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I am going to give you a 5★ rating just because it's Itachi's ingenious mind inside of Yun Che's broken bofy
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So good so far. Also its pretty well written, the only thing is that Itachi kind of acts out of character when he's near Xiao Lingxi. Other than that I think it's perfect.
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I had to re read it again. I liked this fic even though it got some flaws... It this dead? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
In my opinion writing the character of itachi may be even harder than thinking of ideas for the progression of the fanfic. He is a complex character with many traits. For the first 20 chapters the author did a good job but in the 24th chapter it seemed to me that the author's patience finally worn out and he just said **** it🔥🔥 . Our pretty decent Itachi became too much original of a mc . Author Sama's ideas were actually quite good with ....optical nerve chakra connectivity and all .. The interaction between itachi and qingyue was well portrayed as well but it appeared too rushed when itachi left the xiao clan for training and that's where things when to rapid mode. Anyways I just want to say it was a nice start if author sama edits the latter chapters then I did give a rating of 4.5 although I am looking forward towards more updates if the author picks it up again. You have my support author sama 😁😁😁so please restart the good work and give us a long and finished atg fanfic for a change.
My guy are you dropping this? U have three fanfics and you haven't updated this in like forever. I think this is good so don't drop please. I enjoy this and ur Shinobi Life fanfic the most. F- u -c -k ur dxd one prioratize this and ur Naruto one!!!!!!
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BEST OF THE BEST!!!!! =O i never imagine that light novel with 30 chapter can be this good keep going i give you 5 STAR ,DON'T DROP IT,REALLY
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People are complaining about Itachi, this and that. Who cares? You can't expect a writer to perfectly analyze a character study and implement it inside his story. There is no freedom in that. The content inside is very good. Xia Qinqyue is a b*tch in here. I like it. There are to many cough* cough* simps who compliment her cock in every story. You must know that no matter how hot someone is. You will be immediately repulsed by their attitude, I don't know you can't like everyone. If they have their mouths shut maybe they would be an angel. Girls need their tongues cut out if they act like that, but then again. This story is good in the content. Although I don't care about Itachi the story was enough to lead me to read the rest of the story. I liked the tension, but I am not a fan of Xia Lingxi and the way people and the mahua project her. Sounds like a clingy depressed person who can't shut the f*ck up from the way people write her and it's annoying, but yes. The content is good I liked how the Mc is around Xia Qinqyue cold, but when helped her with her veins. I don't know the author doesn't seem to know how to treat her from the writing. Almost as if he wants to rape her, but doesn't know if it's sexual attraction or dislike. It's very weird from the interactions for both of them and comes out that way. He gave in the end and was nice to her. Holy. I am dead, but yeah. Xia Qinqyue could go get banged by another guy. I wouldn't care. She's never been on my radar of interesting ever since I began the novel, but a good story, but btw. Itachi is okay, but you should have gone your own Oc. A lot more creative progress. Being a character feels like a stunted writers' down the road. I recommend just write what makes you excited in the situations to make it not boring.
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Siendo una combinaciones 3 personalidades e itachi como dominante sin dejarse casi influenciar por los otros 2 está muy buena. Espero que se consigan ropa de su mundo y deje la que tiene actualmente. También espero que entrene todas y cada uno de los elementos incluyendo el yin, yan, tiempo y espacio para que tambien consiga las bolas de la verdad
The story is not bad sure it's a bit cut and paste but still I'm currently enjoying it so far you have no complaints from me I really hope you don't drop this story author.
More bs for itachi will always be welcome.. Like his sharingan actually enable him to learn the god level cultivation and he could open all his profound entrance. Open up his grandpa and little aunt too.. Give him all the bs stuff from narutoverse...
I like this story. I don't see the MC as Itachi I see him as a combination of 3 personalities Itachi, Yun Che as Xiao Che with Itachi being the dominant one. If it's just Itachi he won't have that much of physical relationship with little aunt and if it's just Yun Che well he's hella perv. So I would recommend going into this Story as OC MC 3 persons knowledge and emotions.
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So I'm giving out my honest opinion here. If anyone here wants a good fic this ain't for you. The author was lazy and pretty much copy and pasted like 70 to 80 percent of the chapters from the original. It says Itachi but freak the mc probably isn't since the author sucks at writing or portraying characters. There are also tons of plot holes and to be straight foward this will probably be C-R-A-P since the author is only using it to get rid of his writers block on his other fanfic.
