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This could be better if you used a free proofreader like grammerly or something similar to make your writing more coherent, which it lacks immensely.
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A guy created a guy using imagination then he somehow receives very op powers cuz imagination??? Though author tried to explain the crestions backstory so he wasnt just imagination?? (I did not understand what you want ur character to be. One moment he kills a guy just cuz he is annoying and next tries to make friends?) Though overall very plain story, no actualy world or character development. And your writing? Thats no storytelling its more like a statement after statement which feels very bland while reading. You certaintly have a lot of room to improve, best of luck
It's literally just a series of statements not an actual story or fan fic. It's like I'm scrolling through social media and reading status updates. It's weird.
you definitely need to work more on your english because when i was reading it, it felt so plain like a kid was writing it. i was gonna keep reading cause its still readable but it just bothers me alot...all i can say for now is, i like hxh fan fics so im gonna wait for you to improved your writing style and i hope you try to change it later or proof read it. good luck men looking forward to it
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This could be better if you used a free proofreader like grammerly or something similar to make your writing more coherent, which it lacks immensely.
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A guy created a guy using imagination then he somehow receives very op powers cuz imagination??? Though author tried to explain the crestions backstory so he wasnt just imagination?? (I did not understand what you want ur character to be. One moment he kills a guy just cuz he is annoying and next tries to make friends?) Though overall very plain story, no actualy world or character development. And your writing? Thats no storytelling its more like a statement after statement which feels very bland while reading. You certaintly have a lot of room to improve, best of luck
It's literally just a series of statements not an actual story or fan fic. It's like I'm scrolling through social media and reading status updates. It's weird.
you definitely need to work more on your english because when i was reading it, it felt so plain like a kid was writing it. i was gonna keep reading cause its still readable but it just bothers me alot...all i can say for now is, i like hxh fan fics so im gonna wait for you to improved your writing style and i hope you try to change it later or proof read it. good luck men looking forward to it
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