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I honestly dont know why people say its just a ripoff of TBATE when it diverges midway and TBATE is also a ripoff of mushoku tensei (which is one of the best isekais and reincarnation stories along with rezero and both were the one the popularized the genre on the first place)
debo decir que me parece como la novela original, ósea, como comienza, como se separa de sus padres por algunos años, como se hace amigo con una princesa, como también tiene una hermana pequeña y hasta cuando se registra como aventurero con mascara y eso, y no hace falta el típico personaje secundario arrogante con antecedentes fuertes, que se cree mejor que todos y que termina buscando la muerte provocando al MC. esta es mi opinión de los 26 capítulos que voy leyendo.
I love this novel. Great story and plot! It felt as if I reread the beginning after the end but I don't. I was just trying to find something similar to tbate but I end up finding a hidden gems iinstead.I hope you continued creating a masterpiece like this and Im really looking forward to it in near future!
12 chapters in, and so far I'm loving it way more than TBATE, I really hope the author doesn't make the same mistakes that it made, revealing that he was reincarnated, and pulling away from the FL because he feels old, plus the pov, bit I could bare it, because the novel is really good As of now I have this novel in my top 5 right under dimension deceive, and Martial peak, please keep up the good work author
I seriously loved it till the end. I seriously recommend it. The longer you read this the better story develops. I even cries 😭 while reading few chapters. A story like this is hard to come by. I just hope for writer to bring more New Stories and contents.
Let's just get it put of the way. Yes the beginning is extremely similar to TBATE and how it started, although with some minor tweaks. If you've read TBATE you probably already know what's going to happen up until it diverges. The story is great, even after the story strays from TBATE it's still innovative and interesting to read. If you like TBATE you should read this aswell, it's a fantasy and worth reading even if you have no idea what TBATE is.
Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best.
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Although the story seems to be similar to TBATE, it diverges later on. Some parts may be exactly similar to TBATE, but such parts are few. Loved the last 30-40 chapters. Plus, it has a satisfactory ending too.
The writing was on point. The story was well thought out and drew you in. Character development was astounding and progressive. One of my favorite stories on this site so far. Great job!
It was amazing tbh i didn't expected it to be so much awesome i simply thought of it asap fanfic of that but well,this was honestly something i loved though the fact that he was still so young and that he was eighteen even in his previous didn't quite settled with me(how he was so good in tactics and all) but well ...highly recommend and worth the miney
Excellent story with a fast yet not so overwhelming pace. Unlike many novels on here this felt like a well edited, published novel. The lack of filler, while maintaining a clear image of the overall story and world was very refreshing to read. Thanks author I sincerely hope you continue writing.
books worth reading are so common on this site, so many of them are good books that make you want more but this book is one of the few rare books on this site that I have read that truly captures the depth of emotion that can make someone laugh, and cry, and i have done both with this novel I commend the author on telling a story that dealt with complex issues, and didnt shy away from painful topics like war. death, trauma, and much more this book is far from perfect, however, in my opinion it is a masterpiece
A greatly written story with amazing character development. I only had two problems with the story development: 1. We never discovered who/what caused the fire in the woods. 2. the culprit behind the abduction of Asthia at the beginning was never found.
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This novel is not bad, but it's a copycat of "the beginning after the end". If you have not read TBATE then you could enjoy this story, it's short and nice, but if you have read it than keep in mind that the characters and 3/4 of the story are a shorter and simplified version of TBATE.
Simply great😍 No question asked. I nerd more novel like this. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is one of the best books I've ever read on this app. This book took me on a journey and I'm happy that I was able to be apart of it.😁😁
Terminei de ler O início parece literalmente TBATE Mas depois fica muito melhor e original e acontecendo coisas que eu não esperava, foi uma boa leitura Vale a pena ler
That's a great book, not the beste that I read quite easy vocab for non inglish speakers. The begining progress very fast but is coopreendible.
