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Dugzaw

I commend authors who write horror because, personally, I believe it to be the trickiest genre to write. The first chapter with Scarlet's POV already draws the reader in with its eerie yet captivating language. The imagery is strong as well. worth the read!

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thelazywriter

Great storyline. Although I'm still at chapter 1 it already got my interest. Love the way it has a type of horror as well as some thriller. Hope to read more! You have my support[img=recommend]

The story is intriguing, filled with suspense and not as scary as imagined. The main character Scarlet has a strong personality, I wonder what's holding her back from doing the right thing. Few errors here and there, and descriptions of minimal details. Less is more in my opinion. Good job author, do update soon.

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KyleSullivanJr

Off to a mysterious creepy start and I like that! Author did good at establishing the characters, school setting and formulating the mysterious events that are going to befall everyone. Only a few things that need improvement are the missing punctuation, capitalization errors and grammer errors. Other than that, I wonder what going to happen next!

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fictionweaver

Author here shamelessly giving myself a 5 star rating. I know the genre says horror and thriller but it's not as scary as the genre depicts. I just couldn't find a more specific genre for it. I added a touch of Romance in it. Also I am grateful to my lovely readers for reading my work. Have fun. Join me on discord, let's have some thriller time. https://discord.gg/BFw5Mkee

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Michael_Gesellchen

Author does a nice job setting up this story. The main character is hiding something from her past and the author does a nice job building up the mystery. A few typos, but this book is off to a nice start.[img=recommend]

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AC_Riya06

I love thriller and spooky stories! I like the way that there's already a scary scene at the very first chapter. I like how the author made the story thrilling with the words she used to describe the scenes.

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rhandomgirl

I'm kinda triggered of their past? It took them one year to remember that they murder someone? Aside from that, its an interesting plot considering that they just "murder" someone.

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Jacket_Josh

Just from the first few chapters, the story sets up the main duo's dynamic, the mystery, and the horror elements pretty perfectly! Besides a few typos and grammatical errors, the story is really good and interesting so far! Can't wait to keep reading.

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fictionweaver

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Author should update on time and give concentration to typos. The flashbacks gives an insight of what happened in the past which is helpful.

Author is doing great soo far and I hope it continues. Except updates are not consistent and I wish Author will work on that. Keeping my fingers crossed for more creepy updates[img=update]...And I love the POV format from the characters..helps know what characters are thinking deep inside.

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Mill_01

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I love the book... I don't regret starting it. Except the few typos in the first two chapters, the book is great.. Starting wasn't that strong tho but I like where it's going... Thumbs up author [img=recommend]