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Viết đánh giáI've actually really enjoyed this story 400+ chapters in so far. Idk if the power system is used or influenced by a system somewhere else but I love the idea of it and it makes the pokemon cultivation process and power levels very unique and not a repetitive copy paste poke power system. I think the overall world is built well and the tides brought a very interesting dynamic that makes since to happen in this type of world. I will say there are some author plot holes but they don't have to be perfect.
Its mid .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... bad writing quality
This is by far the most solid top 3 Pokemon ffs on the app. I don’t quite understand the negative comments that it gets, and especially don’t get the lack of power states the novel has. The novel is good, with depth and lore that keeps on giving. It goes beyond a normal “I want to be a Pokemon master” plot and weaves some political struggles and kingdom building elements. The romance trope is not particularly explored, however, that characteristic aligns with the MC’s nature and you still get enough satisfaction from the care and love he shows towards his family/pokemon/people. Overall, if you’re a Pokemon fan and want to have a good time, don’t miss out on the largest Poke-novel in the app!
Follows a cliched plot, but there are a lot of discrepancies other than that as well. It feels like the author has no sense of scale in regards to money and the world building. Lacks that depth that can suck the readers in.
Another good story with good potential suddenly turned trash by laziness and cliches. The story was good at first and had a decent amount of originality. However, as the chapters went on, the translation started becoming lazier and more like a Chinese translation. And becomes worse when it tries to force in Chinese cultivation into the world of pokemon, and does so rather badly. It's even more depressing when you read the notes from the author talking about how hard he worked on this and issues irl.
Good story. Different from many Pokemon stories I have seen so far. So please continue. Good story. Different from many Pokemon stories I have seen so far. So please continue.
Keep at it. Need more poke fanfics just don’t drop it in middle of the good parts and u got my support 💋💜
This author has taken an really interesting approach to the Pokémon world I really feel like the chapter's are gonna be amazing.✌️✌️✌️🔥 Good work dude.
This is one of the best Pokemon stories with regular updates... So keep updating keep updating keep updating keep updating keep updating keep updating
Una excelente historia en mi humilde opinión, todo bien redactado y nada forzado al menos yo no ví nada por el estilo, envió mis más sinceros agradecimientos al autor
It's pretty good to read from time to time...Only problem is that it have many grammatical and writing mistakes...Like sometimes, there are no use of comma, and sometimes the placement and use of words are not right... But it is good specially since there are many types of things that differentiate it from other pokemon ff and also has its own characteristics of things...The storyline for example, is really great and same with the pace of the story...My only problem is that the chapters are too short...I mean even if its in the 500+ chapters, i wouldn't be satisfied if each chapter are too short itself...Like, I would be satisfied and also always wait for the updates even if its 3 ch a week as long as its long...Like, 1000/1500/2000 word count
Tiết lộ SpoilerWho was the waifu of the series? Or is harem?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????
For a fanfic with such consistent updates and quality chapters, it's sad to see that this is quite low on the rankings which definitely deserves more..Bruhh let the author cook🔥 pretty sure he's planning something for them..
Bro the novel is great and I just can't get enough of it but I am not trying to criticise you I am just telling you to upload more chapters please. I am just in love with the novel. Please improve the speed at whuch you upload chapters like 12 chaps a week or atleast 10 a week please bro It's a heartfelt request. Love From Nepal
Hey Author I request you to please write a few more chapters every week because the novel is too good and I wanted to Ask what novels are your favourite pokemon novels please mentions. keep up the good work and good luck in your future endeavours
One of the best Pokemon based novel that I have read, everything about this novel is best I only have one issue please update more chapters
It's a regular adaptation, have more chinese fic than Pokemon traditional story, is good, but is heavy read 30 caps about Venu Family and Axel travel in this, MC is a Good Guy, and nothing more, i feel the history has potential but. Sometimes the point of being a "Realistic" story is lost by creating concepts, stories, etc., it is not at the level of a 12 year old on Wattpad, but I feel that there are things that can be developed or written better, I will still read this thing, but because I want to know who Brine is, anyway, I give it a 6/10, it's better than Master of Tactics in my opinion, but please, don't put so many things or references from chinese culture novels.
I think this is a mtl and he edited considering how it follows Chinese cliche like he joins families [clans] and catches bug Pokemons and how he use those 100 years 10000 years items and other things but author said its original and it's also similar to mtl how it drags story and chapters just for indigo league i read upto 350 yet he won 2 badges and buy 3 badges and also he follows a crack that leads to another dimension similar to Chinese cultivation novel where mc get powerup in those cracks [similar to solo leveling gates]
my experience as a reader:numbers: Just ignore them. They have never made sense, and there is no consistency he will say billion trillion million, honestly kind of funny.pokemon: cool, interesting choices. WAY TO MUCH TIME SPENT on pokemon and training them, there should be a focus more on the story. IMO the best part of this story as of was your charizard/darmanitian island: cool lore, fast progression, great gains.pokemon moves: your move lists are longer then your fights, and I don't think I've read many of your pokemons moves as it just doesn't matter. not sure if it's just for an inflated word count but I've never read more then one of the move sets that are a block long, they are also not in any order what so ever.worth a read but there is a lot of stuff that has you scratching your head, 3 out of 5
it was good at the start Kinda boring with The system system basically controlling his fate right now with punishment and the creator lol. then Everyone knowing he's a transmuter kinda boring. then story foreshadowing other People with system is trash. well others knowing his reincarnated then getting punished by a creator is trash plot then oak knowing trash again
Not going to lie... The beginning looks shit with cultivation core and stuff. I will try to push through 150+ chapters to see if it's good.