From beginning to end the story grabs your attention, the author does amazingly at creating a mental picture for the characters and the world, with his awesome descriptions and detailed backgrounds, your allowed to really feel how the characters are meant to be. The only downside is that I felt the ending was rather abrupt and ended in a bery “simple” manner Other than that an incredible story from start to finish, yes the start is similar to TBATE but the auther adds his own essence to the story and takes it in a new direction after the first few chapter
First and foremost, thank you for this amazing story! It's not joke when I say that I literally binged the entire thing in two days. Yes I have no life. This will be my full review with critism because that's important if you want to improve. Spoilers ahead. Overall I thought that the story was great. The ideas and themes you introduced were cool and I like the idea of the final battle and the final nemesis. The story was about Jay / Two trying to have a new beginning. I thought I knew what that meant, let's get reincarnated and enjoy a new a life. However, it became clear to me that Two is someone that is deeply haunted and scarred by their past. It causes them to be unable to truly appreciate the people and world around them because they're still caught in the shadow of who and what they are. This was a big part of the story and was especially focused on with Katherine's death and she tells to live. Then at the end we see Two fighting himself and ultimately moving on from the past that haunts him and becoming Jay. This is a wonderful idea and story beat. However, I feel like this idea wasn't fully supported by the story in that I mean that the story got so swept up in the war that I kind of lost focus on that as I read and perhaps you, Kenkan, as you wrote. What I feel is the biggest flaw of this story is what feels like a lack of planning. Personally when I want to write a story I think it is ideal to sit down and write out every little aspect of what you want to do. Who are the characters, what are they like, what do they want, etc. This extends to everything. The world, the systems, races, history, all of it and more. Then how do they interact and especially, that do you want to do with the story and how you want it to tie into itself as well as what you want the focus to be. I could be wrong but I feel like you did not plan enough of this story. Even from your comments it seems like you just sat down and wrote what you wanted for the next chapter. I totally understand this. I know what its like to get super excited about something that you just want to start right then and there and then you kind of get stuck because you want to be consistent and meet peoples expectations etc. However, I think that more planning would have helped your writing immensely. Personally as a reader I felt that a lot of this story was very rushed. This has a lot of reasons such as time skips, character relations, plot advancements, etc. I think that there were too many time skips all over the place and it didn't help that we were rarely told a time skip happened. This led me, as a reader, to be often confused. This is especially so when I would be looking forward to interactions between characters and just seeing more of the world, only to find out that we skipped all of it, jumped ahead, and just say it happened. This also decreases my attachment to the characters because we don't get enough time and interaction with them, This also means that deaths aren't really that sad. Although Katherines death was pretty good I thought she was done well, but even her I would have liked more interaction. Battles. They felt weird because the way you wrote these high paced action filled battles it felt like minutes went by, especially considering the speed and power of the characters. However you would write that it's been going on for hours or that the war has been going on for months and the way you write it and what you write almost feel at odds against each other. I think that your fighting scenes are good it's just that they don't have the length you want them to in my eyes. Furthermore, your world feels too small. You never really talk about distance and this factors in with the time skips. For example, you say that it took about 3 weeks for the human army to arrive and support the dragons, however this happens in a few chapters. Also Jay travels around the continent in mere hours and armies seem to depart and arrive at their destination very quickly. The war just felt small and large at the same time, There were a lot of people but it only felt like there were only a few battles and only a few spots those battles happened, I understand that this is because of the dragons having a small territory to defend but I still think that your world felt too small. Yes there were places very far from the war such as the fei capital, and this helps show distance, but that's really the only example you ever showed so it doesn't really help or feel impactful. The monster race was a cool idea however I really don't see why you added it. They did almost nothing for the story and they did not impact it in any meaningful way. It just feels like a cool idea you threw in, but it has no impact. I also don't think that the Jay becoming an antagonist of the whole world was pulled of very well. It honestly just felt like asthia told the kings that he was really strong so he's the main baddie now and we should forget the war, and they just went along with it. Yes he blew up a whole town/city but I don't think its enough at all. In my opinion, he should have killed and destroyed a lot more in order to be recognized as a threat to stop the whole war and unite despite the years of this current war and hatred, as well as the centuries of war and hatred that you said is there, So Jay filling an Itachi role didn't really feel fleshed out enough. Then the physical battle between him and the other s ranks was not that great. I know that you mainly wanted to focus on his internal struggle and that final battle, and I know that he is super strong, but I don't think that there was enough shown against all the s ranks. In terms of your influence of The begging after the end, I think it dictated the course of your story too much. Influence is fine and a similar begging is also fine, however your whole story almost feels a shorter and rushed copy. Your characters are almost the exact same, from their power, to their appearance, to their actions. I mean Hugo, a fire user noble that follows the exact same path as the elf guy in TBATE. A huge party wipe against a tree monster that pretty much ends Jays adventuring, Almost every main character is like the main characters of TBATE. I'm fine with inspiration but I think you took too much and this honestly feels like a fanfic rip off some of the time. In order to improve, I really use think it comes down to a lot of planning and development before sitting down and writing. Just writing a chapter, publishing it and then doing that every time just leads to a linear story with not much depth most of the time. Also don't overuse influences. Your writing style is already pretty good so I think that you don't need to improve much there. Ok. I know I just wrote a lot about how I didn't like what you wrote but I genuinely did enjoy my time reading your story. There was a lot I did like too but I decided to focus on criticism for this. Thank you Kenkan for this cool story and I look forward to what you do next. Please don't misunderstand any of what I wrote for hate, I just wanted to say what I didn't like and what I thought could be better. Thank you for your time if you actually read this textbook of a review. - Kizaru Etrus
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This is a very good novel with potential, but the character is well detailed story is fantastic The fights are good, it's completely different from tbat
Nice so far...................................................................................................................................................
