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Hello, ladies and gentlemen! I came across the author's work when he was still writing a book called the commonwealth and only after the commonwealth began to read this book. To bring up to date those who have not yet read or are planning to read. For such people, I write all this, I tried to highlight different aspects of the book, so that it is clear to you and it is easier for you to decide whether to read it or not. By the way, this is written after reading all the available 127 chapters. and yes, forgive me for my terrible English, as my teacher used to say, what are you doing here with such street English? 1. The Main Character. What I like is that as a person living for the second time (and for this book, living for the fourth time) He behaves exactly like a human being. Not like a robot, a hero, a CHOSEN ONE, and so on. What do I mean by that? In the first life, he died as an *****, and after rebirth, he no longer behaves like a child. In his head, he is already a formed person, and when they try to bring him up as a child, where they teach him all sorts of virtues, it does not affect him. In his second life, he became a ruler, and after living in the skin of a ruler, it is clear that he cannot be a farmer. His memory was not erased, he remembers his past life and, accordingly, his personality changes minimally. You can't expect a man who has ruled for so long to become an ordinary citizen. So, all the cruelty and inhumanity of the main character is explained. He's not bad because he's bad. He thinks and acts like a ruler, and for his own purposes he can kill innocent people and even children. For him, they are not people, but a resource, like metal, stone, and so on. He is also not a believer, although he has personally seen God. He can do anything to achieve his goals, he does not care about race, faith, morality, and so on. But as a ruler, he knows how to behave in public, so he is like a modern politician (a hypocrite) who was sent to the time of the Vikings). Those who have read the Commonwealth will understand the main character. For we have seen him transform into what he is now. But for beginners, it can seem that the author is a racist-fascist-Decepticon and generally an a*shole. I can only advise such people to read the Commonwealth. 2. History and facts. The book describes the facts from both the series and the story. The main character is not limited to only the events from the series, but also with a real story. So this is not just a copy-paste of the series, the author's content in the book is enough. 3. Characters. Many characters, both from the series and created by the author. A lot of attention is not paid to them, but the minimum familiarization with them is still present. No surreal characters, they don't act like morons, or weird for the 8th century. Although, stoned mushroom characters and drug trip here is clearly not enough)(I mean the Vikings, with their hallucinogenic mushrooms.) 4. Construction of the city and the army. Thinking here is not necessary, something to tell, and so it is clear to everyone. Although it could have been better if the author had paid enough attention to them. 5. Mysticism. The main character lives in a world where mysticism really exists. Much has been written about this in the opening chapters, but it is rarely mentioned in the middle and beyond. So there are all sorts of vengeful spirits, house-spirits, and so on. Also, the main character has gifts from the Slavic gods. 6. War. Many wars, battles, from internal to the conquest of external enemies. Everything is described more or less well, there are no anime gods-battles, although the main character tried to be one and almost died). There are not enough details and descriptions of the preparation for war, the training of soldiers, the creation of weapons, the provision of food for soldiers, and the consequences of the war itself. Of course, for the Vikings, the consequence is not enough, which means they don't care about it. The main thing is to die in a glorious battle and go feast in the halls of Odin. But from the point of view of the rulers, this should be taken into account, but again, the book almost does not pay attention to this. That's all I could think of, I might have missed a few things, but I think that's enough. Personally, I liked the book, I can not say that it is a masterpiece, but it is quite a good book. It is also worth mentioning the author, he is a person who knows what author's pride is. It may sound far-fetched, but after 2 months of active reading in Webnovel, this is one of the few authors who knows their stuff. He is not a beggar who wants stones, a patrion, and other nonsense. The author does not change or delete the already written chapter, if this chapter did not like the readers who wanted to see Naruto here and not the harsh reality. It does not describe the plot and what the main character, or any other character in the afterwords, actually meant. Everything is written in the chapter itself, so thank God there are no such comments from the author: Guys, the main character did not mean this, he is good, I will explain everything later somehow, do