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The beginning was interesting but then it all became trash when acnologia could influence the system.... That is basically nonsense, like if he wanted the battle experience he would have asked for it as a wish.... The development is basically trash
it's a good fan-fic achnologia is one of my favourite character because of his power but at the same i'm extremely disappointed in the main character...why he always angry in the quest? it's his fault in the first place!, and also the quest is for his own good?right?, then he didn't need to complain and don't tell me because of his pride that why he is like that?.. the power he have right now is not his hardship, the mc is also a hotblooded person, he didn't realised that power is only givin to him, what more important is if he is remain like this he will bring his destruction to him self, why don't you give him a trial that he can't get out in trial until he have mild and calm emotion also make it possible to master the magic he inherit through trial,
SO Far more or less like every other type of FF. its just the same, it might even be a downgraded version of the achnologia in AGT FF that was dropped. hopefully it might change cause its just C3. I mean just saying, every FF of this ' type ' is more or less the same. they all have the same shit, with just a different power and always just follows cannon, with MC taking over yun che. and all the FF are the same. hopefully. this might be different
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The beginning was interesting but then it all became trash when acnologia could influence the system.... That is basically nonsense, like if he wanted the battle experience he would have asked for it as a wish.... The development is basically trash
it's a good fan-fic achnologia is one of my favourite character because of his power but at the same i'm extremely disappointed in the main character...why he always angry in the quest? it's his fault in the first place!, and also the quest is for his own good?right?, then he didn't need to complain and don't tell me because of his pride that why he is like that?.. the power he have right now is not his hardship, the mc is also a hotblooded person, he didn't realised that power is only givin to him, what more important is if he is remain like this he will bring his destruction to him self, why don't you give him a trial that he can't get out in trial until he have mild and calm emotion also make it possible to master the magic he inherit through trial,
SO Far more or less like every other type of FF. its just the same, it might even be a downgraded version of the achnologia in AGT FF that was dropped. hopefully it might change cause its just C3. I mean just saying, every FF of this ' type ' is more or less the same. they all have the same shit, with just a different power and always just follows cannon, with MC taking over yun che. and all the FF are the same. hopefully. this might be different
is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?