Can you tell us a little bit about after the current ark? Will there be more development between Jay and Asthia? Overall I think this is a vary interesting story, keep up the good work!
That's been one hell of a mc. And the author sure do love girls. Everywhere I look, I see girls. From the start where mom character which can be scary at times when she gets questioned( cliche). To the dragonkin girl that that he found in the woods who again had a fiery personality and to the empress who has fiery personality. Then when the mc enters the kingdom, he finds a girl crying which ends up being his sister. And again to the archer girl whom she introduced himself without a mask and at one time even said she reminds him of the dragon kin girl.. how many girls do you need for your mc to be surrounded. And for someone with a dark past life he sure does have quite the hero syndrome. Learn to make reasonable characters and their development. You killed your story. Pity. Also give more world background if you want more immersion into the story.. I find it lacks details at times. Disappointed that a good story turned out bad just because of the authors poor decisions and unsteady character development and portrayal.
Honestly, although better than most of the garbage junk on this site it’s just a TBATE clone. It has the potential to actually be more and interesting but the author forces so many plots just to keep the same storyline as in TBATE. I mean here we have a reborn 18 year old that has never known familial love but runs off first thing to go train with dragons for years leaving his parents to think him dead. He comes back only to leave them after what 2 weeks to become an adventurer at like 7. Yeah okay makes sense for parents to finally get their son back and allow him a 7 year old to go off on adventures. Another thing is the “bind” honestly a terrible name that’s just awkward when magic could’ve worked because as said he came from Eath where magic and mana or essence or elemental anything could’ve worked but no we have bind and binders. Just doesn’t work other than wanting to be different from the otherwise same story TBATE. Early on we get informed that the average age of someone awakening is around 12 and our main character awoke at 3 you’d think this would give him an advantage but no not really everyone and their mother seems to be a 8 year old fully awakened genius that is close to being on par with our 18 year old combat veteran. Another thing I have to point out is the switching between pov’s because it doesn’t add anything to the story other than tooting the MC’s horn and saying how different he is from the other boys and how great he is. There is little to no development for the side characters other than being there to support the mc. But like I said it’s better than most novels on the site and the only reason I’m being harsh is because the author has potential it just makes me mad to see a possibly good novel turn bad because it’s trying to follow another story.
The beggining after the end is such a good novel and tbh made my summer break the year i read it super enjoyable so i have high hopes good job on author for Putting that disclaimer
Was looking for a good novel to read when I saw this. I actually clicked on it because the cover reminded me a tbate so that was kinda cool. Anyway it's an enjoyable novel and i recommend it to others!
Hey guys, Author here. I just wanted to leave a few words regarding this story of mine: First and foremost, the book is inspired by The Beginning After the End by Turtleme. This beginning of this story mirrors TBATE, and if you've read the work, then you'll immediately recognize the plots and situations. Both stories obviously diverge later on, but you can expect the first few dozen chapters to be extremely similar. I'm also trying to improve my writing with this book. I'd say I did a decent job at checking for mistakes, but if you happen to find any, or just happen to read a sentence that doesn't sound right, just let me know. I always try and correct mistakes I missed. Pacing is also something I struggle with, so any tips on how to go about adjusting and setting the speed of events would be much appreciated. Here are also some questions I've gotten: Is this story a harem? - No. Is there R-18 content? - No. Is the story perfect? - Fuck no. Obviously, the last one isn't a question I've gotten, but please don't start reading this story expecting some modern masterpiece. I'm just a simple author who's trying to write their very first novel. That's all I've got for now. I really do hope you enjoy my story if you decide to try it out. If you have any questions, just ask away or ask me on discord. (Link will be in the synopsis of the story) Thanks for everything :)
I honestly dont know why people say its just a ripoff of TBATE when it diverges midway and TBATE is also a ripoff of mushoku tensei (which is one of the best isekais and reincarnation stories along with rezero and both were the one the popularized the genre on the first place)
debo decir que me parece como la novela original, ósea, como comienza, como se separa de sus padres por algunos años, como se hace amigo con una princesa, como también tiene una hermana pequeña y hasta cuando se registra como aventurero con mascara y eso, y no hace falta el típico personaje secundario arrogante con antecedentes fuertes, que se cree mejor que todos y que termina buscando la muerte provocando al MC. esta es mi opinión de los 26 capítulos que voy leyendo.