not stop reading and please give me some stones. First of all, he doesn't care about the readers ' opinions, not in a bad way. And if you take into account the users of Webnovel, I would even say this is a mandatory measure. Because here basically, everyone wants anime and other nonsense, I witnessed how readers cornered the author, offering more and more nonsense and he just didn't know how to deal with it further and gave up writing. This is a rare trait for Webnovel, so I can only nod to the author for it. Also, the author does not require any stones and money on the patrion. Everything is free, so I can't demand anything from the author, or complain about something. Everything is free, do you want to read it? Read this! if you don't want to read, then go, no one is forcing you. Good qualities for the author, he does not behave arrogantly, humiliating the reader (The most unpleasant types, consider themselves the navel of the earth) Or like an offended teenager who puts a dislike, then turns to his readers-a schoolboy, so that they put you a dislike. (Although, these are even funny in their own way.) So everything was decided with the author, so the last point is the shortcomings of the book. It's a fast-paced narrative and very little detail. Of course, I don't mean Chinese details, where thousands of characters describe how delicious Chinese rice is. But the book is really very lacking in detail, the author runs from one point to another in a couple of lines. Some things are generally only mentioned in the dialogues, there is not even a minimal mention of it. But, as I have already written above, I have no right to demand something from the author, take it as my personal preference. I think I said everything, although I could have written it shorter, but I had nothing to do and it turned out what it turned out.
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Este tipo si que hace novelas buenas, es una lástima que hizo solo dos y desapareció, pero muy buen autor ___________________________________
it's not a serious fanfic, but also not funny, can't find what these people gave 5 star for
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Excellent novel can’t rate it highly enough. As a history buff as well as liking mythology I love the authors attention to detail when it comes to certain details such as the tribal lands of certain peoples and animals as well as their customs and traditions almost makes it feel as if the author trapped an ancient saga of old in time. Great read worth every second invested.
although I am completely my own opinion, if the spelling rules are to be ignored, it is worth spending hours even just for the reality in which the story is created, I don't know if it is worth reading, but it is ideal for Decaying time
Penulis Saran Saya Jika Anda Menulis Buku Tentang Viking Dan Skandinavia Di Abad Pertengahan . Anda Harus Menggunakan Kebudayaan Dan Kepercayaan Di Sana (Nordic). Bukan Dari Slavia Itu Akan Terkesan Membuat Plot Cerita Yang Bodoh dan Sensitif . Atau Anda Ingin Mempromosikan Budaya Dan Dewa Slavia? / Kebencian Anda Terhadap Mitologi Nordik (Ygdrasil) Apakah Anda Akan Membuat MC Menjadi Raja Yang Mempromosikan Dewa² Slavia Dan Mengubah Kepercayaan Penduduknya
Simplemente lo amo, el autor es muy bueno escribiendo y explicando los sucesos y amo la personalidad del mc......... ...... .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .
What can I say? Well I’ve read it twice already. Very nice work! Good character development, detailed world background and interesting narrative. MC feels real to me, just like any other person with little powers to use. Good job implementing the series knowledge and self-made storyline. More of a Kingdom Building during Viking age and slice of life instead of constant battles or knowledge seeking. Chapters are entertaining, not short. Grammar is excellent - no typos, no mistakes, though sometimes I wish you could give little briefing to meaning of certain words or idioms. I give it solid 10/10 even tho the rest of chapters aren’t there, cause you’re concentrating on your other novel. Btw you’re second novel is also nice, although I don’t understand Lithuanian history very much. But wars were described plentiful. Anyways, I couldn’t find other vikings novel that good, so this once is definitely must-read
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Exente historia. Me senti atrapado en la trama desde el momento que lo vi....... ...... ....... . ........ ....... ........ .......... ......... .. ......
I dropped it, because the writing is good, the story is good, but the author adds some characters just to die, it was easier just to put random npc, and not what the author does that and create a whole story for some characters, only for them to die in an idiotic way a few chapters later, most of them being very close to the MC and the MC doesn't seem to care if someone who's been very close to him FOR YEARS is going to his death, basically this fanfic is a mix of Vikings and Game of thrones
A good "sequel" for CCO (from the same author). The story is dynamic and easy to understand. It has some hardcore moments but in the end that is how real life was back then.
