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it's okay, i read it. I paid a little, and all I can really say is that it's naive, from the main characters to the villains. Everyone just believes that the other person isn't lying or the other person isn't going to betray you just because. He has unimaginably good luck, littlerally, everything falls into place for him. He almost never has to try at anything. He just gets what he wants instantly. He gets a key for a random door in an abandoned city full of undead, and an hour later, he stumbles upon that door. the spacing is awful, and time moves slowly, so instead, he just goes from nothing to meeting the god damn king of his country in like 3 days. There's no struggle for him at all. it's absurd that this is so highly regarded. And no, I won't read all the way to chapter 1000 or something. If your book is like this in the first 50 chapters, I'm not going to waste my money getting that far.
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It was very fun at the beginning but the longer story gets the more is left out, forgotten or not mention ever again. Need a break from the story for a few weeks. There is a lot of potential if the character had a little More time to develop skills and train.
Pretty impressive read, my only question and complaint would be; does it ever become less political? I like helping people, but meeting king this Queen that, makes me want to bash my head against a block of tofu
I'm gonna give all 5 stars as a sign of support for the Author. Don't get me wrong, I like the novel so far. The world building is great, character development for the MC and friends is a bit vanilla but nothing bad. As you read the writing quality does improve. So for the readers out there, don't be turn off by the bad writing quality in the beginning. However, to the author, please get your editor to edit the first 200 chapters again. I don't know how much they cost, and I'm sure they might not be as cheap as I think it is, but you're losing a lot of potential readers from the first 200 chapters. It is not the worst writing quality, but because of the many grammatical mistakes in the first 200 chapters, it spoils the flow when you're reading the novel. Honestly it was quite the turn off. BUT, it does get better at 200+. I'm guessing, an editor came along and helped out. So please, get the editor to redo the first 200 chapters. I assure you, your readers will love you. Best of luck, cheers.
The Story is Fine and Its Good, Its a pity there is no academy arc i think, and mc is too honest -.- knowing that he can have all still worry about mastery when even a god system skill he can get.
its a great story. I love all the characters so far.my only problem is the amount of typos that have been left and not corrected even though people have commented on them.but overall a amazing book and the author is doing amazing.
Terrible with character designs, how the world looks, time, and some plots but still enjoyable. If you can also ignore the basically constant grammar mistakes!While you might not mention skin tones to try and not be racist it is a major part of a character's design. You also never described the main MC(Walker), at least in the beginning. Maybe later you say more with him but this is over a thousand chapters in at that point.Aftet saying multiple of the issues to someone, they actually asked me why I'm still reading it due to how many flaws I listed.
Within the first chapter you can tell how much work the author built into the world building. The characters also actually act how they are meant to act which is an issue you see in some other novels. The only issue you could possibly have is that there are some grammar issues but the author gets better with it as it continues. But it really is one of the most world built system novels I have ever read.
Early review I am on chapter 85. The story is written decently when it comes to grammar, sentence structure, etc. World background is pretty interesting everyone having the chance to unlock a system and the systems interconnect in some scenarios. MC system is op but so far mc has not really taken advantage of it. Honestly mc doesn’t make many logical choices after he unlocks the system and jumps straight into adventuring. My main gripe about the story is the author doesn’t know how to portray different age levels for different characters. Everyone in this story reacts, talks, and behaves like a 10 year old. People yelling out of surprise or having an o face when they are adults living in a world that has many people fighting monsters. Overall I like the premise of the story and really hope the maturity of the characters goes up as it progresses.