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I am going to give you a 5★ rating just because it's Itachi's ingenious mind inside of Yun Che's broken bofy
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So good so far. Also its pretty well written, the only thing is that Itachi kind of acts out of character when he's near Xiao Lingxi. Other than that I think it's perfect.
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I had to re read it again. I liked this fic even though it got some flaws... It this dead? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
In my opinion writing the character of itachi may be even harder than thinking of ideas for the progression of the fanfic. He is a complex character with many traits. For the first 20 chapters the author did a good job but in the 24th chapter it seemed to me that the author's patience finally worn out and he just said **** it🔥🔥 . Our pretty decent Itachi became too much original of a mc . Author Sama's ideas were actually quite good with ....optical nerve chakra connectivity and all .. The interaction between itachi and qingyue was well portrayed as well but it appeared too rushed when itachi left the xiao clan for training and that's where things when to rapid mode. Anyways I just want to say it was a nice start if author sama edits the latter chapters then I did give a rating of 4.5 although I am looking forward towards more updates if the author picks it up again. You have my support author sama 😁😁😁so please restart the good work and give us a long and finished atg fanfic for a change.
My guy are you dropping this? U have three fanfics and you haven't updated this in like forever. I think this is good so don't drop please. I enjoy this and ur Shinobi Life fanfic the most. F- u -c -k ur dxd one prioratize this and ur Naruto one!!!!!!
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BEST OF THE BEST!!!!! =O i never imagine that light novel with 30 chapter can be this good keep going i give you 5 STAR ,DON'T DROP IT,REALLY
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People are complaining about Itachi, this and that. Who cares? You can't expect a writer to perfectly analyze a character study and implement it inside his story. There is no freedom in that. The content inside is very good. Xia Qinqyue is a b*tch in here. I like it. There are to many cough* cough* simps who compliment her cock in every story. You must know that no matter how hot someone is. You will be immediately repulsed by their attitude, I don't know you can't like everyone. If they have their mouths shut maybe they would be an angel. Girls need their tongues cut out if they act like that, but then again. This story is good in the content. Although I don't care about Itachi the story was enough to lead me to read the rest of the story. I liked the tension, but I am not a fan of Xia Lingxi and the way people and the mahua project her. Sounds like a clingy depressed person who can't shut the f*ck up from the way people write her and it's annoying, but yes. The content is good I liked how the Mc is around Xia Qinqyue cold, but when helped her with her veins. I don't know the author doesn't seem to know how to treat her from the writing. Almost as if he wants to rape her, but doesn't know if it's sexual attraction or dislike. It's very weird from the interactions for both of them and comes out that way. He gave in the end and was nice to her. Holy. I am dead, but yeah. Xia Qinqyue could go get banged by another guy. I wouldn't care. She's never been on my radar of interesting ever since I began the novel, but a good story, but btw. Itachi is okay, but you should have gone your own Oc. A lot more creative progress. Being a character feels like a stunted writers' down the road. I recommend just write what makes you excited in the situations to make it not boring.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Siendo una combinaciones 3 personalidades e itachi como dominante sin dejarse casi influenciar por los otros 2 está muy buena. Espero que se consigan ropa de su mundo y deje la que tiene actualmente. También espero que entrene todas y cada uno de los elementos incluyendo el yin, yan, tiempo y espacio para que tambien consiga las bolas de la verdad
The story is not bad sure it's a bit cut and paste but still I'm currently enjoying it so far you have no complaints from me I really hope you don't drop this story author.
More bs for itachi will always be welcome.. Like his sharingan actually enable him to learn the god level cultivation and he could open all his profound entrance. Open up his grandpa and little aunt too.. Give him all the bs stuff from narutoverse...
I like this story. I don't see the MC as Itachi I see him as a combination of 3 personalities Itachi, Yun Che as Xiao Che with Itachi being the dominant one. If it's just Itachi he won't have that much of physical relationship with little aunt and if it's just Yun Che well he's hella perv. So I would recommend going into this Story as OC MC 3 persons knowledge and emotions.
Hey Bro UR work is ok jst keep writing and update daily Stay safe frm COVID <-_-> clnqdiavnpsenk osnvk efdongvowpndoaoconvaondonvonosnxovn
So I'm giving out my honest opinion here. If anyone here wants a good fic this ain't for you. The author was lazy and pretty much copy and pasted like 70 to 80 percent of the chapters from the original. It says Itachi but freak the mc probably isn't since the author sucks at writing or portraying characters. There are also tons of plot holes and to be straight foward this will probably be C-R-A-P since the author is only using it to get rid of his writers block on his other fanfic.