding "Do you want to talk about it?" he asked, genuinely concerned about her.

"I'll tell you about it later. For now I just want you to hold me." Velvet insisted.

Death nodded, accepting that Velvet would tell him later, and he decided to just do as she asked and hold her in his arms for a while Death still had a half hour before their group training was set to start, so he could spare at least twenty minutes to do what Velvet wanted him to do, since he hadn't seen her in nearly two weeks.

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POV Ruby Rose

With their usual training time close at hand, Teams JNPR, RWBY, FAMS, NDGO, ABRN, and RBBW were assembled with the exception of Death who hadn't arrived yet. Melanie, Miltia, Neon, Amber, May, and Ultear were also there, though the rest of May's teammates had not started joining in the training as NDGO and ABRN had.

Ever since Reese took an interest in Death, Arslan Altan, who had been dating War a couple years now, had started dragging her teammates along to train as well, but no one was interested in inviting the rest of Team BRNZ, and that was true for even May Zedong. It turned out that her teams dynamic was far from stars and sunshine. Her team leader apparently frustrated May with his obsession with Gwen Darcy, and things had only gotten worse for her once Gwen and her teammates started training with this group. Ruby could understand May's hesitance to bring in her teammates with the understanding that May had given them about her team leader.

As for Team FNKI, so far only Neon had accepted Death's invitation, but they had been invited previously and hadn't joined yet for this special training. Neon didn't say why, but Ruby guessed that they underestimated this training and just thought that Neon would be flirting with Death.

Death and Ruby had both extended an open invitation to Team CPPR of Atlas, but so far Ciel had not accepted that invitation. Penny was still working on convincing her. Aside from learning their Team name was CPPR, Ruby, like Death, hadn't actually met Penny's other two Teammates so they knew nothing about them yet. They only knew that Ciel was the Teams 'leader' and Penny was one of the teams members.

Ruby had taken it upon herself as her duty to keep inviting Penny and Ciel, and since their group was still waiting for Death and Velvet to arrive Ruby pulled out her scroll and called Penny again to see if they might show up today.

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POV Ciel Soleil

"I can't believe you want to go train with these people" Ciel complained as she walked alongside her teammate Penny. Ciel was still convinced that this was a waist of time, so she had no intention of bringing their teammates along and wasting their time as well, so it was just her and Penny today.

"Ruby and Death both promised it will be very beneficial and I trust them." Penny insisted to Ciel cheerfully "You'll see. They are not just exaggerating."

At that moment, Penny's scroll rang, indicating a call, and she pulled out out and answered it after seeing it was Ruby "Hello Ruby my friend." Penny greeted her

Ruby smiled from the image of her shown on the scroll "Good morning Penny. Are you able to come today?" she asked hopefully.

Penny grinned and nodded "Yes, I finally convinced my Team Leader. She and I are on our way there not.

"That's great! Once your leader see's our training I know you will be able to come train with us more. It will be amazing." Ruby said joyfully.

"Ruby Rose, can you tell me about this training we are coming to do?" Ciel asked with curiosity.

"Oh, that was my teams leader." Penny explained to Ruby "Admittedly I am also curious about this as well."

"Well, you'll see soon, then" Ruby insisted to Penny "Without seeing it first hand, it is pretty hard to believe. If I told you before you saw it for yourself, you would think it sounds a bit nuts, but the important thing is it gets results."

"Okay. I trust you Ruby my friend. We will be there in around a minute." Penny reassured Ruby before hanging up the call. Ciel was only more skeptical after hearing Ruby's words, but they were already at Beacon so she figured she may as well check it out. She figured that at least when she was proven right she might be able to reduce the amount of influence Death and Ruby had upon Penny.

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POV Death Rose

After calming down Velvet, Death started walking with her to the courtyard where they were gathering to meet. On his way there he thought a bit back to the previous week. Melanie and Miltia had met his other girlfriends with the exception of Velvet who had been away, and the same was true for May, whom he had been out on an official date on Wednesday late afternoon and early evening. So far no one was having problems with each other, so Ruby in particular seemed happy to have more sisters. May had been spending a lot of her free time with Team RWBY as well, and they all seemed to like her, which Ruby was happy about, feeling like she and May had a lot in common.

Death had not questioned what Ruby and May had talked about, but he was just glad that they were getting along so well.

Since their first classes started at nine o'clock, they had been getting up at around five and training from 6 am to 8 am before classes, but now that it was Saturday and they had no classes, they were starting at 9 am, allowing them to sleep in a bit.