Pretty good overall, I really find the whole everyone has a system interesting. Imo, the mc having a jack of all trades system is great. A perfect system for a main character, op but not too op that the enemy doesn't stand a chance, and you can also see the limitations of the system early on, idk if it will be overcome in the future, i haven't reached that part yet. My biggest gripes about the story is that the characters especially side characters acted like npcs like their actions/reactions revolves around their template so oftentimes i feel the interactions shallow or rigid especially when the story are more of tell than show. Like this character has this kind of personality or that character did an action and that becomes their whole personality. Tbh im hoping this will improve as i read because I'm really into this story
Hi Author, just want to say great book, absolute love it, but i have a question if somebody could awnser, i am re reading the book last time i was at the dwarves, and then stoped but i am now at the forest elf arc, and can't seem to find him telling the human king, elf Queen and demi-human king about the sin demon (gluttony) skill, does he not tell them or what?
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I started this book from day one and have read through bit multiple times since it is my favorite book and the characters are well thought out.
This story is simply a delight. The author has created a vast and diverse world and characters that draw you into it. While the focus is on the main character, none of the supporting cast is left underdeveloped. The author even has a mini story about a character that the group has only met once that is wonderfully written. The only thing I marked down for (though I wish I could only take 1/2 a star) is that there are a few spelling issues. I get that they happen, but when you find a jumbled word, or a different character name in place is one, it can break the flow and immersion. Otherwise, I am about 1500 chapters in, and am begging for more faster!
I needed a fantasy book to use up the bunch of fantasy FP I'd received from contest. I picked this just because I liked the title. I really lucked out. I can't stop reading. there are some grammatical errors but the characters are do engaging you just read over them . The world building is excellent and well thought out. best system storyvive read . thanks Author 😊
It was an interesting story for me, story and writing quality is fine(I'm not a native English speaker) But I dropped after the save the baby dragon episode, it's not the author fault, I'm just dont interested about pet taming things, sorry.
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Really liking the novel so far, just how it doesn't get overly complicated, and nonsensical, so far so good! Ps wish he was a solo player!!!!
Right now, I'm mostly wondering if you have a map made for this world, as in my case that would greatly help the immersion and the understanding of the relations of the kingdoms based on location... I've been trying to keep track with a mental map but where I'm at now I see I must have made more than a few errors as I assumed a location was roughly North of Diamand as well as another roughly NorthWest, but the traversal between these two locations passes by diamond meaning my attempts to keep track of locations have failed... (kinda wish I had the mental archive skill) (I didn't name locations as some might see them as potential spoilers)
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This is a decent novel, many characters to root for. The system style here is quite unique and hope the MC acquires tons of skills. Hahaha. Needs a lot of editing though.
This is One of the Absolute best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. The way the skills are learned and developed, the way the characters are explored and given great depth and growth. ive read dozen of stories on here and this one is by far the absolute best!
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This story is absolutely amazing, it's the first story in a long while to keep me so invested in a long time. The only reason I gave the world backgroud 4 out of the 5 five stars(I would say It's move 4.5 out of 5) is because the author hasn't gotten as in to that part of story/lore yet, since we've been getting tiny bits and pieces of it. The only real flaw is the fact that there are some minor plotlines mentioned but never really build on. My main example being the fact that the author wrote a chapter and mention Su having an interest in a musician from the church. But even with that, considering how long the book is, it makes since that some of them would have no follow up.
The text itself commonly (at least one per chapter) has bizarre spelling errors, but they're pretty isolated and don't impede reading the actual story too much. The story is fun, lighthearted, and a joy to read.
alright, I don't know if I already did a review or not, but now I'm feeling like doing it since I did read it a second time. this is a hidden gem, the written quality is lifelike, I found no hardship understanding the story, it is a simple one yet it's kind of complicated. the plot is kind of refreshing, it brings a change to the trash novels here. as for the characters, one word, simple. I can easily imagine the characters in my head. the world background, it kind of smooth, you see when the author describes something I always kind of see it in my head. recommend. 5/5 in everything it brings change to the word 'adventure', other novels that have the tag adventure do not understand the real meaning behind it. even the fillers are kind of enjoyable, you don't even notice that it's a filler. this review is made in a rush, excuse the grammar.
