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Viết đánh giáI really liked the first 60 chapters but I felt that the succeeding chapters were rushed. There were a lot of typography errors too such as Perry being Parry, Samuel being Samael and the names are interchanged. This story has a good potential but needs a lot of revision in terms of writing and some plots need to be given proper closure.
Short and sweet Novel. Did not drag the story unnecessarily. liked the way the story developed and came down Toma happy ending. Adam's brother was forgotten in the end .
A sweet start, great drama build up and a complete fulfilling story less than 200 chapters well written and delivered all the heart wrenching, heart warming, business scheming ingredients without too much plot wasting chapters. Well done author. This is how a novel should be written that doesn't dent readers wallet.
This story has romance, action, heartbreak, romance and so much more. It's worth a reading. It also teaches us about forgiveness and moving, however we choose to do so. To future readers, enjoy 😉
Engaging story, likeable main and secondary characters, and lack of annoying and draggy misunderstandings kept me interested enough to pay and binge read this story. Was it original? No, but it was well paced and satisfyingly tied up loose ends for all characters, and the theme of how close-knit friends support and overcome challenges together left me with the warm fuzzies! I definitely recommend this to anyone looking for a pick-me-up.
The story is soo lovely....I have been engrossed in reading and thus, even forgot to leave a few comments.............. Keep up the good work author. Saranheyo...we love you
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Tiết lộ SpoilerNice story, very hot. I love reading it. Nicely written, good background and unique characters. Good one! Good job author! [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
Hi! I think you are an excellent writer, and you have been writing Romance story, but would you like to try something new and reach different readership? My name is Molly. I'm an editor of an Adventure Fiction site. Given your outstanding writing skill, I would like to invite you to join our Adventure Fiction Contest. Only 3,000 words is necessary for a review (Examples and writing tips are provided). Once your application is approved, we can offer financial support programs for your further motivation. Besides, when your novel hit a certain word count, we will advertise it to targeted readers. Writing with us= Paid by Writing + New Readership. Join us now! You can find more information at :https://bit.ly/3tBG7l7 Or reach me at : Rebecca_661@outlook.com
Story is picking up the pace and getting interesting. I'm enjoying the characters interaction. The leads are very vulnerable, but completely win my interest for seeing where they will end up.🌹
This is a good story with a strong ML and strong FL. The FL's stubbornness in fighting her feelings gets a little frustrating at times, but they both fail to communicate clearly, yet still reveal their true feelings by their actions especially when things really count. Definitely some misunderstandings, but so far, thankfully no third parties trying to come between them.
Yet another amazing love story from the author, I'm thoroughly enjoying it. From the story so far it's clear that Adam aka K would shatter all the walls Alice has built around her heart and bring her back to her cheerful and happy go lucky self. Hope Alice would soon realise that Adam is her so called 'imaginary' lover.
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Tiết lộ SpoilerI really like the story...it's interesting🤩n even ML n FL plot r so sweet n Funny...🔥Please update more chapters n keep going on....n Fighting.....🤗🤗🤗
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have read the author's previous works and enjoyed thoroughly.. makes us feel like a part of the story.. clarity of characters amd emotions is perfecto!! keep writing author.. we love your work
This was a good read. It showed ups and downs in the lives of the characters in a way that normal people could relate to. I would recommend this book.
I really liked the first 60 chapters but I felt that the succeeding chapters were rushed. There were a lot of typography errors too such as Perry being Parry, Samuel being Samael and the names are interchanged. This story has a good potential but needs a lot of revision in terms of writing and some plots need to be given proper closure.
Short and sweet Novel. Did not drag the story unnecessarily. liked the way the story developed and came down Toma happy ending. Adam's brother was forgotten in the end .
A sweet start, great drama build up and a complete fulfilling story less than 200 chapters well written and delivered all the heart wrenching, heart warming, business scheming ingredients without too much plot wasting chapters. Well done author. This is how a novel should be written that doesn't dent readers wallet.
This story has romance, action, heartbreak, romance and so much more. It's worth a reading. It also teaches us about forgiveness and moving, however we choose to do so. To future readers, enjoy 😉
Engaging story, likeable main and secondary characters, and lack of annoying and draggy misunderstandings kept me interested enough to pay and binge read this story. Was it original? No, but it was well paced and satisfyingly tied up loose ends for all characters, and the theme of how close-knit friends support and overcome challenges together left me with the warm fuzzies! I definitely recommend this to anyone looking for a pick-me-up.
The story is soo lovely....I have been engrossed in reading and thus, even forgot to leave a few comments.............. Keep up the good work author. Saranheyo...we love you
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W a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h...Worth reading 💕💕💕.
Tiết lộ SpoilerNice story, very hot. I love reading it. Nicely written, good background and unique characters. Good one! Good job author! [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
Hi! I think you are an excellent writer, and you have been writing Romance story, but would you like to try something new and reach different readership? My name is Molly. I'm an editor of an Adventure Fiction site. Given your outstanding writing skill, I would like to invite you to join our Adventure Fiction Contest. Only 3,000 words is necessary for a review (Examples and writing tips are provided). Once your application is approved, we can offer financial support programs for your further motivation. Besides, when your novel hit a certain word count, we will advertise it to targeted readers. Writing with us= Paid by Writing + New Readership. Join us now! You can find more information at :https://bit.ly/3tBG7l7 Or reach me at : Rebecca_661@outlook.com
Story is picking up the pace and getting interesting. I'm enjoying the characters interaction. The leads are very vulnerable, but completely win my interest for seeing where they will end up.🌹
This is a good story with a strong ML and strong FL. The FL's stubbornness in fighting her feelings gets a little frustrating at times, but they both fail to communicate clearly, yet still reveal their true feelings by their actions especially when things really count. Definitely some misunderstandings, but so far, thankfully no third parties trying to come between them.
Yet another amazing love story from the author, I'm thoroughly enjoying it. From the story so far it's clear that Adam aka K would shatter all the walls Alice has built around her heart and bring her back to her cheerful and happy go lucky self. Hope Alice would soon realise that Adam is her so called 'imaginary' lover.
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Tiết lộ SpoilerI really like the story...it's interesting🤩n even ML n FL plot r so sweet n Funny...🔥Please update more chapters n keep going on....n Fighting.....🤗🤗🤗
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have read the author's previous works and enjoyed thoroughly.. makes us feel like a part of the story.. clarity of characters amd emotions is perfecto!! keep writing author.. we love your work
This was a good read. It showed ups and downs in the lives of the characters in a way that normal people could relate to. I would recommend this book.