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Bro this work is really good and all but it is really disturbing that you didn't uploaded in like a year so can you pls tell me if you dropped or if you still plan on uploading more chaps
Draft the letter I received from the other side of the road and I was wondering if you are still interested in the position and would like to know if you have any questions please feel free to contact
This is a story about a simp who goes around doing things for girls he finds attractive and his plot armor making anything and everything convenient to his need. The MC is very idiotic with his decisions and barely does anything to warrant the power he holds in his hands, I'd be surprised if he spent any time training his fighting techniques and weapons to improve his prowess instead of idiotically brute forcing everything through and going head-on into dangers without any knowledge about the situation he's in right now and thinking for a second about the consequences of his actions.
Penulis ini adalah cerita yang sangat bagus pertahankan tapi bisakah kau mengupdate lagi karena sudah 3 bulan kau tidak up kumohon😭😭😭 penulis..............................................
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Sigh, okay. Just a wishfufilment story with a lot cringe. And most unlikely mc out of there... I honestly don't know how to give it a score because 3 star it's still too much objectively speaking. And I tried to get in here without using my brain, but this mc is such a bitch. He alone could turn people from novel, that how op he is. Either way, synopsis first chapters of warning and rape, can give you a very unpleasant picture, but don't worry. Mc is a bitch that would never do something so vile.
Thankyouuuu , this is the best another 18+ novell Thankyouuuu , this is the best another 18+ novell Thankyouuuu , this is the best another 18+ novell Thankyouuuu , this is the best another 18+ novell Thankyouuuu , this is the best another 18+ novell
dude u fuucking great.... but change the title of ff then u will get many reader's bro. your work is great, it is not appreciated enough because .. of this title. many reader's will ignore this if not for your many chapters.. anyway great work.. continue to pump chappie
Writing Quality - 3 Story Development - 1 Character Design - 1 Updating Stability - 5 World Background - 3
came here for smut,stayed here for the amazing story👍👍👍give it a chance and you will not regret it.I hardly if ever give reviews and this story just struck me.
Started reading and going to catch up with the author so there it goes........................................................................
This is a review, i have not read it but i do sure want to say something random for once in a review section because i have nothing else to do here.
Bastard if dare drop this I'll pray to all the GODS OLD AND NEW THAT YOU WILL BE FCKED BY SOME UGLY ASS MIL TAN YA HEAR ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am the owner of my weapon my weapon is my everything... I have ripped over a thousand hymens, Have withstood pleasure ripping many hymens... Yet, I never got bored, because they're too tight! So, as I pray...Unlimited Hymen Works!
Don't you love when a novel comes out of nowhere and is great? Those are just my thoughts with this novel, you don't have to take it seriously, it's just an MC trip to get Waifus.
good very good, I have fun with each chapter and with the protagonist I'm not a fan of yun che and I like how your story was 10/10 Nice job
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Don't drop or thirty men will gangbang you. Anyway it's pretty good should give it a try.
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Bro this work is really good and all but it is really disturbing that you didn't uploaded in like a year so can you pls tell me if you dropped or if you still plan on uploading more chaps
Draft the letter I received from the other side of the road and I was wondering if you are still interested in the position and would like to know if you have any questions please feel free to contact
This is a story about a simp who goes around doing things for girls he finds attractive and his plot armor making anything and everything convenient to his need. The MC is very idiotic with his decisions and barely does anything to warrant the power he holds in his hands, I'd be surprised if he spent any time training his fighting techniques and weapons to improve his prowess instead of idiotically brute forcing everything through and going head-on into dangers without any knowledge about the situation he's in right now and thinking for a second about the consequences of his actions.
Penulis ini adalah cerita yang sangat bagus pertahankan tapi bisakah kau mengupdate lagi karena sudah 3 bulan kau tidak up kumohon😭😭😭 penulis..............................................
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Great history🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪💟🍪💟🍪💟🍪🍪🍪🍪💟🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪💟💟👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👍🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪😵😵🍪😵💗😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😍😍😁😁😁😁😁😍😍😍😁😁😁😁😁
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Sigh, okay. Just a wishfufilment story with a lot cringe. And most unlikely mc out of there... I honestly don't know how to give it a score because 3 star it's still too much objectively speaking. And I tried to get in here without using my brain, but this mc is such a bitch. He alone could turn people from novel, that how op he is. Either way, synopsis first chapters of warning and rape, can give you a very unpleasant picture, but don't worry. Mc is a bitch that would never do something so vile.
Thankyouuuu , this is the best another 18+ novell Thankyouuuu , this is the best another 18+ novell Thankyouuuu , this is the best another 18+ novell Thankyouuuu , this is the best another 18+ novell Thankyouuuu , this is the best another 18+ novell
dude u fuucking great.... but change the title of ff then u will get many reader's bro. your work is great, it is not appreciated enough because .. of this title. many reader's will ignore this if not for your many chapters.. anyway great work.. continue to pump chappie
Writing Quality - 3 Story Development - 1 Character Design - 1 Updating Stability - 5 World Background - 3
came here for smut,stayed here for the amazing story👍👍👍give it a chance and you will not regret it.I hardly if ever give reviews and this story just struck me.
Started reading and going to catch up with the author so there it goes........................................................................
This is a review, i have not read it but i do sure want to say something random for once in a review section because i have nothing else to do here.
Bastard if dare drop this I'll pray to all the GODS OLD AND NEW THAT YOU WILL BE FCKED BY SOME UGLY ASS MIL TAN YA HEAR ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am the owner of my weapon my weapon is my everything... I have ripped over a thousand hymens, Have withstood pleasure ripping many hymens... Yet, I never got bored, because they're too tight! So, as I pray...Unlimited Hymen Works!
Don't you love when a novel comes out of nowhere and is great? Those are just my thoughts with this novel, you don't have to take it seriously, it's just an MC trip to get Waifus.
good very good, I have fun with each chapter and with the protagonist I'm not a fan of yun che and I like how your story was 10/10 Nice job
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Don't drop or thirty men will gangbang you. Anyway it's pretty good should give it a try.
Disgusting trash n t r novel of a cu ck author >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>