I love this novel. Great story and plot! It felt as if I reread the beginning after the end but I don't. I was just trying to find something similar to tbate but I end up finding a hidden gems iinstead.I hope you continued creating a masterpiece like this and Im really looking forward to it in near future!
12 chapters in, and so far I'm loving it way more than TBATE, I really hope the author doesn't make the same mistakes that it made, revealing that he was reincarnated, and pulling away from the FL because he feels old, plus the pov, bit I could bare it, because the novel is really good As of now I have this novel in my top 5 right under dimension deceive, and Martial peak, please keep up the good work author
I seriously loved it till the end. I seriously recommend it. The longer you read this the better story develops. I even cries 😭 while reading few chapters. A story like this is hard to come by. I just hope for writer to bring more New Stories and contents.
Let's just get it put of the way. Yes the beginning is extremely similar to TBATE and how it started, although with some minor tweaks. If you've read TBATE you probably already know what's going to happen up until it diverges. The story is great, even after the story strays from TBATE it's still innovative and interesting to read. If you like TBATE you should read this aswell, it's a fantasy and worth reading even if you have no idea what TBATE is.
Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best. Best of the best.
Super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super
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Although the story seems to be similar to TBATE, it diverges later on. Some parts may be exactly similar to TBATE, but such parts are few. Loved the last 30-40 chapters. Plus, it has a satisfactory ending too.
The writing was on point. The story was well thought out and drew you in. Character development was astounding and progressive. One of my favorite stories on this site so far. Great job!
It was amazing tbh i didn't expected it to be so much awesome i simply thought of it asap fanfic of that but well,this was honestly something i loved though the fact that he was still so young and that he was eighteen even in his previous didn't quite settled with me(how he was so good in tactics and all) but well ...highly recommend and worth the miney
Excellent story with a fast yet not so overwhelming pace. Unlike many novels on here this felt like a well edited, published novel. The lack of filler, while maintaining a clear image of the overall story and world was very refreshing to read. Thanks author I sincerely hope you continue writing.
books worth reading are so common on this site, so many of them are good books that make you want more but this book is one of the few rare books on this site that I have read that truly captures the depth of emotion that can make someone laugh, and cry, and i have done both with this novel I commend the author on telling a story that dealt with complex issues, and didnt shy away from painful topics like war. death, trauma, and much more this book is far from perfect, however, in my opinion it is a masterpiece
A greatly written story with amazing character development. I only had two problems with the story development: 1. We never discovered who/what caused the fire in the woods. 2. the culprit behind the abduction of Asthia at the beginning was never found.
Tiết lộ Spoiler This novel is not bad, but it's a copycat of "the beginning after the end". If you have not read TBATE then you could enjoy this story, it's short and nice, but if you have read it than keep in mind that the characters and 3/4 of the story are a shorter and simplified version of TBATE.
Simply great😍 No question asked. I nerd more novel like this. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is one of the best books I've ever read on this app. This book took me on a journey and I'm happy that I was able to be apart of it.😁😁
Terminei de ler O início parece literalmente TBATE Mas depois fica muito melhor e original e acontecendo coisas que eu não esperava, foi uma boa leitura Vale a pena ler
That's a great book, not the beste that I read quite easy vocab for non inglish speakers. The begining progress very fast but is coopreendible.