it's okay, i read it. I paid a little, and all I can really say is that it's naive, from the main characters to the villains. Everyone just believes that the other person isn't lying or the other person isn't going to betray you just because. He has unimaginably good luck, littlerally, everything falls into place for him. He almost never has to try at anything. He just gets what he wants instantly. He gets a key for a random door in an abandoned city full of undead, and an hour later, he stumbles upon that door. the spacing is awful, and time moves slowly, so instead, he just goes from nothing to meeting the god damn king of his country in like 3 days. There's no struggle for him at all. it's absurd that this is so highly regarded. And no, I won't read all the way to chapter 1000 or something. If your book is like this in the first 50 chapters, I'm not going to waste my money getting that far.
Tiết lộ Spoiler It was very fun at the beginning but the longer story gets the more is left out, forgotten or not mention ever again. Need a break from the story for a few weeks. There is a lot of potential if the character had a little More time to develop skills and train.
Pretty impressive read, my only question and complaint would be; does it ever become less political? I like helping people, but meeting king this Queen that, makes me want to bash my head against a block of tofu
I'm gonna give all 5 stars as a sign of support for the Author. Don't get me wrong, I like the novel so far. The world building is great, character development for the MC and friends is a bit vanilla but nothing bad. As you read the writing quality does improve. So for the readers out there, don't be turn off by the bad writing quality in the beginning. However, to the author, please get your editor to edit the first 200 chapters again. I don't know how much they cost, and I'm sure they might not be as cheap as I think it is, but you're losing a lot of potential readers from the first 200 chapters. It is not the worst writing quality, but because of the many grammatical mistakes in the first 200 chapters, it spoils the flow when you're reading the novel. Honestly it was quite the turn off. BUT, it does get better at 200+. I'm guessing, an editor came along and helped out. So please, get the editor to redo the first 200 chapters. I assure you, your readers will love you. Best of luck, cheers.
The Story is Fine and Its Good, Its a pity there is no academy arc i think, and mc is too honest -.- knowing that he can have all still worry about mastery when even a god system skill he can get.
its a great story. I love all the characters so far.my only problem is the amount of typos that have been left and not corrected even though people have commented on them.but overall a amazing book and the author is doing amazing.
Terrible with character designs, how the world looks, time, and some plots but still enjoyable. If you can also ignore the basically constant grammar mistakes!While you might not mention skin tones to try and not be racist it is a major part of a character's design. You also never described the main MC(Walker), at least in the beginning. Maybe later you say more with him but this is over a thousand chapters in at that point.Aftet saying multiple of the issues to someone, they actually asked me why I'm still reading it due to how many flaws I listed.
Within the first chapter you can tell how much work the author built into the world building. The characters also actually act how they are meant to act which is an issue you see in some other novels. The only issue you could possibly have is that there are some grammar issues but the author gets better with it as it continues. But it really is one of the most world built system novels I have ever read.
Early review I am on chapter 85. The story is written decently when it comes to grammar, sentence structure, etc. World background is pretty interesting everyone having the chance to unlock a system and the systems interconnect in some scenarios. MC system is op but so far mc has not really taken advantage of it. Honestly mc doesn’t make many logical choices after he unlocks the system and jumps straight into adventuring. My main gripe about the story is the author doesn’t know how to portray different age levels for different characters. Everyone in this story reacts, talks, and behaves like a 10 year old. People yelling out of surprise or having an o face when they are adults living in a world that has many people fighting monsters. Overall I like the premise of the story and really hope the maturity of the characters goes up as it progresses.
