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I really like this book. It tell a particular story, not like common so i'm curious to see how it will evolve. Even if i'm reading in english and it is not my first language, i find it well written and not too difficult to read. I can't wait to read the next chapter!🤩
I found first chapters of this story very well written. The plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. found this story very well written. I've read a few werewolf stories and this one really among the top. The character development is good. I highly recommend it.
The story is pretty good, I like how the fmc acts, overall it's a well written story
you are so creative ... I have been hypnotized by your novel to werewolf world
The plot is full of intrigue and mystery. The reason behind the wolves chasing them and the whole backstory of Melisca's family is so interesting and leaves you eager to learn more. The theme of revenge gives the story a powerful drive and makes you excited to see how Melisca will grow and evolve as she embarks on her mission. However, the writing could use some improvement in terms of description and pacing. Some of the action scenes feel a bit rushed and could benefit from more vivid details to make them more engaging. Also, the dialogue could be more natural and less expository at times. But overall, this chapter is a fantastic start to what promises to be an amazing and unforgettable novel! I'll still give it five stars because I've only read the first five chapters. I have a strong feeling that your story will improve as it progresses.
"Expertly balancing action, suspense, and heart, this story offers a fresh twist on werewolf lore. A must-read!"
Nice book keep it up author Love the characters and the book is well paced too.
as a new writer and aspiring author, this novel inspired me. This could've been one of the best novel in webnovel.
I found this story very well written. I've read a few werewolf stories and this one really good. I think this will be a potential book. Hope the author will keep this good work :D
this is a very interesting book, I love how detailed the description of the story is going, keep on the good work writer
Great storyline with a smooth flow and blend of emotions, mystery and revenge. This is certainly a good read . Kudos to the author, btw more updates please
Hello, everyone! I apologize that I had been gone for years. This time, I'm back for good and picking up this story again. Please join me in my journey in this book. Your reviews and gifts would be really helpful to make this progress faster. Anyway, thank you so much for giving this a chance. 😊
A well-constructed mix of mystery, revenge, and supernatural elements! One of the better ones I've read in this genre. Am definitely adding this to my read list
This takes me back to when I repeatedly watching Twilight and Underworld. Those were the start of fanfictions and ideas of stories regarding werewolves and vampires. and it is magnificent to still see that everyone can still harbor more premises from those movies. No wonder this story was in the silver tier. It has potential and needed more audience + exposure. And I hope that you'd get that~ Gambare, Author~~
Finally another werewolf teen romance series. To be honest despite what the "Mainstream Memelords" of the internet say, I didn't find Twilight too bad. If you count all the other werewolf/vampire teen romance out there, then it was quite good if not average. This novel follows a similar 'feel' but the plot is totally differently. Well, there is revenge for one thing. So ya, 5 stars mate.
What to say about this book? It's just so full of emotions! Readers get to vividly feel the what Melisca, the FL goes through! I liked how Melisca's character has moments of weakness and turbulence, despite being quite powerful. This makes her character all the more realistic and wholesome. The plot is fast paced and action lovers would really enjoy it, as the prologue begins right smack dab amidst action. Gonna be honest here...Initially I came for RS, but got completely hooked by the exciting plot! Wonderful job done, author![img=recommend][img=update]
I like the idea behind the plot of this book. The storyline is beautiful. The prologue has action-packed drama to introduce you first-hand to MC's world. I think it's a book with potential. Great job, xD[img=recommend][img=recommend]
A VERY WELL WRITTEN BOOK The prologue is interesting and amazing and I loved the last part of the prologue. This is very interesting to read, I loved the way how you draw the scenes into words. I REALLY LIKE THIS ADDING THIS TO MY LIBRARY AND GOING TO FINISH IT SOON KEEP WRITING AUTHOR!!!
dababy less goooo
I gotta ask....is this gonna be updated or continued anytime soon??? Did you continue it on another app? Of everything I've read or are currently reading- this may be the one I'm most excited to see updated
The way you have written your story is extremely intriguing. The language you have chosen is showing the reader what's happening, rather than just telling. Based on experience, I can tell you it is something a lot of writers struggle with. So bravo your on the right track! One small suggestion would be try not to use "ly" ending verbs back to back in paragraphs. I feel like that is just going to enhance your writing. It is a just suggestion :) Yours story is really!
Overall, I love the plot line and the way you jumped into the action in the prologue made my heart beat fast! I was really pumped to read your novel! You're writing style is absolutely fantastic and clear to read, it's easy to imagine each scene! Hope you update soon!
HEYYY AUTHOR, lets begin with the amazingly emotive prologue youve written, beautifully structured novel, i wouldnt be surprised if it were to be published into paper hehe. Not gonna give spoilers as i havent finished reading all chapters myself, willing to read super super SOOOOOPERRRR SOOOOOOONN !
I've never really been a fan of 'Alpha' and 'the wolf's plot but I have to admit that this one has great stuff to keep you hooked. I look forward to reading more and newer chapters!!!!!!
A very well written book, to be honest its the typical werewolf troupes but once youve read this wonderful piece i promise that you'll get hooked.
I found this story very well written. I've read a few werewolf stories and this one really got into my head. The character development is realistic and the emotions are touching. I usually read male leads, but somehow this FL story really drew me in.