I've actually really enjoyed this story 400+ chapters in so far. Idk if the power system is used or influenced by a system somewhere else but I love the idea of it and it makes the pokemon cultivation process and power levels very unique and not a repetitive copy paste poke power system. I think the overall world is built well and the tides brought a very interesting dynamic that makes since to happen in this type of world. I will say there are some author plot holes but they don't have to be perfect.
Its mid .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... bad writing quality
This is by far the most solid top 3 Pokemon ffs on the app. I don’t quite understand the negative comments that it gets, and especially don’t get the lack of power states the novel has. The novel is good, with depth and lore that keeps on giving. It goes beyond a normal “I want to be a Pokemon master” plot and weaves some political struggles and kingdom building elements. The romance trope is not particularly explored, however, that characteristic aligns with the MC’s nature and you still get enough satisfaction from the care and love he shows towards his family/pokemon/people. Overall, if you’re a Pokemon fan and want to have a good time, don’t miss out on the largest Poke-novel in the app!
Follows a cliched plot, but there are a lot of discrepancies other than that as well. It feels like the author has no sense of scale in regards to money and the world building. Lacks that depth that can suck the readers in.
Another good story with good potential suddenly turned trash by laziness and cliches. The story was good at first and had a decent amount of originality. However, as the chapters went on, the translation started becoming lazier and more like a Chinese translation. And becomes worse when it tries to force in Chinese cultivation into the world of pokemon, and does so rather badly. It's even more depressing when you read the notes from the author talking about how hard he worked on this and issues irl.
Good story. Different from many Pokemon stories I have seen so far. So please continue. Good story. Different from many Pokemon stories I have seen so far. So please continue.
Keep at it. Need more poke fanfics just don’t drop it in middle of the good parts and u got my support 💋💜
This author has taken an really interesting approach to the Pokémon world I really feel like the chapter's are gonna be amazing.✌️✌️✌️🔥 Good work dude.
This is one of the best Pokemon stories with regular updates... So keep updating keep updating keep updating keep updating keep updating keep updating
Una excelente historia en mi humilde opinión, todo bien redactado y nada forzado al menos yo no ví nada por el estilo, envió mis más sinceros agradecimientos al autor
It's pretty good to read from time to time...Only problem is that it have many grammatical and writing mistakes...Like sometimes, there are no use of comma, and sometimes the placement and use of words are not right... But it is good specially since there are many types of things that differentiate it from other pokemon ff and also has its own characteristics of things...The storyline for example, is really great and same with the pace of the story...My only problem is that the chapters are too short...I mean even if its in the 500+ chapters, i wouldn't be satisfied if each chapter are too short itself...Like, I would be satisfied and also always wait for the updates even if its 3 ch a week as long as its long...Like, 1000/1500/2000 word count
Tiết lộ SpoilerWho was the waifu of the series? Or is harem?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????
For a fanfic with such consistent updates and quality chapters, it's sad to see that this is quite low on the rankings which definitely deserves more..Bruhh let the author cook🔥 pretty sure he's planning something for them..
Bro the novel is great and I just can't get enough of it but I am not trying to criticise you I am just telling you to upload more chapters please. I am just in love with the novel. Please improve the speed at whuch you upload chapters like 12 chaps a week or atleast 10 a week please bro It's a heartfelt request. Love From Nepal
Hey Author I request you to please write a few more chapters every week because the novel is too good and I wanted to Ask what novels are your favourite pokemon novels please mentions. keep up the good work and good luck in your future endeavours
One of the best Pokemon based novel that I have read, everything about this novel is best I only have one issue please update more chapters
It's a regular adaptation, have more chinese fic than Pokemon traditional story, is good, but is heavy read 30 caps about Venu Family and Axel travel in this, MC is a Good Guy, and nothing more, i feel the history has potential but. Sometimes the point of being a "Realistic" story is lost by creating concepts, stories, etc., it is not at the level of a 12 year old on Wattpad, but I feel that there are things that can be developed or written better, I will still read this thing, but because I want to know who Brine is, anyway, I give it a 6/10, it's better than Master of Tactics in my opinion, but please, don't put so many things or references from chinese culture novels.
I think this is a mtl and he edited considering how it follows Chinese cliche like he joins families [clans] and catches bug Pokemons and how he use those 100 years 10000 years items and other things but author said its original and it's also similar to mtl how it drags story and chapters just for indigo league i read upto 350 yet he won 2 badges and buy 3 badges and also he follows a crack that leads to another dimension similar to Chinese cultivation novel where mc get powerup in those cracks [similar to solo leveling gates]
my experience as a reader:numbers: Just ignore them. They have never made sense, and there is no consistency he will say billion trillion million, honestly kind of funny.pokemon: cool, interesting choices. WAY TO MUCH TIME SPENT on pokemon and training them, there should be a focus more on the story. IMO the best part of this story as of was your charizard/darmanitian island: cool lore, fast progression, great gains.pokemon moves: your move lists are longer then your fights, and I don't think I've read many of your pokemons moves as it just doesn't matter. not sure if it's just for an inflated word count but I've never read more then one of the move sets that are a block long, they are also not in any order what so ever.worth a read but there is a lot of stuff that has you scratching your head, 3 out of 5
it was good at the start Kinda boring with The system system basically controlling his fate right now with punishment and the creator lol. then Everyone knowing he's a transmuter kinda boring. then story foreshadowing other People with system is trash. well others knowing his reincarnated then getting punished by a creator is trash plot then oak knowing trash again
Not going to lie... The beginning looks shit with cultivation core and stuff. I will try to push through 150+ chapters to see if it's good.