The chamber was as vast as two football fields, an impressive feat that seemed impossible to replicate in contemporary Earth, especially within such a desolate and freezing mountain. Apart from the entrance Henry had used, there were two other access tunnels, each marked with inscriptions on the rocky walls above. Although partially hidden beneath a thin layer of ice, Henry could still make out the words: 'Library,' 'King's Path,' and 'Frozen Forest,' with the last one being the direction he had come from.
Henry slightly surveyed the chamber and said – "Let's go" - taking cautious steps forward to avoid triggering any potential traps. Leier followed right behind, mirroring his every move to avoid mishaps. She didn't want to put the king in danger.
Hey guys! How are you doing?
In these last few days, I have been revising and editing a few previous chapters, which means that some changes have occurred. As of right now, I will list the two most important ones below:
First: I felt that the division of Stages in this world was too limited. Because of that, I have decided to change the cap before 'Transcendent' to Nine Levels, with each breakthrough occurring between three stages. In this case, from the first to the third, they are normal soldiers; from the fourth to the sixth are great warriors who can manipulate their mana outside of their bodies, and from the seventh to the ninth, it's the Great Masters stage, which is currently mysterious to those in Stahl's territory.
Second: This is also a major change in the story. I have thought that it was too confusing (for you and for me) to mix the Breathing Techniques with the attacks. Because of that, I have decided to separate them. There will be a Breathing Technique responsible for absorbing and transforming Mana, opening certain Mana Circuits and strengthening the user's body. Then, there will be Battle Manuals, which can work alongside the Manuals for the best effects, guiding the Mana from the heart to display attacking and defense techniques. Although these manuals can still be used with other Breathing Techniques, the user's will face rebounding effects.
These were the two greatest changes in this novel based on the current pace edition. If any significant editing has been done, I will come back to explain in further chapters.
Thank you a lot for reading this novel! Give me your feedback on the changes.