I really like this book. It tell a particular story, not like common so i'm curious to see how it will evolve. Even if i'm reading in english and it is not my first language, i find it well written and not too difficult to read. I can't wait to read the next chapter!🤩
I found first chapters of this story very well written. The plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. found this story very well written. I've read a few werewolf stories and this one really among the top. The character development is good. I highly recommend it.
The story is pretty good, I like how the fmc acts, overall it's a well written story
you are so creative ... I have been hypnotized by your novel to werewolf world
The plot is full of intrigue and mystery. The reason behind the wolves chasing them and the whole backstory of Melisca's family is so interesting and leaves you eager to learn more. The theme of revenge gives the story a powerful drive and makes you excited to see how Melisca will grow and evolve as she embarks on her mission. However, the writing could use some improvement in terms of description and pacing. Some of the action scenes feel a bit rushed and could benefit from more vivid details to make them more engaging. Also, the dialogue could be more natural and less expository at times. But overall, this chapter is a fantastic start to what promises to be an amazing and unforgettable novel! I'll still give it five stars because I've only read the first five chapters. I have a strong feeling that your story will improve as it progresses.
"Expertly balancing action, suspense, and heart, this story offers a fresh twist on werewolf lore. A must-read!"
Nice book keep it up author Love the characters and the book is well paced too.
as a new writer and aspiring author, this novel inspired me. This could've been one of the best novel in webnovel.
I found this story very well written. I've read a few werewolf stories and this one really good. I think this will be a potential book. Hope the author will keep this good work :D
this is a very interesting book, I love how detailed the description of the story is going, keep on the good work writer
Great storyline with a smooth flow and blend of emotions, mystery and revenge. This is certainly a good read . Kudos to the author, btw more updates please
Hello, everyone! I apologize that I had been gone for years. This time, I'm back for good and picking up this story again. Please join me in my journey in this book. Your reviews and gifts would be really helpful to make this progress faster. Anyway, thank you so much for giving this a chance. 😊
A well-constructed mix of mystery, revenge, and supernatural elements! One of the better ones I've read in this genre. Am definitely adding this to my read list
This takes me back to when I repeatedly watching Twilight and Underworld. Those were the start of fanfictions and ideas of stories regarding werewolves and vampires. and it is magnificent to still see that everyone can still harbor more premises from those movies. No wonder this story was in the silver tier. It has potential and needed more audience + exposure. And I hope that you'd get that~ Gambare, Author~~
Finally another werewolf teen romance series. To be honest despite what the "Mainstream Memelords" of the internet say, I didn't find Twilight too bad. If you count all the other werewolf/vampire teen romance out there, then it was quite good if not average. This novel follows a similar 'feel' but the plot is totally differently. Well, there is revenge for one thing. So ya, 5 stars mate.
What to say about this book? It's just so full of emotions! Readers get to vividly feel the what Melisca, the FL goes through! I liked how Melisca's character has moments of weakness and turbulence, despite being quite powerful. This makes her character all the more realistic and wholesome. The plot is fast paced and action lovers would really enjoy it, as the prologue begins right smack dab amidst action. Gonna be honest here...Initially I came for RS, but got completely hooked by the exciting plot! Wonderful job done, author![img=recommend][img=update]
I like the idea behind the plot of this book. The storyline is beautiful. The prologue has action-packed drama to introduce you first-hand to MC's world. I think it's a book with potential. Great job, xD[img=recommend][img=recommend]
A VERY WELL WRITTEN BOOK The prologue is interesting and amazing and I loved the last part of the prologue. This is very interesting to read, I loved the way how you draw the scenes into words. I REALLY LIKE THIS ADDING THIS TO MY LIBRARY AND GOING TO FINISH IT SOON KEEP WRITING AUTHOR!!!
dababy less goooo
I gotta ask....is this gonna be updated or continued anytime soon??? Did you continue it on another app? Of everything I've read or are currently reading- this may be the one I'm most excited to see updated
The way you have written your story is extremely intriguing. The language you have chosen is showing the reader what's happening, rather than just telling. Based on experience, I can tell you it is something a lot of writers struggle with. So bravo your on the right track! One small suggestion would be try not to use "ly" ending verbs back to back in paragraphs. I feel like that is just going to enhance your writing. It is a just suggestion :) Yours story is really!
Overall, I love the plot line and the way you jumped into the action in the prologue made my heart beat fast! I was really pumped to read your novel! You're writing style is absolutely fantastic and clear to read, it's easy to imagine each scene! Hope you update soon!
HEYYY AUTHOR, lets begin with the amazingly emotive prologue youve written, beautifully structured novel, i wouldnt be surprised if it were to be published into paper hehe. Not gonna give spoilers as i havent finished reading all chapters myself, willing to read super super SOOOOOPERRRR SOOOOOOONN !
I've never really been a fan of 'Alpha' and 'the wolf's plot but I have to admit that this one has great stuff to keep you hooked. I look forward to reading more and newer chapters!!!!!!
A very well written book, to be honest its the typical werewolf troupes but once youve read this wonderful piece i promise that you'll get hooked.
I found this story very well written. I've read a few werewolf stories and this one really got into my head. The character development is realistic and the emotions are touching. I usually read male leads, but somehow this FL story really drew me in.