From beginning to end the story grabs your attention, the author does amazingly at creating a mental picture for the characters and the world, with his awesome descriptions and detailed backgrounds, your allowed to really feel how the characters are meant to be. The only downside is that I felt the ending was rather abrupt and ended in a bery “simple” manner Other than that an incredible story from start to finish, yes the start is similar to TBATE but the auther adds his own essence to the story and takes it in a new direction after the first few chapter
First and foremost, thank you for this amazing story! It's not joke when I say that I literally binged the entire thing in two days. Yes I have no life. This will be my full review with critism because that's important if you want to improve. Spoilers ahead. Overall I thought that the story was great. The ideas and themes you introduced were cool and I like the idea of the final battle and the final nemesis. The story was about Jay / Two trying to have a new beginning. I thought I knew what that meant, let's get reincarnated and enjoy a new a life. However, it became clear to me that Two is someone that is deeply haunted and scarred by their past. It causes them to be unable to truly appreciate the people and world around them because they're still caught in the shadow of who and what they are. This was a big part of the story and was especially focused on with Katherine's death and she tells to live. Then at the end we see Two fighting himself and ultimately moving on from the past that haunts him and becoming Jay. This is a wonderful idea and story beat. However, I feel like this idea wasn't fully supported by the story in that I mean that the story got so swept up in the war that I kind of lost focus on that as I read and perhaps you, Kenkan, as you wrote. What I feel is the biggest flaw of this story is what feels like a lack of planning. Personally when I want to write a story I think it is ideal to sit down and write out every little aspect of what you want to do. Who are the characters, what are they like, what do they want, etc. This extends to everything. The world, the systems, races, history, all of it and more. Then how do they interact and especially, that do you want to do with the story and how you want it to tie into itself as well as what you want the focus to be. I could be wrong but I feel like you did not plan enough of this story. Even from your comments it seems like you just sat down and wrote what you wanted for the next chapter. I totally understand this. I know what its like to get super excited about something that you just want to start right then and there and then you kind of get stuck because you want to be consistent and meet peoples expectations etc. However, I think that more planning would have helped your writing immensely. Personally as a reader I felt that a lot of this story was very rushed. This has a lot of reasons such as time skips, character relations, plot advancements, etc. I think that there were too many time skips all over the place and it didn't help that we were rarely told a time skip happened. This led me, as a reader, to be often confused. This is especially so when I would be looking forward to interactions between characters and just seeing more of the world, only to find out that we skipped all of it, jumped ahead, and just say it happened. This also decreases my attachment to the characters because we don't get enough time and interaction with them, This also means that deaths aren't really that sad. Although Katherines death was pretty good I thought she was done well, but even her I would have liked more interaction. Battles. They felt weird because the way you wrote these high paced action filled battles it felt like minutes went by, especially considering the speed and power of the characters. However you would write that it's been going on for hours or that the war has been going on for months and the way you write it and what you write almost feel at odds against each other. I think that your fighting scenes are good it's just that they don't have the length you want them to in my eyes. Furthermore, your world feels too small. You never really talk about distance and this factors in with the time skips. For example, you say that it took about 3 weeks for the human army to arrive and support the dragons, however this happens in a few chapters. Also Jay travels around the continent in mere hours and armies seem to depart and arrive at their destination very quickly. The war just felt small and large at the same time, There were a lot of people but it only felt like there were only a few battles and only a few spots those battles happened, I understand that this is because of the dragons having a small territory to defend but I still think that your world felt too small. Yes there were places very far from the war such as the fei capital, and this helps show distance, but that's really the only example you ever showed so it doesn't really help or feel impactful. The monster race was a cool idea however I really don't see why you added it. They did almost nothing for the story and they did not impact it in any meaningful way. It just feels like a cool idea you threw in, but it has no impact. I also don't think that the Jay becoming an antagonist of the whole world was pulled of very well. It honestly just felt like asthia told the kings that he was really strong so he's the main baddie now and we should forget the war, and they just went along with it. Yes he blew up a whole town/city but I don't think its enough at all. In my opinion, he should have killed and destroyed a lot more in order to be recognized as a threat to stop the whole war and unite despite the years of this current war and hatred, as well as the centuries of war and hatred that you said is there, So Jay filling an Itachi role didn't really feel fleshed out enough. Then the physical battle between him and the other s ranks was not that great. I know that you mainly wanted to focus on his internal struggle and that final battle, and I know that he is super strong, but I don't think that there was enough shown against all the s ranks. In terms of your influence of The begging after the end, I think it dictated the course of your story too much. Influence is fine and a similar begging is also fine, however your whole story almost feels a shorter and rushed copy. Your characters are almost the exact same, from their power, to their appearance, to their actions. I mean Hugo, a fire user noble that follows the exact same path as the elf guy in TBATE. A huge party wipe against a tree monster that pretty much ends Jays adventuring, Almost every main character is like the main characters of TBATE. I'm fine with inspiration but I think you took too much and this honestly feels like a fanfic rip off some of the time. In order to improve, I really use think it comes down to a lot of planning and development before sitting down and writing. Just writing a chapter, publishing it and then doing that every time just leads to a linear story with not much depth most of the time. Also don't overuse influences. Your writing style is already pretty good so I think that you don't need to improve much there. Ok. I know I just wrote a lot about how I didn't like what you wrote but I genuinely did enjoy my time reading your story. There was a lot I did like too but I decided to focus on criticism for this. Thank you Kenkan for this cool story and I look forward to what you do next. Please don't misunderstand any of what I wrote for hate, I just wanted to say what I didn't like and what I thought could be better. Thank you for your time if you actually read this textbook of a review. - Kizaru Etrus
Tiết lộ Spoiler This is a very good novel with potential, but the character is well detailed story is fantastic The fights are good, it's completely different from tbat
Nice so far...................................................................................................................................................
