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Keep writing. This is just the beginning of the journey for you. I can't wait to see more works from you. Finding a work from you in the store will be fantastic...do not sign a contract with these guys.
I couldn't be more in love with this book. It is fantastic and I feel that one day when it finally wraps you will be signing real contracts all over the place. DO NOT SIGN with WebNovel. They are legit but they pay pennies on the dollar and take advantage of all the authors.
From the very first word to the very last (even though we are continuing) the book has grasped something inside of me and lead me to want to write as well.
We are continuing along and the story has many was to go. I am fully invested in Jennifer and hope you readers are falling for her as well.
There isn't a book like this on this website. Neve have been so pulled in by a story line or routing for the "Bad Guy" in my entire life. I love to read but have fallen short these last few months. WebNovel and Boyce are going to motivate me to read more and more.
I'm no writer but if I was, I would totally copy this guys work. It is above and beyond anything I have ever read. Perfect pacing, perfect detail.
Heard there was a part 2 coming. We all know the sequel never lives up to the original. I have a feeling this guy can make it ten times better,
This cat may very well be the next big name author in the world. He needs to sign with a huge publishing house and get this thing rolling.
If he doesn't win the contest he entered, I am forever done with Webnovel. This blew the 2nd place book out of the water on grammar and punctuation alone.
He's my dad. That being said, he is making me enjoy reading. I never liked reading, it's so boring. Magic and fantasy...booooo. Realism and stuff that could really happen....amazing.
I dare someone to come in here and say one way this book could have been better. Just one way. You can't, I know it and so do you.
From the structural, cleanliness of the writing, character development, the rationale, all of it, you hit a home run guy. I look forward to the future.
Sweet mother of mercy. Great stuff bud. I don't know where you get ideas like this but maybe you should start a website with writing ques and charge like .50 each or something.
There is absolutely no way you wrote this gem in the time frame given. Especially with the lack of grammatical errors and still telling a story that is meaningful and fun.
I rarely read but a friend referred me to this site. They mentioned you. I am BLOWN away. You have made reading fun without hurting the structure of the story.
Excellent work, especially on a short time frame. Good story, great grammar, punctuation on point. You might want to send this to Penguin.
I am going to read every single word you write until you either die or quit. I highly doubt you'll quit, you are far too talented. Keep it up and you'll be a success very soon.
Absolutely extraordinary work here my friend. You didn't overload us with too many details and you found a way to make a serial killer feel lovable and justified.
In my many years of reading, I have never come across such an encapsulating work as this one. I am interested to see what you can do with a 3 month time line.
If you ever need motivation or ideas, i have them. I am not a good writer but you have the golden touch. Maybe we can collab.
Jennifer is my hero. Not only did you write an excellent character but as a male author writing a female character, you didn't stoop to describing the exact details of her body like all the other male "writers" do. Congrats.
From the beginning to the very end, I was encapsulated into the world of Jennifer and her doing wrong for the right reasons desire.
Pure gold here. This gentleman needs to be signed by a big label publisher. I can't imagine what he would be able to with the freedom to create anything he wants.
I'm in love with this. My dad is very skilled and would die for a contract with webnovel. Aaaaaaaaaaaa!aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Flawless delivery. After reading many books on this site, not one is as clean as this one.
This work ran me through a gamete of emotions. Excitement, happiness, sadness, all of the above.
Nothing I have ever read is better than this. Everything was neatly laid out for the reader and the ending was to die for.
I want a sequel. No matter what happens, we need more Jennifer in our lives.
Each chapter built up, building and building. The end...sent me through a range of emotions I haven't felt in a long time.
I'm back ladies and gentlemen. I may be making a permanent transition back to WebNovel. We just have to discuss signing bonus and money stuff.
Keep writing. This is just the beginning of the journey for you. I can't wait to see more works from you. Finding a work from you in the store will be fantastic...do not sign a contract with these guys.
I couldn't be more in love with this book. It is fantastic and I feel that one day when it finally wraps you will be signing real contracts all over the place. DO NOT SIGN with WebNovel. They are legit but they pay pennies on the dollar and take advantage of all the authors.
From the very first word to the very last (even though we are continuing) the book has grasped something inside of me and lead me to want to write as well.
We are continuing along and the story has many was to go. I am fully invested in Jennifer and hope you readers are falling for her as well.
There isn't a book like this on this website. Neve have been so pulled in by a story line or routing for the "Bad Guy" in my entire life. I love to read but have fallen short these last few months. WebNovel and Boyce are going to motivate me to read more and more.
I'm no writer but if I was, I would totally copy this guys work. It is above and beyond anything I have ever read. Perfect pacing, perfect detail.
Heard there was a part 2 coming. We all know the sequel never lives up to the original. I have a feeling this guy can make it ten times better,
This cat may very well be the next big name author in the world. He needs to sign with a huge publishing house and get this thing rolling.
If he doesn't win the contest he entered, I am forever done with Webnovel. This blew the 2nd place book out of the water on grammar and punctuation alone.
He's my dad. That being said, he is making me enjoy reading. I never liked reading, it's so boring. Magic and fantasy...booooo. Realism and stuff that could really happen....amazing.
I dare someone to come in here and say one way this book could have been better. Just one way. You can't, I know it and so do you.
From the structural, cleanliness of the writing, character development, the rationale, all of it, you hit a home run guy. I look forward to the future.
Sweet mother of mercy. Great stuff bud. I don't know where you get ideas like this but maybe you should start a website with writing ques and charge like .50 each or something.
There is absolutely no way you wrote this gem in the time frame given. Especially with the lack of grammatical errors and still telling a story that is meaningful and fun.
I rarely read but a friend referred me to this site. They mentioned you. I am BLOWN away. You have made reading fun without hurting the structure of the story.
Excellent work, especially on a short time frame. Good story, great grammar, punctuation on point. You might want to send this to Penguin.
I am going to read every single word you write until you either die or quit. I highly doubt you'll quit, you are far too talented. Keep it up and you'll be a success very soon.
Absolutely extraordinary work here my friend. You didn't overload us with too many details and you found a way to make a serial killer feel lovable and justified.
In my many years of reading, I have never come across such an encapsulating work as this one. I am interested to see what you can do with a 3 month time line.
If you ever need motivation or ideas, i have them. I am not a good writer but you have the golden touch. Maybe we can collab.
Jennifer is my hero. Not only did you write an excellent character but as a male author writing a female character, you didn't stoop to describing the exact details of her body like all the other male "writers" do. Congrats.
From the beginning to the very end, I was encapsulated into the world of Jennifer and her doing wrong for the right reasons desire.
Pure gold here. This gentleman needs to be signed by a big label publisher. I can't imagine what he would be able to with the freedom to create anything he wants.
I'm in love with this. My dad is very skilled and would die for a contract with webnovel. Aaaaaaaaaaaa!aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Flawless delivery. After reading many books on this site, not one is as clean as this one.
This work ran me through a gamete of emotions. Excitement, happiness, sadness, all of the above.
Nothing I have ever read is better than this. Everything was neatly laid out for the reader and the ending was to die for.
I want a sequel. No matter what happens, we need more Jennifer in our lives.
Each chapter built up, building and building. The end...sent me through a range of emotions I haven't felt in a long time.
I'm back ladies and gentlemen. I may be making a permanent transition back to WebNovel. We just have to discuss signing bonus and money stuff.