One Piece - My name is Bonez, Daz Bonez

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amaturewriter

Love the idea, and the execution. SI , daz bones dope, and his OG power too, and before cannon, about atleast over a decade before cannon, nice. The personality is also nice, selfish but has morals, as long as he is smart and not a evil cunt its fine. Its also great that u are seeing the OP world for what it is rather than some happy shit. Would really like to see MC use knowledge for advantage and shit. Especially sciences and fictional knowledge. Just dont make mc apervert friendly retard. Any relationships just build and no rush. And dont make Love interest useless sluts Suggestion. Do u know breathing arts from demon slayer? Maybe implement it to mc? He is a blade. It could be like bending from avatar even. Do u know Chi blocking from avatar? Something like that with haki? Also mc power is cutting, and since its paramacia....do u know gildarts crash magic? Something like that? On a side note, seeing ur bk is darker..how much? I am fine with dark shit as long as i can seeing it coming. Dont like surprises regarding that. Ex: a story i recently read had an MC living in the past and was more or less a slice of life but its latest chp was that of a child being more or less raped, and it was kinda vividly described . Threw me off cause i didnt expect it. So my point is will things like this happen? How dark is dark? Anyway, love ur shit so far. GL

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Jccr

It is the second fanfic that I read about an agent of baroque work and I must say that it is very good, it is very well developed, in addition the rhythm of the dialogue and the thought of the Mc is articulated very well what does that it is very fluid the reading and the development of the events does not seem forced, the Supa Supa is a fruit that with a good imagination can be developed immensely, it continues with the good work.

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Kaito_Uzumaki

That's How I read this fic……… Like A Madman :):):):):):)):):):):):):)):):):):)):::):):):):):):):):):):):):)::::):):):):):):):):):):):):)::::):):)::):):):):):):):)::::):):):):):):):):):):)::):):):):):):):):):):):):)::):):):):):):):)::):):):):):);):):);):);;):):):):):):):):):)::):):):):)

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YugoElia

J'ai aimé cette histoire, dommage qu'elle soit finie.

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Kaito_Uzumaki

Bruh You broke my heart when you deleted that story. it's been nearly two years but it was always in my heart. It as one of the first few fic that I read when I started using webnovel. Thank You for rewritimg it. And fk you if you ever decided to delete it again

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Sau11

thx 4 chapter,,didn't find on fanfiction.net ,,Pink Ape j n h

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Nro_Nacht

Its very good Loved reading it so far one of the best one piece ff i have seen i would recomend.

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CHAD

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KlankerDroid

This is very good, it has the right balance of comedy, action, and wholesomeness that non of them burn out and they all complement each other. would strongly recommend!

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Bookless_Clown

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Medalha

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