Can you tell us a little bit about after the current ark? Will there be more development between Jay and Asthia? Overall I think this is a vary interesting story, keep up the good work!
That's been one hell of a mc. And the author sure do love girls. Everywhere I look, I see girls. From the start where mom character which can be scary at times when she gets questioned( cliche). To the dragonkin girl that that he found in the woods who again had a fiery personality and to the empress who has fiery personality. Then when the mc enters the kingdom, he finds a girl crying which ends up being his sister. And again to the archer girl whom she introduced himself without a mask and at one time even said she reminds him of the dragon kin girl.. how many girls do you need for your mc to be surrounded. And for someone with a dark past life he sure does have quite the hero syndrome. Learn to make reasonable characters and their development. You killed your story. Pity. Also give more world background if you want more immersion into the story.. I find it lacks details at times. Disappointed that a good story turned out bad just because of the authors poor decisions and unsteady character development and portrayal.
Honestly, although better than most of the garbage junk on this site it’s just a TBATE clone. It has the potential to actually be more and interesting but the author forces so many plots just to keep the same storyline as in TBATE. I mean here we have a reborn 18 year old that has never known familial love but runs off first thing to go train with dragons for years leaving his parents to think him dead. He comes back only to leave them after what 2 weeks to become an adventurer at like 7. Yeah okay makes sense for parents to finally get their son back and allow him a 7 year old to go off on adventures. Another thing is the “bind” honestly a terrible name that’s just awkward when magic could’ve worked because as said he came from Eath where magic and mana or essence or elemental anything could’ve worked but no we have bind and binders. Just doesn’t work other than wanting to be different from the otherwise same story TBATE. Early on we get informed that the average age of someone awakening is around 12 and our main character awoke at 3 you’d think this would give him an advantage but no not really everyone and their mother seems to be a 8 year old fully awakened genius that is close to being on par with our 18 year old combat veteran. Another thing I have to point out is the switching between pov’s because it doesn’t add anything to the story other than tooting the MC’s horn and saying how different he is from the other boys and how great he is. There is little to no development for the side characters other than being there to support the mc. But like I said it’s better than most novels on the site and the only reason I’m being harsh is because the author has potential it just makes me mad to see a possibly good novel turn bad because it’s trying to follow another story.
The beggining after the end is such a good novel and tbh made my summer break the year i read it super enjoyable so i have high hopes good job on author for Putting that disclaimer
Was looking for a good novel to read when I saw this. I actually clicked on it because the cover reminded me a tbate so that was kinda cool. Anyway it's an enjoyable novel and i recommend it to others!
Hey guys, Author here. I just wanted to leave a few words regarding this story of mine: First and foremost, the book is inspired by The Beginning After the End by Turtleme. This beginning of this story mirrors TBATE, and if you've read the work, then you'll immediately recognize the plots and situations. Both stories obviously diverge later on, but you can expect the first few dozen chapters to be extremely similar. I'm also trying to improve my writing with this book. I'd say I did a decent job at checking for mistakes, but if you happen to find any, or just happen to read a sentence that doesn't sound right, just let me know. I always try and correct mistakes I missed. Pacing is also something I struggle with, so any tips on how to go about adjusting and setting the speed of events would be much appreciated. Here are also some questions I've gotten: Is this story a harem? - No. Is there R-18 content? - No. Is the story perfect? - Fuck no. Obviously, the last one isn't a question I've gotten, but please don't start reading this story expecting some modern masterpiece. I'm just a simple author who's trying to write their very first novel. That's all I've got for now. I really do hope you enjoy my story if you decide to try it out. If you have any questions, just ask away or ask me on discord. (Link will be in the synopsis of the story) Thanks for everything :)