"Death!" he heard the familiar voice of Penny excitedly call out his name and he looked at Penny and Ciel as they approached

"Hello Penny" Death greeted her with a smile "You are finally able to join us? That's great."

"I don't expect much." Ciel said skeptically.

Death chuckled when he heard Ciel said that "Then you will be in for quite a shock" he said as the four of them entered the Courtyard and found close to thirty people waiting for them.

Death could tell that Ciel had not expected there to be a total of 33 people to be present once the four of them arrived "Alright. The training starts now!" Death called out "Since Penny and Ciel have not entered before, I'll enter with them last and explain things to them. For now..." he started concentrating "Create ID Remnant"

As he spoke that, a black gate appeared near him, and the others started entering it, including Velvet, and disappearing as Death looked at Ciel and Penny "You can think of this ability as a bit like a video game. When you pass through the gate you will encounter realistic grimm, which will try to kill you. If you die in there, you will be kicked back out into the real world, unharmed, but your deaths inside would still feel very real, so don't get a big head and underestimate it. This is very much a hands on approach to training." after saying this, he grabbed Penny and Ciel's hands and pulled them through the gate with him.

On the other end, Neo and Amber were present, but the others had grouped up and taken off already. Death nodded to the pair "Ciel and Penny, it looks like I'll get to introduce you to the others later, but for now these two are Neopolitan and Amber.

"Since Penny and Ciel didn't bring their full team, I thought I'd volunteer to help them in here." Amber explained to Death "They wont learn much if they get killed in the first few minutes here."

Death looked at Ciel "Amber and Neo are both very strong. The five of us should be able to handle most enemies that can appear here."

"It still looks like the Courtyard." Ciel noted as she looked around.

"Don't worry about the environment here getting destroyed." Death told Ciel "It looks the same, but it is not real. Any damage done here does not affect the real world, and the damage will be reset each time we reenter. If Grimm appear, you just have to worry about killing them before they kill you."

Neo suddenly hugged Death "Well, that is well enough explained for right now."

Death nodded to Neo and smiled "Alright. Lets get started."

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POV Arthur Watts

He was presently standing before a seer Grimm, bowing politely since his Queen had contacted him.

"Report what you have learned" Salem ordered through the seer Grimm.

"My Queen, the girl you were interested in has been taken to the Vale Northeast General Hospital. I have already hacked in and altered her patient information to make sure they keep her sedated. I am making arrangements to acquire her already. I am hopeful to have a positive result in the next few days, if nothing unforeseen happens." Arthur reported.

"Very good." Salem answered "I need some answers about the four who arrived from outside of this world. To expend so much effort summoning her here only to have her fly away, it is quite annoying. She may be the only one able to give us the answers that we need."

"Yes, my Queen. I'll make sure that she can't slip away again." Arthur insisted, not wanting to disappoint his queen again, as she had already been waiting for close to two months.

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POV Ciel Soleil

Around noon all the groups that had entered the Instance Dungeon gathered together in the Courtyard again, by which point Ciel's skepticism was dealt with, and she now believed wholeheartedly in this training method.

The creatures of Grimm that appeared in this world felt very real, and fighting them was definitely a challenge. and definitely was a worthwhile experience. She had no idea how Death did these things, but they got results, as much as she did not want to admit it..

He had even saved her once from a Nuckelavee Grimm during the training, and Neo and Amber had truly shown that their powers were incredible, with Amber controlling wind and Neo the earth and plants. Those semblances were something she had never seen before, and oddly enough while they were using their abilities their eyes were glowing, as though flames were coming out of them in similar manners, with only the colors differing. Amber's eyes 'fire' was yellow-orange and Neo's was green.

If everything she had seen so far wasn't weird enough, Death started pulling food seemingly out of nowhere for them all to eat. The others were all seemingly accustomed to all of this.

"So from now on we can bring Piper and Raine with us?" Penny asked Ciel, grinning at her.

Ciel sighed and nodded "Yeah, it would be beneficial to train like this." she admitted with a heavy sigh.

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POV Death Rose

Once they finished eating, they trained some more, until four pm, when they departed back to the Beacon Courtyard. He smiled at Ciel "Will I see here tomorrow?"

Ciel nodded "Yes, and I'll bring our teammates as well."

Death chuckled and nodded "I thought that would be the case once you actually experienced this training. I am relieved to hear that I was right."

Ciel took a step back from Death, trying to remain stoic and professional "I'll see you at nine am tomorrow." she looked at Penny "Lets go."

"I had a great time." Penny said to Death "Thank you." she then turned to follow Ciel as she left.