I Loved this novel I would like more people to read it just to show author it good stuff and pretty much only good Viking story i can find and the mc dose not have some godly ability with i like. Keep Up Good Work Hope you DONT DROP!
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Isso é muito bom! Adoro o humor sarcástico e cruel do protagonista!.......................................................................................................................................................................................
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Not the best grammar but not the worst here either. World background are quite detailed and character development also not bad. This story are not for the faint of hearted. It's violent, brutal and bloody but that's the reality of life in that era and at that place. Kudos to the author for potraying the MC in that light. Too many authors of fanfic or normal fiction tried to force-feed modern-day ideology into historical fiction. Ancient world were brutal, Vikings not the only people who sacrifice humans. Good job.
Whenever I read this novel my mind always play this song in my head on repeat My mother told me Someday I will buy Galley with good oars Sail to distant shores Stand up on the prow Noble barque I steer Steady course to the haven Hew many foe-men
This story is amazing, simply marvelous. Tho the mc is quite cruel, but still the story is good. Also, he is not a pushover. He can be considered OP.
interesting, different than the norm of most fics, but definitly interesting and refreshing. I dont think its everyones pot, but one should definitly try it.
unpleasant........................................................................................................................................................................
Me encantan los capítulos de la entrevista televisiva pero e tipo larson me pone de los nervios sin decir nada pero bueno es parte de la historia
Like what you did with the story and your other series where you combined them into two books and i think it works really we and tbh kinda wanted someone to do this idea of combining books and you are i think the only one who has done this successfully
As an author, I do not recommend it, I do it for my own pleasure and do not want to encourage anyone. MC is an asshole, a sadistic asshole. My writing style has many flaws, English is not my first language. Usually, any suggestions and good advice are ignored.
Hello, ladies and gentlemen! I came across the author's work when he was still writing a book called the commonwealth and only after the commonwealth began to read this book. To bring up to date those who have not yet read or are planning to read. For such people, I write all this, I tried to highlight different aspects of the book, so that it is clear to you and it is easier for you to decide whether to read it or not. By the way, this is written after reading all the available 127 chapters. and yes, forgive me for my terrible English, as my teacher used to say, what are you doing here with such street English? 1. The Main Character. What I like is that as a person living for the second time (and for this book, living for the fourth time) He behaves exactly like a human being. Not like a robot, a hero, a CHOSEN ONE, and so on. What do I mean by that? In the first life, he died as an *****, and after rebirth, he no longer behaves like a child. In his head, he is already a formed person, and when they try to bring him up as a child, where they teach him all sorts of virtues, it does not affect him. In his second life, he became a ruler, and after living in the skin of a ruler, it is clear that he cannot be a farmer. His memory was not erased, he remembers his past life and, accordingly, his personality changes minimally. You can't expect a man who has ruled for so long to become an ordinary citizen. So, all the cruelty and inhumanity of the main character is explained. He's not bad because he's bad. He thinks and acts like a ruler, and for his own purposes he can kill innocent people and even children. For him, they are not people, but a resource, like metal, stone, and so on. He is also not a believer, although he has personally seen God. He can do anything to achieve his goals, he does not care about race, faith, morality, and so on. But as a ruler, he knows how to behave in public, so he is like a modern politician (a hypocrite) who was sent to the time of the Vikings). Those who have read the Commonwealth will understand the main character. For we have seen him transform into what he is now. But for beginners, it can seem that the author is a racist-fascist-Decepticon and generally an a*shole. I can only advise such people to read the Commonwealth. 2. History and facts. The book describes the facts from both the series and the story. The main character is not limited to only the events from the series, but also with a real story. So this is not just a copy-paste of the series, the author's content in the book is enough. 