NARRATOR'S POV
Robbie and Brennan waited patiently for the store-keeper to return- the blue-eyed man remained in his place while the other walked around, looking at the random objects on the store. Occasionally he would point at an unfinished sword in a corner or the hanging spear in the left wall- only to be ignored by his companion.
It took the keeper a few minutes in the backroom before returning with a paper in hand.
"Here it is," she said as she placed the map over the display glass.
"As you already know- we are here" her forefinger pointing over the position of the town.
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