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I give up ...................................................................................................,...............................
hey author I was wondering if you plan you update this story I just read it today and I find it really good so I was wondering if you dropped it or not?
Por favor sube más capítulo que me gusto mucho y ya llevas casi un mes sin capítulo así que por favor sube más rápido los capítulos es lo único que te pido autor
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good good, keep writing ......................................................................................................................................................
If you were looking for a fun harem story, well the beginning is like that. Right now we're in the first mission and the MC was forcibly brainwashed by a ROB to be 'evil'. Afterwards we waste 20k words on highschool of the dead by following the canon story. Where we only get out of the school with shido... being alive. (c19 atm). My word of advise is to wait and see if this'll turn back to the original tone. Because right now, the fic is all over the place and has nothing going for it now.
Basically he go after all the girls and try to collect them. Taking the place of protagonists. Coming here i was hoping to see how he defends world and get some benefits while at it. Get some girls one at a time or world. But this here is just that. The story of a collector who given all the benefits without doing anything. And he already go after all the story girls at the same time.
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I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
so here we start okay, to be honest I haven't read this novel but from this title it's definitely interesting so don't disappoint the reader okay and don't HIATUS / drop this novel ok ?, so my suggestion is that the author needs to go crazy up chapters and lengthen words in 1 chapter if it can't be long, at most, make it 2 chapters per day so readers will be happy and will give you support so that's all, well, don't drop it okay! hah ... the important thing is to keep the spirit in making this novel goodbye!
a lot of grammar mistake like she become he and you become they, if you can't read mtl don't read this and for everything else is at least good for now and the best part of this novel is updating schedule. note: my grammar is not good to, so I just showed grammar mistake that absolutely obvious to anyone who can read little bit in english.
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I will be brutally Honest Author dosnt has any writing skills to speak of. His whole english is broken and anyone with a decent degree of the language can spot at least 50 to 100 grammatical mistakes on EACH chapter. This includes the typical typo of His/her He/She being mixed up by a person who has no idea of the english language, like write, right, rite being mixed up too If it wasnt that i was looking for a FF with Tohru, Lucua and Sagiri from Yuna san i wont be reading this. So pls... at least have some decency to edit it a little so its not a textwall
heroines: Hanekawa Tsubasa Kasumigaoka Utaha Tsugumi Seishirou Ameno Sagiri Kirisu Mafuyu Sento Isuzu Chloe Von Einzbern Tohru [img=recommend]
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The overall story is pretty good. I love how the main character uses the power of romantic comedy to get the girls and make his evil plans a success with the help of the system, muhahaha! In this way it should be a harem protagonist. Every time I read fanfiction on this site it gives me a headache that all reincarnates need a pretty face and a sweet tongue to get the girls, it makes me wonder: is it that they have not learned anything from the power of romantic comedy ? In truth, if you need a pretty face to have the girls, you are very far from the original MCs, no matter how princesses they are. I like how the author uses our cultural elements of romance.
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Good novel 👍 ..............................................................................................................................
pretty good so far, it reminds me of akikan's starting as a mangaka. The only thing that I have a problem with is how the characters talk and the amount of "..." in conversations.
it's great fanfaction to read also I hope the author adds yuuna. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍
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Espero que no lo dejes caer...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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great story i hope it has chapters every day and good luck to you More good more good more good Good more good more good more More good more good more good
This has alot of potential just from the cover I can tell you put in work on that some stay safe dont force yourself and do what every you want it's your story
I dropped after the first mission,..........................................................................................................
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I give up ...................................................................................................,...............................
hey author I was wondering if you plan you update this story I just read it today and I find it really good so I was wondering if you dropped it or not?
Por favor sube más capítulo que me gusto mucho y ya llevas casi un mes sin capítulo así que por favor sube más rápido los capítulos es lo único que te pido autor
is this fanfic drop------------------_----------------------------++--------------------------------------------------------------------------
good good, keep writing ......................................................................................................................................................
If you were looking for a fun harem story, well the beginning is like that. Right now we're in the first mission and the MC was forcibly brainwashed by a ROB to be 'evil'. Afterwards we waste 20k words on highschool of the dead by following the canon story. Where we only get out of the school with shido... being alive. (c19 atm). My word of advise is to wait and see if this'll turn back to the original tone. Because right now, the fic is all over the place and has nothing going for it now.
Basically he go after all the girls and try to collect them. Taking the place of protagonists. Coming here i was hoping to see how he defends world and get some benefits while at it. Get some girls one at a time or world. But this here is just that. The story of a collector who given all the benefits without doing anything. And he already go after all the story girls at the same time.
...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
so here we start okay, to be honest I haven't read this novel but from this title it's definitely interesting so don't disappoint the reader okay and don't HIATUS / drop this novel ok ?, so my suggestion is that the author needs to go crazy up chapters and lengthen words in 1 chapter if it can't be long, at most, make it 2 chapters per day so readers will be happy and will give you support so that's all, well, don't drop it okay! hah ... the important thing is to keep the spirit in making this novel goodbye!
a lot of grammar mistake like she become he and you become they, if you can't read mtl don't read this and for everything else is at least good for now and the best part of this novel is updating schedule. note: my grammar is not good to, so I just showed grammar mistake that absolutely obvious to anyone who can read little bit in english.
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👍👍👍-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I will be brutally Honest Author dosnt has any writing skills to speak of. His whole english is broken and anyone with a decent degree of the language can spot at least 50 to 100 grammatical mistakes on EACH chapter. This includes the typical typo of His/her He/She being mixed up by a person who has no idea of the english language, like write, right, rite being mixed up too If it wasnt that i was looking for a FF with Tohru, Lucua and Sagiri from Yuna san i wont be reading this. So pls... at least have some decency to edit it a little so its not a textwall
heroines: Hanekawa Tsubasa Kasumigaoka Utaha Tsugumi Seishirou Ameno Sagiri Kirisu Mafuyu Sento Isuzu Chloe Von Einzbern Tohru [img=recommend]
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The overall story is pretty good. I love how the main character uses the power of romantic comedy to get the girls and make his evil plans a success with the help of the system, muhahaha! In this way it should be a harem protagonist. Every time I read fanfiction on this site it gives me a headache that all reincarnates need a pretty face and a sweet tongue to get the girls, it makes me wonder: is it that they have not learned anything from the power of romantic comedy ? In truth, if you need a pretty face to have the girls, you are very far from the original MCs, no matter how princesses they are. I like how the author uses our cultural elements of romance.
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Good novel 👍 ..............................................................................................................................
pretty good so far, it reminds me of akikan's starting as a mangaka. The only thing that I have a problem with is how the characters talk and the amount of "..." in conversations.
it's great fanfaction to read also I hope the author adds yuuna. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍
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Espero que no lo dejes caer...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Tiết lộ Spoiler great story i hope it has chapters every day and good luck to you More good more good more good Good more good more good more More good more good more good
This has alot of potential just from the cover I can tell you put in work on that some stay safe dont force yourself and do what every you want it's your story
I dropped after the first mission,..........................................................................................................