3. Characters. Many characters, both from the series and created by the author. A lot of attention is not paid to them, but the minimum familiarization with them is still present. No surreal characters, they don't act like morons, or weird for the 8th century. Although, stoned mushroom characters and drug trip here is clearly not enough)(I mean the Vikings, with their hallucinogenic mushrooms.) 4. Construction of the city and the army. Thinking here is not necessary, something to tell, and so it is clear to everyone. Although it could have been better if the author had paid enough attention to them. 5. Mysticism. The main character lives in a world where mysticism really exists. Much has been written about this in the opening chapters, but it is rarely mentioned in the middle and beyond. So there are all sorts of vengeful spirits, house-spirits, and so on. Also, the main character has gifts from the Slavic gods. 6. War. Many wars, battles, from internal to the conquest of external enemies. Everything is described more or less well, there are no anime gods-battles, although the main character tried to be one and almost died). There are not enough details and descriptions of the preparation for war, the training of soldiers, the creation of weapons, the provision of food for soldiers, and the consequences of the war itself. Of course, for the Vikings, the consequence is not enough, which means they don't care about it. The main thing is to die in a glorious battle and go feast in the halls of Odin. But from the point of view of the rulers, this should be taken into account, but again, the book almost does not pay attention to this. That's all I could think of, I might have missed a few things, but I think that's enough. Personally, I liked the book, I can not say that it is a masterpiece, but it is quite a good book. It is also worth mentioning the author, he is a person who knows what author's pride is. It may sound far-fetched, but after 2 months of active reading in Webnovel, this is one of the few authors who knows their stuff. He is not a beggar who wants stones, a patrion, and other nonsense. The author does not change or delete the already written chapter, if this chapter did not like the readers who wanted to see Naruto here and not the harsh reality. It does not describe the plot and what the main character, or any other character in the afterwords, actually meant. Everything is written in the chapter itself, so thank God there are no such comments from the author: Guys, the main character did not mean this, he is good, I will explain everything later somehow, do not stop reading and please give me some stones. First of all, he doesn't care about the readers ' opinions, not in a bad way. And if you take into account the users of Webnovel, I would even say this is a mandatory measure. Because here basically, everyone wants anime and other nonsense, I witnessed how readers cornered the author, offering more and more nonsense and he just didn't know how to deal with it further and gave up writing. This is a rare trait for Webnovel, so I can only nod to the author for it. Also, the author does not require any stones and money on the patrion. Everything is free, so I can't demand anything from the author, or complain about something. Everything is free, do you want to read it? Read this! if you don't want to read, then go, no one is forcing you. Good qualities for the author, he does not behave arrogantly, humiliating the reader (The most unpleasant types, consider themselves the navel of the earth) Or like an offended teenager who puts a dislike, then turns to his readers-a schoolboy, so that they put you a dislike. (Although, these are even funny in their own way.) So everything was decided with the author, so the last point is the shortcomings of the book. It's a fast-paced narrative and very little detail. Of course, I don't mean Chinese details, where thousands of characters describe how delicious Chinese rice is. But the book is really very lacking in detail, the author runs from one point to another in a couple of lines. Some things are generally only mentioned in the dialogues, there is not even a minimal mention of it. But, as I have already written above, I have no right to demand something from the author, take it as my personal preference. I think I said everything, although I could have written it shorter, but I had nothing to do and it turned out what it turned out.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Este tipo si que hace novelas buenas, es una lástima que hizo solo dos y desapareció, pero muy buen autor ___________________________________
it's not a serious fanfic, but also not funny, can't find what these people gave 5 star for
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Excellent novel can’t rate it highly enough. As a history buff as well as liking mythology I love the authors attention to detail when it comes to certain details such as the tribal lands of certain peoples and animals as well as their customs and traditions almost makes it feel as if the author trapped an ancient saga of old in time. Great read worth every second invested.