Death had four avatars mingling with the others, so once Ciel and Penny left, the true him was left alone with Amber and Neo, who seemed to be looking at him expectantly.

"Do the two of you need something?" Death asked the pair, smiling at each of them.

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POV Amber Quince

Amber nodded to him and had an awkward smile on her face "Yeah, we probably have the same thing in mind."

"You do?" Neopolitan seemed genuinely surprised "Well, I think we should go to Death's room for privacy first, then"

"Very well." Death agreed and started heading back to his room, followed by Neo and Amber.

Death seemed curious what they wanted to talk about, but it wasn't really a problem for him to wait until he reached his room first.

Once the door closed behind them, Neo locked Death's door and stopped using overactive imagination, causing herself to suddenly become completely naked "I don't mind sharing, so if you want to sleep with him as well, I wont object." she said to Amber.

"Wha....?" Amber's face reddened with embarrassment "I thought that you wanted to talk about the Maiden thing."

"Well, I was surprised by that as well." Death admitted as he went to prepare some drinks, unaware of Neo's suddenly naked state "The abilities you used today, Neo. That was magic, not a semblance. You should have inherited the powers of one of the four maidens. How long have you been able to do that?" usually she just used overactive imagination in training, but he had no idea that she was using that just to hide the fact that she was naked today, since she had resigned herself to definitely becoming Death's woman today, and she did not want herself to wuss out, so she relied on her maiden powers in training instead.

Death turned back around to face Neo, saw her naked and his eyes grew large from surprise.

"Oh, more then a decade I guess." Neo insisted "Isn't it just a second semblance. They are rare, but not unheard of." she did not seem to care.

"Well, I guess you should have inherited the powers from the Spring Maiden then." Amber told Neo "She disappeared from Haven more then a decade ago." she was relieved that Neo had the powers that long, since it meant she was not the one that killed the Summer Maiden in Vacuo.

"Well, do you want to join Death and I tonight?" Neo asked Amber, already not appearing to care about the whole 'Maiden' thing. She looked at Death again "I've tried to resist and deny these urges, but ever since you healed me and gave me a voice to speak, I've wanted to be with you, deep down. I've just been lying to myself. No matter how hard I struggled against it, though, it just made me want to be your woman even more. You sent me away to help train Jaune, and I tried to move on, and I almost had a bit of success for a little while, but being with you this year, and especially today, I cannot restrain these desires anymore." Neo showed no shame as she announced bluntly.

Amber was still a bit embarrassed by where the conversation was going but sighed "I...I also...want to by your woman..." she admitted to Death while covering her face with her hands.

Amber's words surprised Death. He had not surprised the declaration from Neo that she wanted to sleep with him, but it was even more surprising from Amber, who was not as impulsive as Neo could be, but he decided to just go along with it "Sure. Lets go." he agreed and grabbed Neo and Amber's hands and subtly entered the Mirror Dimension with them and headed to his bed.

Neither Amber nor Neo resisted as they were led there. Amber was feeling a bit like a mess inside, because while she had been longing to make love to Death for a while, she had not anticipated it being today. Even so, she did not feel like she could back-out now, so she told herself to persevere.

Neo compliantly laid on the bed first since she was already naked, and Death started undressing Amber, who compliantly allowed him to disrobe her while feeling her pulse soaring.

When he pulled down her pants and panties, and exposed what no other man had ever seen, she felt a bit faint, and then she did actually pass out.

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POV Death Rose

Death caught her as she fell towards him, and his face ended up between Ambers delightful breasts. In regard to size, her breasts weren't that large at all, being barely A Cups, he estimated, but they were still soft and her skin had a pleasant aroma to it that was really turning him on.

Death carefully laid Amber on the bed, then climbed in between her legs and lightly patted her cheek to wake her up. Their eyes met and Amber blushed again, then looked at Death's erection, which Neo was coating with a lubrication using one of her hands.

Amber felt her pulse quickly raising, and wondered if that thing could really fit inside her. Death started fondling Amber's small breasts while waiting for Neo to finish, and when he got a thumbs up from Neo, Death started pushing his erection into Amber.

Amber stiffened a bit as she started feeling like she was being ripped in half, because it was so girthy, and it started hurting a little bit, but also felt good a bit as well. Unlike Melanie and Miltia, who had experimented with their fingers and dildos, Amber was completely untouched, and had never even tried self-pleasure before.

Death was surprised by just how tight Amber was, since even Ruby had experimented with her fingers before they became lovers, and thus even though Ruby, who had gave him the strongest feeling of tightness on their first time, was not as tight as Amber.