Pretty good overall, I really find the whole everyone has a system interesting. Imo, the mc having a jack of all trades system is great. A perfect system for a main character, op but not too op that the enemy doesn't stand a chance, and you can also see the limitations of the system early on, idk if it will be overcome in the future, i haven't reached that part yet. My biggest gripes about the story is that the characters especially side characters acted like npcs like their actions/reactions revolves around their template so oftentimes i feel the interactions shallow or rigid especially when the story are more of tell than show. Like this character has this kind of personality or that character did an action and that becomes their whole personality. Tbh im hoping this will improve as i read because I'm really into this story
Hi Author, just want to say great book, absolute love it, but i have a question if somebody could awnser, i am re reading the book last time i was at the dwarves, and then stoped but i am now at the forest elf arc, and can't seem to find him telling the human king, elf Queen and demi-human king about the sin demon (gluttony) skill, does he not tell them or what?
Tiết lộ Spoiler I started this book from day one and have read through bit multiple times since it is my favorite book and the characters are well thought out.
This story is simply a delight. The author has created a vast and diverse world and characters that draw you into it. While the focus is on the main character, none of the supporting cast is left underdeveloped. The author even has a mini story about a character that the group has only met once that is wonderfully written. The only thing I marked down for (though I wish I could only take 1/2 a star) is that there are a few spelling issues. I get that they happen, but when you find a jumbled word, or a different character name in place is one, it can break the flow and immersion. Otherwise, I am about 1500 chapters in, and am begging for more faster!
I needed a fantasy book to use up the bunch of fantasy FP I'd received from contest. I picked this just because I liked the title. I really lucked out. I can't stop reading. there are some grammatical errors but the characters are do engaging you just read over them . The world building is excellent and well thought out. best system storyvive read . thanks Author 😊
It was an interesting story for me, story and writing quality is fine(I'm not a native English speaker) But I dropped after the save the baby dragon episode, it's not the author fault, I'm just dont interested about pet taming things, sorry.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Really liking the novel so far, just how it doesn't get overly complicated, and nonsensical, so far so good! Ps wish he was a solo player!!!!
Right now, I'm mostly wondering if you have a map made for this world, as in my case that would greatly help the immersion and the understanding of the relations of the kingdoms based on location... I've been trying to keep track with a mental map but where I'm at now I see I must have made more than a few errors as I assumed a location was roughly North of Diamand as well as another roughly NorthWest, but the traversal between these two locations passes by diamond meaning my attempts to keep track of locations have failed... (kinda wish I had the mental archive skill) (I didn't name locations as some might see them as potential spoilers)
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This is a decent novel, many characters to root for. The system style here is quite unique and hope the MC acquires tons of skills. Hahaha. Needs a lot of editing though.
This is One of the Absolute best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. The way the skills are learned and developed, the way the characters are explored and given great depth and growth. ive read dozen of stories on here and this one is by far the absolute best!
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This story is absolutely amazing, it's the first story in a long while to keep me so invested in a long time. The only reason I gave the world backgroud 4 out of the 5 five stars(I would say It's move 4.5 out of 5) is because the author hasn't gotten as in to that part of story/lore yet, since we've been getting tiny bits and pieces of it. The only real flaw is the fact that there are some minor plotlines mentioned but never really build on. My main example being the fact that the author wrote a chapter and mention Su having an interest in a musician from the church. But even with that, considering how long the book is, it makes since that some of them would have no follow up.
The text itself commonly (at least one per chapter) has bizarre spelling errors, but they're pretty isolated and don't impede reading the actual story too much. The story is fun, lighthearted, and a joy to read.
alright, I don't know if I already did a review or not, but now I'm feeling like doing it since I did read it a second time. this is a hidden gem, the written quality is lifelike, I found no hardship understanding the story, it is a simple one yet it's kind of complicated. the plot is kind of refreshing, it brings a change to the trash novels here. as for the characters, one word, simple. I can easily imagine the characters in my head. the world background, it kind of smooth, you see when the author describes something I always kind of see it in my head. recommend. 5/5 in everything it brings change to the word 'adventure', other novels that have the tag adventure do not understand the real meaning behind it. even the fillers are kind of enjoyable, you don't even notice that it's a filler. this review is made in a rush, excuse the grammar.