although I am completely my own opinion, if the spelling rules are to be ignored, it is worth spending hours even just for the reality in which the story is created, I don't know if it is worth reading, but it is ideal for Decaying time
Penulis Saran Saya Jika Anda Menulis Buku Tentang Viking Dan Skandinavia Di Abad Pertengahan . Anda Harus Menggunakan Kebudayaan Dan Kepercayaan Di Sana (Nordic). Bukan Dari Slavia Itu Akan Terkesan Membuat Plot Cerita Yang Bodoh dan Sensitif . Atau Anda Ingin Mempromosikan Budaya Dan Dewa Slavia? / Kebencian Anda Terhadap Mitologi Nordik (Ygdrasil) Apakah Anda Akan Membuat MC Menjadi Raja Yang Mempromosikan Dewa² Slavia Dan Mengubah Kepercayaan Penduduknya
Simplemente lo amo, el autor es muy bueno escribiendo y explicando los sucesos y amo la personalidad del mc......... ...... .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .
What can I say? Well I’ve read it twice already. Very nice work! Good character development, detailed world background and interesting narrative. MC feels real to me, just like any other person with little powers to use. Good job implementing the series knowledge and self-made storyline. More of a Kingdom Building during Viking age and slice of life instead of constant battles or knowledge seeking. Chapters are entertaining, not short. Grammar is excellent - no typos, no mistakes, though sometimes I wish you could give little briefing to meaning of certain words or idioms. I give it solid 10/10 even tho the rest of chapters aren’t there, cause you’re concentrating on your other novel. Btw you’re second novel is also nice, although I don’t understand Lithuanian history very much. But wars were described plentiful. Anyways, I couldn’t find other vikings novel that good, so this once is definitely must-read
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Exente historia. Me senti atrapado en la trama desde el momento que lo vi....... ...... ....... . ........ ....... ........ .......... ......... .. ......
I dropped it, because the writing is good, the story is good, but the author adds some characters just to die, it was easier just to put random npc, and not what the author does that and create a whole story for some characters, only for them to die in an idiotic way a few chapters later, most of them being very close to the MC and the MC doesn't seem to care if someone who's been very close to him FOR YEARS is going to his death, basically this fanfic is a mix of Vikings and Game of thrones
A good "sequel" for CCO (from the same author). The story is dynamic and easy to understand. It has some hardcore moments but in the end that is how real life was back then.
I Loved this novel I would like more people to read it just to show author it good stuff and pretty much only good Viking story i can find and the mc dose not have some godly ability with i like. Keep Up Good Work Hope you DONT DROP!
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Isso é muito bom! Adoro o humor sarcástico e cruel do protagonista!.......................................................................................................................................................................................
Estou gostando de ler até agora 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍 🤩🤩🤩🤩 👍👍👍 👍👍 👍
Not the best grammar but not the worst here either. World background are quite detailed and character development also not bad. This story are not for the faint of hearted. It's violent, brutal and bloody but that's the reality of life in that era and at that place. Kudos to the author for potraying the MC in that light. Too many authors of fanfic or normal fiction tried to force-feed modern-day ideology into historical fiction. Ancient world were brutal, Vikings not the only people who sacrifice humans. Good job.
Whenever I read this novel my mind always play this song in my head on repeat My mother told me Someday I will buy Galley with good oars Sail to distant shores Stand up on the prow Noble barque I steer Steady course to the haven Hew many foe-men
This story is amazing, simply marvelous. Tho the mc is quite cruel, but still the story is good. Also, he is not a pushover. He can be considered OP.
interesting, different than the norm of most fics, but definitly interesting and refreshing. I dont think its everyones pot, but one should definitly try it.
unpleasant........................................................................................................................................................................
Me encantan los capítulos de la entrevista televisiva pero e tipo larson me pone de los nervios sin decir nada pero bueno es parte de la historia
Like what you did with the story and your other series where you combined them into two books and i think it works really we and tbh kinda wanted someone to do this idea of combining books and you are i think the only one who has done this successfully
As an author, I do not recommend it, I do it for my own pleasure and do not want to encourage anyone. MC is an asshole, a sadistic asshole. My writing style has many flaws, English is not my first language. Usually, any suggestions and good advice are ignored.