"It gets easier once your body adapts to it." Death reassured Amber, only moving in and out a little bit for now , to avoid going through her hymen for a bit, giving her time to get used to it.

Over around two minutes, the pain faded and, as he said, the pain was replaced with pleasure, and her inside started becoming a wet mess.

"I think you are ready" Death commented and looked at Amber, and saw her bite her lower lip and nod.

"Do it...." Amber said weakly.

Death squeezed her breasts and used his regeneration semblance on Amber to help her adapt to what was about to happen fast, then he shoved through her hymen and burred his entire twelve inches inside of her.

Amber loudly gasped and gripped the sheets on either side of her "Oum daaaamn!" Amber started panting

Death started thrusting his whole length into her slowly as Amber's face gradually warped into the same sexy, panting mess that he'd seen on Melanie and Miltia when he fucked them like this. Amber was blushing and panting with her eyes partially rolled back and her tongue out a bit from her hanging open mouth

Once he saw that face, Death took it as his que to go all out, and that's when he stopped going slow and started thrusting into her like a beast for a couple more minutes before he unloaded inside of her womb.

Amber went a bit limp after that, though he could tell she was still awake. Even so, Neo had been rather patient, so Death knew that he needed to properly reward her. Slipping his arms in under Amber, Death lifted her up as he sat up, and repositioned along with Amber so that amber ended up on her knees hovering over Neo's stomach and Death was where he needed to be, between Neo's legs.

"No need to hold back" Neo told him "Go all out from the start. I don't mind a little pain. Fill my dirty hole with your seed too." she was unbelievably horny and wanted relief immediately.

Death's erection slipped free from Amber's body, and a lot of his seed started spilling out of her to land on Neo's stomach, along with a bit of Amber's virgin blood, though Neo did not seem to mind.

All she cared about was that Death was lining up his erection to enter her finally. As he plunged in, immediately tearing through Neo's hymen, he kept one arm around Amber to hold her study, not wanting her to pass out again, and he started passionately kissing her. His other hand would be reaching past to grope Neo's 32 D Cup breasts as he pistoned into her much smaller body. He periodically traded hands so that he could grope both of Neo's breasts rather then only groping one of them.

When he came inside Neo, Death laid down Amber and then lifted Neo into the same position that Amber had been in over her while he again enjoyed Amber's incredible body. Like this, he spent hours with them until they were sufficiently exhausted.

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The next morning, Death was up early to prepare for another day of training. while having Neo and Amber asleep next to him in his bed. After turning his notifications back on, he got five quest updates at once.

Hidden Quest : Love (Repeatable) was completed twice for Neo and Amber, giving him 20,000 Shop Points, which did not come as a surprise, but the other three updates did surprise him

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Hidden Quest Completed : The love of the Spring Maiden

The Spring Maiden gives herself to you, mind, body, and soul.

Reward : Earth Magic Skill Tree, Nature Magic Skill Tree, 1 Skill Point

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Hidden Quest Completed : The love of the Fall Maiden

The Fall Maiden gives herself to you, mind, body, and soul.

Reward : Wind Magic Skill Tree, Light Magic Skill Tree, 1 Skill Point

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Hidden Quest : The love of the Seasonal Maidens

The Summer Maiden gives herself to you, mind, body, and soul.

The Fall Maiden gives herself to you, mind, body, and soul. (Completed)

The Winter Maiden gives herself to you, mind, body, and soul.

The Spring Maiden gives herself to you, mind, body, and soul. (Completed)

Reward : Space-Time Magic Skill Tree, Dimensional Transfer Skill, 2 Skill Points

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Reading the notifications Death realized that he had four more skill trees to worry about, but he decided to worry about that later. He had started to grow somewhat accustomed to waking up beside young beauties, but he tried not thinking about the last quest there, considering that the Summer Maiden's status was likely an enemy and the current Winter Maiden was an old lady.

It was something he'd have to think about later, though. If he wanted to get around and prepare for the day's activities, he could only think to create a body double and trade places with, since he did not want to wake Amber or Neo who were sleeping peacefully. That's just what he did.

Within moments he was standing next to his bed while a body double was the one trapped between two beautiful young women.

He went and took a quick shower, then dressed and then left his room, where he found Velvet waiting for him, and they hugged each other "Good morning Velvet. Are you ready to talk about what was bothering you yesterday?" he asked,

Velvet nodded "That's why I am here. You see....While we were on our mission, we met a faunus girl, and she..."


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